Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, use correct time expressions and avoid unclear numbers. Keep to 2–3 supporting sentences with linking words (e.g., "however", "because"). Correct grammar (verb tenses, articles) and reduce pauses/fillers like "uh".

Exemplo: Yes, I walk quite a lot. When I am free, I usually walk for about 30 minutes a day; however, when I am busy with work I walk much less because I feel tired. At school I used to walk for around two hours every day, which kept me active.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use past tense consistently. Provide a clear topic sentence then one or two specific supporting details (who, where, how often) and use linking words like "usually" or "often". Fix grammar errors ("when I was outside", "I used to go").

Exemplo: Yes, I often went for walks when I was a child. I usually walked with my friends to the nearby park after school, and on average we spent about two hours playing and walking every day.

Sugestão: Give a clear reason first and then support with specific details and examples. Use plural/singular correctly and complete your sentences. Use linking words such as "because" and "for example" to make ideas coherent. Expand slightly to avoid abrupt ending.

Exemplo: People like to walk in parks because parks offer open, peaceful spaces away from traffic. For example, parks usually have wide paths, greenery and fewer crowds, which makes walking relaxing and healthier.

Sugestão: Be clear and realistic: name the place and explain reasons briefly. Use accurate time expressions (minutes/hours) and avoid unrealistic durations. Structure: one topic sentence, one or two supporting reasons with linking words like "because" or "so". Correct grammar and word choice ("one-way" not "one side").

Exemplo: I would like to walk along Stanley Park in Vancouver because it has long, scenic trails by the water. A typical loop takes about 30 to 40 minutes one way, and walking there helps me relax and reduce stress.

Sugestão: Answer in the past tense for a recent activity and be specific about the place and time. Keep it concise: state where you went, how long it takes, and one reason. Avoid fillers and repetition. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Lately I went for a walk at a nearby lake that is about a five-minute walk from my home. I often choose it because it is close and I can get home quickly if the weather changes.

× It's uh, dependent on my work schedule.

✓ It depends on my work schedule.

The original uses 'It's dependent' which is awkward for habitual situations; use simple present 'depends' to describe a general truth or routine. Use subject-verb agreement: 'It depends'.

× If I'm free and doing nothing, I will go for work at least 330 minutes and if I'm working I will get tired and I will do less work at that time.

✓ If I'm free and not doing anything, I will go for a walk for at least 30 minutes, and if I'm working I get tired and do less walking then.

Errors: 'doing nothing' fine but 'go for work' is incorrect collocation — should be 'go for a walk'. '330 minutes' is likely incorrect number; changed to '30 minutes'. Using 'will' in both clauses is unnecessary; in the second clause 'get tired' and 'do less' in present simple better express habitual result. Also simplify repetition of 'I will'.

× But when I was at the school time, I do 2 hours every day.

✓ But when I was at school, I did two hours every day.

The time clause refers to the past ('when I was at school') so the verb must be past tense: 'did' instead of 'do'. Remove unnecessary 'the' in 'at school' and write numbers in words for clarity.

× Yes, I used to go outside to have a walk when I outside every day.

✓ Yes, I used to go outside for a walk every day.

Combine 'used to' (past habit) with base form; 'to have a walk' is wordy — 'for a walk' is natural. 'when I outside' is ungrammatical; remove it. Keep past habitual meaning.

× Most of the time I go with my friends to play and then in school it takes almost two hours or more in an average day.

✓ Most of the time I went with my friends to play, and at school we spent almost two hours or more on an average day.

Context is past ('when you were a child'), so verbs should be past: 'went' and 'spent'. 'In school it takes' is unnatural; use 'at school we spent' and 'on an average day' for clarity.

× In my opinion, park are the only free space for walking city area.

✓ In my opinion, parks are the only free spaces for walking in the city area.

Pluralize 'park' to 'parks' to match 'are'. Add plural 'spaces' to agree with plural subject. Insert preposition 'in' before 'the city area' and keep definite article 'the' with 'city area'.

× There are less crowd, there are opening space and.

✓ There is less crowding, and there are open spaces.

'Less' with countable noun 'crowd' is incorrect; use 'less crowding' (uncountable) or 'fewer people'. 'Opening space' is wrong collocation; 'open spaces' is correct plural form. Fix sentence fragment by completing thought.

× In my mind, there's one place in the park in Vancouver city and I'll go for a long park.

✓ In my mind, there's one place in a park in Vancouver where I'd like to go for a long walk.

Use 'a park' rather than 'the park' unless specific; 'Vancouver city' is unnatural — use 'in Vancouver'. 'Go for a long park' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'go for a long walk'. Modal 'I'd like' fits hypothetical preference.

× I think it has long distance.

✓ I think it is a long route.

'Has long distance' is ungrammatical; use 'is a long route' or 'covers a long distance'. Choose natural collocation.

× It takes appropriately 30 to 40 hours for one side and that helped me to reduce my stress, so I'll go for that.

✓ It takes approximately 30 to 40 minutes one way, and that helps me reduce my stress, so I go there.

'30 to 40 hours' is unrealistic; likely 'minutes'. Use 'one way' for direction. Match tense: if speaking about habitual effect use present 'helps' not past 'helped'. 'I'll go for that' is awkward; 'I go there' or 'I would go there' depending on context. Chose present habitual phrasing.

× Mostly I go for workli work lately in a lake which is just five minute walking distance beside my home from my home.

✓ Lately I mostly go for walks at a lake which is just a five-minute walk from my home.

'Workli work' is garbled — correct to 'go for walks'. Use 'at a lake' and 'a five-minute walk from my home' for natural phrasing and correct adjective order ('five-minute' as compound modifier). Use present perfect/present simple 'lately I mostly go' is acceptable.

× Uh, that I don't need to worry for rain or any other causes because I get home if anything happens.

✓ I don't need to worry about rain or other things because I can get home if anything happens.

Use 'worry about' not 'worry for'. 'Any other causes' is unnatural; use 'other things' or 'other issues'. 'I get home if anything happens' needs modal 'can' to indicate ability to get home. Reorder for natural English.