Keys— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise, correct vocabulary and grammar, and give a clear reason. Avoid fillers and pronunciation mistakes (e.g. "kids" → "keys", "intelligence key" → "smart locks"). Use one topic sentence and one supporting detail with a linking phrase.

Exemplo: No, I don't. Most homes here have smart locks now, so people rarely carry many keys. For example, I only carry one spare key because my front door usually unlocks with my phone.

Sugestão: Structure your answer: start with a clear yes/no and then provide a specific past example using correct tense. Reduce fillers and ensure sentence accuracy ("I had to take my home key", "I forgot them because I was carrying too many books").

Exemplo: Yes. I lost my keys once when I was in middle school. I had to bring my house key every day because I came home first, but I sometimes forgot it when I was carrying too many books.

Sugestão: Use correct grammar and finish your idea. Start with a direct answer and then give a specific past incident and the preventive measure. Avoid repetition ("even if even if") and use linking words like "since then" or "so".

Exemplo: No, I don't. I only forgot my keys once as a child, so my mother hid a spare key near the door. Since then I haven't been locked out.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion and then qualify it with reasons and a brief condition. Improve grammar and word choice ("a neighbour" not "neighborkeep a key" -> "keeps a key"). Use linking words like "however" to mention risks.

Exemplo: Yes, I think it can be a good idea if the neighbour is trustworthy. It saves time when you forget your key; however, you should only do this with someone reliable to avoid security risks.

× No, I don't. I don't have this habit of bringing a lot of kids with me since, uh, nowadays almost every home, uh, is equipped with the intelligence key, so people do not to take their own keys.

✓ No, I don't. I don't have the habit of carrying a lot of keys with me since nowadays almost every home is equipped with smart locks, so people do not need to carry their own keys.

Errors: 'kids' is incorrect word choice for 'keys' (lexical error); 'have this habit of bringing a lot of' is awkward and should be 'have the habit of carrying a lot of keys'; 'intelligence key' is incorrect—use 'smart locks'; 'do not to take' is ungrammatical—should be 'do not need to carry'. Suggestion: choose correct nouns (keys), use natural collocations ('have the habit of', 'carry keys'), and use appropriate term 'smart locks'.

× Yes, of course I have lost my keys when I was in my middle school at that time, every day I have to uh take my home key because I always the first one who came back home.

✓ Yes, of course I lost my keys when I was in middle school. At that time I had to take my house key every day because I was always the first one to come back home.

Errors: mixed tense use ('have lost' with a specific past time should be simple past 'lost'); 'in my middle school' should be 'in middle school' or 'when I was in middle school'; 'have to' should be past 'had to'; 'I always the first one who came back' missing verb and wrong tense—use 'I was always the first one to come back'. Suggestion: use simple past for completed past events and ensure verbs and clauses agree in tense and structure.

× But sometimes due to too much books and other things I will forget.

✓ But sometimes, due to having too many books and other things, I would forget.

Errors: 'too much books' is wrong quantifier—use 'too many books'; 'I will forget' is future/modal misuse for habitual past—use 'I would forget' or 'I used to forget' to match context. Suggestion: use correct quantifier (many vs much) and match tense/aspect for habitual past actions.

× No I don't. I have just forgot the key ones when I was a child and since then my mother came out with a smart idea that she decided to put one key in the hidden corner by door so that even if even if.

✓ No, I don't. I only forgot the keys once when I was a child, and since then my mother came up with a smart idea: she decided to hide a key in a hidden corner by the door.

Errors: 'have just forgot' mixes present perfect with incorrect past participle—should be 'only forgot' or 'have only forgotten' (but simple past fits); 'the key ones' is unclear—use 'the keys once'; 'came out with' collocation is slightly off—use 'came up with'; 'by door' needs article: 'by the door'; sentence was unfinished ('so that even if even if') removed or completed. Suggestion: use correct past form 'forgot', correct collocations, and include necessary articles.

× Do you think it's a good idea to leave your keys with a neighbour?

✓ Do you think it's a good idea to leave your key with a neighbour?

Context: question addresses leaving 'your keys' generally; either 'your key' or 'your keys' can be correct. If referring to a single spare key, 'your key' is better. Suggestion: choose singular or plural consistently based on intended meaning.

× Yes I do if the neighbor is very kind and and willing to help.

✓ Yes, I do, if the neighbor is very kind and willing to help.

Errors: missing commas for clarity and repeated 'and'. Suggestion: add commas and remove duplicate word; modal 'do' is fine.

× It was a good idea since everyone would have forgot their own home key at that time.

✓ It was a good idea since everyone would forget their own house key at times.

Errors: 'would have forgot' is wrong perfect conditional and wrong past participle—should be 'would forget' or 'might forget'; 'home key' is unnatural—use 'house key' or 'house keys'; tense consistency: past 'was' with 'would forget' is acceptable. Suggestion: use correct verb form 'forgot' -> 'forgotten' if needed, but simpler 'would forget' is clearer.

× If a neighbor keep a key, you don't need to pay too much effort to do that.

✓ If a neighbor keeps a key, you don't need to put in much effort to get back in.

Errors: subject-verb agreement 'neighbor keep' should be 'neighbor keeps' (third person singular); 'pay too much effort' is unnatural—use 'put in much effort' or 'make much effort'; 'to do that' is vague—clarify purpose ('to get back in'). Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use natural verb phrases for effort and purpose.