Keys— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, and correct phrasing (e.g., "which belongs to my apartment"). Use one or two supporting details and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: No, I don't carry many keys. I only have one key, which belongs to my apartment, so I usually keep it in my bag for convenience.

Sugestão: Correct vocabulary and tense mistakes and give a short specific example if possible. Replace "kids" with "keys", use present perfect for experience ("I have never lost my keys"), and remove fillers. Add a brief reason why you haven't lost them.

Exemplo: I have never lost my keys because I always keep them in a zipped pocket of my bag and make a quick habit of checking for them before leaving a place.

Sugestão: Use correct verb forms and clearer linking words. Give a concise explanation of your routine using present simple for habitual actions and a linking phrase to connect ideas (e.g., "because").

Exemplo: No, I don't forget my keys often because I always keep them in the same pocket of my bag and check them before I leave for home.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity, use linking words, and offer a short balanced opinion. Correct phrasing ("if you lose your keys" and "find another copy with your neighbour"). You could also mention a precaution (e.g., trustworthiness).

Exemplo: Yes, I think it's a good idea to leave a spare key with a trusted neighbour because if you lose your keys you won't panic; however, make sure the neighbour is reliable and notify them in advance.

× I have only one key, uh, which is belong to my house apartment.

✓ I have only one key, which belongs to my apartment.

Use 'belong to' requires correct verb form and preposition. The phrase 'belong to my house apartment' is incorrect and redundant. Use 'belongs to' (third person singular) and simplify to 'my apartment'. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I never lost my kids because I am responsible and I never, umm, take my keys from my bag.

✓ I have never lost my keys because I am responsible and I never take my keys out of my bag.

The speaker refers to past experience with present relevance, so present perfect 'have never lost' is appropriate. 'kids' is a typo for 'keys' and 'take my keys from my bag' should be 'take my keys out of my bag' to correctly express removing items from a bag. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Uh, it's always stay in my bag.

✓ They always stay in my bag.

Subject-pronoun agreement and article: 'it' incorrectly refers to plural 'keys'; use 'they'. Also 'always stay' is fine with plural subject. Using correct pronoun fixes reference error. Grammar problem type ID: 17

× No, I don't forget my keys frequently. Uh, I always kept them in my bag and when I went to house I take them.

✓ No, I don't often forget my keys. I always keep them in my bag and when I go home I take them.

Maintain present simple for habitual actions: 'don't forget', 'always keep', 'when I go home I take them'. 'kept' and 'went' are past forms and inconsistent. Use 'home' rather than 'to house'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× In my opinion, yes, this is a beneficial idea for everyone because when you lost your keys, uh, you don't need to panic. And are you find the other copy in your neighbor.

✓ In my opinion, yes, this is a good idea for everyone because if you lose your keys, you don't need to panic and you can find the spare copy with your neighbor.

Use conditional 'if you lose' rather than past 'when you lost' for general advice. 'find the other copy in your neighbor' is wrong: use 'find the spare copy with your neighbor'. Also use 'can' to show ability. Prepositions and verb forms fixed. Grammar problem type ID: 11