Keys— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition (e.g., "a bunch of keys" and listing can be shorter), and correct verb forms and articles. Use one or two supporting details with a linking word. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually carry several keys — for my car, house and office. Because I tend to forget things, I keep them all in a single locket so they are easier to manage.

Sugestão: Correct tense and article usage, reduce hesitation words, and make the sequence of events clearer. Use linking words (e.g., "last month" and "as a result") and be specific about consequences. Keep to 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I have. Last month I lost my work key, which was important. As a result, my employer had to change the locks for almost every room, so I felt really embarrassed.

Sugestão: Make sentences grammatically correct and clearer: give a general frequency statement then a brief specific example. Remove filler words and fix phrasing (e.g., "lock myself out"). Use past simple for the example and link it to frequency with "for example" or "for instance."

Exemplo: Yes, I often forget my keys and sometimes lock myself out — about once a week. For example, last Saturday after my shift I discovered I had lost my key at work and couldn't get into my flat.

Sugestão: Provide a clear opinion first, then justify it with one or two reasons. Use conditional structure correctly and avoid vague phrases. Be specific about when it would be acceptable and mention a possible risk or alternative.

Exemplo: Yes, it can be a good idea if you trust your neighbour because they can help in emergencies. However, only leave keys with someone reliable, or consider a secure key box as an alternative.

× Kind of, yes. I always bring a bunch of keys with me. My car keys, house keys and my work keys. So usually I don't love to have so many keys because I am a person who forgets the things often.

✓ Kind of, yes. I always bring a bunch of keys with me: my car keys, house keys, and work keys. Usually I don't like having so many keys because I am a person who often forgets things.

Errors: incorrect verb form and word choice. 'I don't love to have' is unnatural; use 'I don't like having' (verb + -ing after 'like' for preferences). 'who forgets the things often' has wrong article and adverb placement; use 'often forgets things'. Suggestion: use natural collocations (like + gerund) and place adverbs before the main verb or after subject (I often forget things).

× So I just have one beautiful Locket. I put all the keys into it.

✓ So I just have one beautiful locket. I put all the keys in it.

Errors: preposition and capitalization. 'into it' is awkward for containing items; use 'in it'. 'Locket' should not be capitalized. Suggestion: use 'put X in Y' for placing items inside an object and use lowercase for common nouns.

× I'm a kind of person who tend to forget things so often, uh, so easily.

✓ I'm the kind of person who tends to forget things very often, so easily.

Errors: determiners and subject-verb agreement with relative clause. Use 'the kind of person' not 'a kind of person' when describing oneself. 'who tend' must be 'who tends' because the relative pronoun refers to 'person' (singular). 'so often, so easily' is redundant; 'very often' or 'so easily' works. Suggestion: use 'the kind of person who tends to...' and correct verb agreement.

× So yes, I remember like, uh, last month I've lost my work key that was very precious to me as well.

✓ So yes, I remember that last month I lost my work key, which was very precious to me.

Errors: incorrect present perfect with time expression and relative clause. Use simple past 'I lost' with a specific past time 'last month' rather than present perfect. 'that was' should be 'which was' for non-restrictive clause; include 'that'/'which' and punctuation. Suggestion: use simple past for completed actions with definite time expressions and use commas with non-defining clauses.

× So because of my small mistake, they have to change the locks of the almost every room and they change the key.

✓ So because of my small mistake, they had to change the locks of almost every room and they changed the keys.

Errors: tense and article usage and plural agreement. Context is past, so use past 'had to' and 'changed'. 'the almost every room' is incorrect; use 'almost every room' without 'the'. 'key' should be plural 'keys' when referring to multiple locks. Suggestion: match past tense throughout and ensure noun number matches context.

× In my life, that's the story of I think every week when I lock out myself outside, uh, as far as I remember, uh, last Saturday when I was done from my shift, I somehow lose my key at the work when I just came back home and I realized that I didn't have key with me that was.

✓ This happens about once a week: I often lock myself out. As far as I remember, last Saturday, after my shift, I somehow lost my key at work. When I got home, I realized I didn't have my key with me.

Errors: run-on sentence, wrong verb tenses, incorrect reflexive pronoun placement, and missing articles. 'lock out myself outside' should be 'lock myself out' (correct reflexive and word order). 'I was done from my shift' should be 'after my shift' or 'when my shift ended'. Use past tense 'lost' for the specific event. 'at the work' should be 'at work'. 'didn't have key' needs possessive and article: 'my key' or 'a key'. Suggestion: break into shorter sentences, use correct reflexive structure 'lock myself out', use past tense for finished events, and include appropriate articles and possessives.

× Kind of, yeah. If you were in trust here, immediate next door people, then it would be fine if you know them, uh.

✓ Kind of, yeah. If you trust the people who live next door, then it would be fine if you know them well.

Errors: incorrect preposition and awkward phrasing. 'in trust here, immediate next door people' is ungrammatical. Use 'trust the people who live next door' or 'trust your immediate neighbors'. Also 'if you know them' is fine but add 'well' for clarity. Suggestion: use standard collocations: 'trust someone', 'live next door', 'immediate neighbors'.