Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and concise: answer the question directly with a topic sentence, avoid repetition and small grammar errors, and use correct time expressions. Include one linking phrase and one specific detail. Also keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot because I don't own a car. Usually I walk to school or to nearby shops, and each trip takes about 15 to 20 minutes. Because the routes are short, walking is my main way to commute every day.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific detail with a linking word. Correct past tense mistakes and avoid fillers. Keep it natural and concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I went outside almost every day when I was a child. For example, I often walked to the park with my friends to play games, so we spent most afternoons outdoors.

Sugestão: Organize the answer: give one main reason, support it with a specific detail and use linking words. Fix grammar (it/they, verb forms) and avoid unclear phrases. Limit to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: People like to walk in parks mainly because the air is fresher and it feels relaxing. Moreover, walking in a park is a simple form of exercise, so it helps improve fitness even if you only have a short time.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a conditional topic sentence, then give a specific reason using correct grammar. Use a linking word like 'because' or 'so' and avoid redundant phrases.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in a national park because the scenery and fresh air would help me relax and improve my fitness.

Sugestão: Use past tense for 'lately' and be specific about a recent time. Remove fillers and fix grammar (people, feel more fresh). Use one linking word and a concrete example of when you went and what you felt.

Exemplo: Lately I went for a walk in a small city park last weekend because it was quiet and had fewer people. The fresh air and calm atmosphere helped me relax after a busy week.

× Yes, I work a lot every day because I don't have a car.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot every day because I don't have a car.

The examiner asked about walking frequency; the student's reply used 'work' which is semantically wrong. This is not a grammatical tense error but a lexical choice. Replace 'work' with 'walk' to match the question and present simple habitual use ('I walk').

× I usually go to school or school or a nearby shops and it takes me about 20 or 15 minutes each way.

✓ I usually walk to school or to a nearby shop and it takes me about 15 or 20 minutes each way.

Errors: duplicated phrase 'school or school', incorrect article/number 'a nearby shops' (singular/plural mismatch). Use singular 'a nearby shop' or plural 'nearby shops' with no 'a'. Also standardize time order '15 or 20 minutes'. Added 'walk to' for clarity. Use present simple for habitual action.

× Uh, yes, I went outside almost every day when I was a child.

✓ Uh, yes, I went outside almost every day when I was a child.

Sentence is grammatically correct: past simple 'went' appropriately describes habitual past action. No change necessary.

× Umm, I used to go for walks and play with my friends and we spend most of time outdoors.

✓ Umm, I used to go for walks and play with my friends and we spent most of our time outdoors.

Mix of past habitual and present simple: 'used to' requires past context so 'spend' should be past 'spent'. Also missing possessive 'our' before 'time'. Use past simple for consistency.

× I think people like to walk in paths because in there is very fresh air and it's really good for your health and it's look like a sport.

✓ I think people like to walk on paths because there is very fresh air, it's really good for your health, and it looks like a sport.

Use 'on paths' not 'in paths'. Remove unnecessary 'in' before 'there'. Fix subject-verb agreement 'it looks' (not 'it's look like'). Add commas for clarity.

× If you don't have a lot of time, you just K walk in parks and it's can help you with your health.

✓ If you don't have a lot of time, you can just walk in parks and it can help your health.

Incorrect insertion 'K' and wrong modal combination 'it's can'. Use modal 'can' before verb: 'you can just walk'. Remove 'it' before 'can' when referring generally: 'it can help your health' is acceptable; simplified to 'help your health'.

× I would like to take a long walk if I had the chance in parks because they are fresh air and it's really can improve my health.

✓ I would like to take a long walk in a park if I had the chance because the air there is fresh and it can really improve my health.

Place 'if I had the chance' after main clause for natural order. Use 'in a park' or 'in parks' with article; 'they are fresh air' is ungrammatical — 'the air there is fresh'. Fix modal placement: 'it can really improve' not 'it's really can'.

× I prefer go forward lately in parks because umm they don't have many peoples and it's and fresh feel more clearly than with their and it's helped me relax more.

✓ Lately I prefer walking in parks because they don't have many people and the fresh air feels clearer than in the city, and it helps me relax more.

'Prefer' with a verb should be followed by gerund: 'prefer walking' or 'prefer to walk'. 'Go forward' is unnatural here. 'Peoples' is incorrect plural; use 'people'. 'It's and fresh feel more clearly' is ungrammatical — correct to 'the fresh air feels clearer'. 'Their' misuse replaced with 'in the city' for clarity. Maintain present simple 'helps' for current preference; 'it's helped' suggests past effect — use present for ongoing habit.