Keys— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail. Avoid minor grammatical errors (use possessive forms like "my home's" or simply "my house"). Use linking words if adding details.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually carry several keys. For example, I always have my house key, my bedroom key and my bike key because I ride my bike to school.

Sugestão: Organize the story more clearly with a topic sentence and chronological supporting details. Reduce hesitations and filler words (uh, and). Provide one or two specific details and a short conclusion about how you felt or what you did.

Exemplo: Yes, I lost a locker key once at boarding school. I put the key in my pocket before playing football, but it disappeared during the game, so I felt very disappointed and had to report it to my teacher.

Sugestão: Make the answer grammatically complete and logical. Begin with a clear statement about frequency (e.g. rarely, sometimes), then give a specific example with past tense and a short result. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: Not often, but it happened once. I went out to do homework and when I returned I found my house key was missing, so I called my mother and she let me in from outside.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with reasons and one condition. Use correct vocabulary (key, not kid) and concise phrasing. Use linking words like 'because' or 'if' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I think it can be a good idea if you trust your neighbour. If you have a friendly relationship, leaving a spare key with them is convenient because they can help in an emergency.

× Yes, sure, because I have to ride a bike, so I need to get a key of my home and my room and also of my bike.

✓ Yes, sure, because I have to ride a bike, so I need to get keys for my house, my room, and my bike.

This sentence has issues with articles and plural nouns as well as prepositions, but according to the allowed list we correct the verb+ -ing only if applicable. The primary needed changes are: use plural 'keys' because multiple items are listed; use 'for' instead of 'of' to indicate purpose/possession; use 'house' instead of 'home' when referring to a physical building in this context. Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to multiple items and use 'for' to show what the keys are for.

× Yes, we, when we are boarding a school, we have lockers, uh, and they gave each of us a key. One day I was playing football and uh, uh, and, and I put the key in my pocket, but when I came back, uh, from the game, the key was gone. So I was very disappointed.

✓ Yes. When we were boarding school, we had lockers and they gave each of us a key. One day I was playing football and I put the key in my pocket, but when I came back from the game the key was gone, so I was very disappointed.

The response contains inconsistent tense use and unnecessary fillers. Use past tense consistently for past events: 'were boarding' (or better 'attending' boarding school) and 'had lockers'. Remove repeated fillers 'uh' and repeated conjunctions. Also remove the extra comma before 'from the game'. Suggestion: keep past tense throughout when narrating past events and edit out hesitations for clarity.

× Yes once I go outside for a homework and when I came back I I checked my pocket and that I don't have my home key so I called my mother and she asked that they all are outside the home so I was.

✓ Yes. Once I went out to do homework and when I came back I checked my pocket and I didn't have my house key, so I called my mother and she said they were all outside the house, so I was stuck.

Mixed tenses and incorrect verb forms are present. Use past tense 'went' and 'did' for the completed actions. Use 'didn't have' instead of 'I don't have' when referring to the past. Use 'said' instead of 'asked' if reporting what your mother told you. Use 'were' for plural 'they' in past. 'House' is more appropriate than 'home' here. Add a concluding state 'stuck' to complete the sentence. Suggestion: maintain past tense for past incidents, match verb forms to subjects, and complete the final clause.

× Usually just if you have a good relationship with your neighbor and you trust your neighbor that they don't do any mishap with you or they have a good relationship with you. So you can, uh, leave the kid without your neighbor.

✓ Usually, only if you have a good relationship with your neighbor and you trust them not to cause any problems. Then you can leave the key with your neighbor.

Multiple preposition and word-choice errors: 'without your neighbor' is wrong; use 'with your neighbor'. 'Do any mishap with you' is unnatural — use 'cause any problems'. 'Leave the kid' is a mistake for 'leave the key'. Also use 'them' as a gender-neutral pronoun. Suggestion: choose correct prepositions ('with' not 'without'), use natural collocations ('cause problems'), and ensure the intended noun ('key') is used.