Keys— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and clear: start with a simple topic sentence saying how many keys you carry, then give one or two specific details. Use correct nouns (e.g. "key" not "cave") and keep sentences short. Also correct basic grammar (present simple) and word choice.

Exemplo: I usually only carry one key with me. It unlocks both the front door and the gate, so I find it convenient to keep just that key in my pocket at all times.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a past simple statement about the event, then add one or two clear details (what happened, how you felt, what you did). Use correct verb forms and natural expressions ("I was shocked", "my dad helped").

Exemplo: Yes, I once lost my key card last year. I was very shocked and didn't know what to do, so I called my dad and he helped me sort it out by getting a replacement quickly.

Sugestão: Be specific about frequency and cause, use first person consistently, and avoid slang. Keep sentences concise and use linking words for clarity (because, so). Correct grammar: "I lock myself out", "my memory is bad".

Exemplo: Yes, I often forget my keys and sometimes lock myself out because my memory is quite poor. When that happens, I usually call a family member to let me in.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion first (yes or no) and then provide two concise reasons using linking words (because, since). Use correct expressions about trust and convenience and avoid filler words (uh).

Exemplo: No, I don't think it's a good idea to leave my keys with a neighbour because I don't fully trust them with access to my home and they may not be available when I need help. Instead, I prefer to give a spare to a close family member.

× Now I just bring on Tooth cave with me.

✓ Now I just bring a tooth key with me.

Original uses incorrect noun phrase 'Tooth cave' and preposition 'on'. This appears to be a word choice error rather than a true participle issue, but it fits the list as a present-participle/type form error because the verb/noun form is wrong. Correction replaces with 'a tooth key' (if student means a key for a place called 'Tooth' use 'the tooth key') and removes the incorrect preposition. Suggestion: use the correct noun for the object and the article 'a' for a single item.

× This is cave for house and cave for the door and I think it's a very important so I just keep in mind and I need it every time.

✓ This is a key for the house and for the door, and I think it is very important, so I always keep it in mind and need it every time.

Errors include missing articles ('a key'), wrong noun 'cave' instead of 'key', awkward adjective/adverb use and sentence structure. The correction adds articles, replaces incorrect words, and clarifies conjunctions. Suggestion: use 'a' before singular countable nouns and connect clauses with commas or conjunctions for clarity.

× Yes, I have ever lost my key of my card and this time I very shock and don't know to think what about and I call my dad.

✓ Yes, I have lost my card key before, and that time I was very shocked and did not know what to think, so I called my dad.

Original mixes present perfect 'have ever lost' incorrectly with past events and uses incorrect verb forms 'very shock', 'don't know to think'. Correction uses 'have lost... before' or simple past 'lost' depending on context, changes to past simple 'was shocked' and 'did not know', and corrects 'call' to past 'called'. Suggestion: use past simple for specific past events and match verb forms for tense consistency.

× My dad's resolved the workflow.

✓ My dad resolved the situation.

'My dad's resolved the workflow' mixes contraction and noun choice. 'Workflow' is wrong; 'resolved the situation' is natural. Also avoid unnecessary contraction 'dad's' here. Suggestion: use clear nouns and simple past for completed actions.

× Yes, I usually forget the key and lock yourself out because the memory is very bad.

✓ Yes, I usually forget my key and lock myself out because my memory is very bad.

The speaker shifts pronouns incorrectly from first person 'I' to second person 'yourself'. Correction restores first person reflexive 'myself' and possessive 'my memory'. Suggestion: maintain consistent pronouns matching the subject.

× I can forget Everything Everywhere and you know, I very hate my memory.

✓ I can forget everything everywhere, and, you know, I really hate my memory.

Capitalization and adverb use are incorrect: 'Everything Everywhere' should be lowercase and 'very hate' is ungrammatical in English. Use 'really hate' or 'strongly dislike'. Suggestion: use adverb 'really' to modify 'hate' and correct capitalization.

× Now I think it's bad idea because the neighbor can, uh, live in 24 hour in a day for you keep my key and I know I can, so the neighbor can't.

✓ Now I think it's a bad idea because the neighbor cannot be available 24 hours a day to keep my key, and I know I can, but the neighbor can't.

Multiple issues: missing article 'a', wrong verb 'live in 24 hour', incorrect preposition 'for you keep'. Correction uses '24 hours a day' (fixed plural and order), 'to keep my key' (infinitive), and clarifies contrast with 'but'. Suggestion: use '24 hours a day' and the infinitive after purpose expressions ('to keep').