Keys— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler phrases (e.g. "like", "I feel like") and correct plural/singular errors ("front door" not "front doors").

Exemplo: I usually carry only my main home keys. At my house we have three keys — for my room, the front door and the back door — but I always keep the front-door key with me because it’s the one I need most when I come and go at night.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct answer, then explain briefly with clear linking words. Use more natural vocabulary (e.g. "aware of where I put them") and correct collocations ("lose my keys" not "lost your keys" as tense fine though). Avoid repetition.

Exemplo: No, I haven’t lost my keys. I always put them in the same place and try to be careful, so I’m aware of where I leave them and rarely misplace them.

Sugestão: Use correct grammar ("my keys are"), a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid awkward phrases like "reaching out to the park" and ensure sentences are concise.

Exemplo: No, I don’t. My keys are always in a pocket of my bag, so even when I go out to the park I know where they are and I’ve never been locked out.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion (Yes/No/It depends) and then give a specific reason with an example. Improve grammar and phrasing ("it depends on how much you trust your neighbour" and "leave a spare key with a neighbour").

Exemplo: It depends on how much you trust them. In an emergency it can be sensible to leave a spare key with a reliable neighbour so friends or family can get in if you are delayed.

× At my home we have like 3 different keys like my room, the front door and back door and usually I always have the front doors with me because I feel like it.

✓ At my home we have three different keys: for my room, the front door, and the back door, and usually I always have the front door key with me because I feel like it.

Incorrect plural 'front doors' should be singular 'front door key' because you refer to one specific door and its key. Also clarified list and added 'key' to be explicit. Use of numerals changed to words for formal sentence.'

× It is necessary because we never know who will come to home first at night.

✓ It is necessary because we never know who will come home first at night.

The phrase 'come to home' is incorrect; correct verb + object is 'come home'. Tense 'will come' is acceptable for future uncertainty; removed unnecessary preposition.'

× Fortunately not.

✓ Fortunately, no.

Fragment 'Fortunately not' is informal and can be improved to 'Fortunately, no' to answer the question directly. This is punctuation/word choice rather than strict tense but improves clarity.'

× I always know the place where I put the key and I feel like I need to be conscious whenever I put my key, so I'm trying to be more aware of my key position.

✓ I always know the place where I put the key, and I feel like I need to be careful whenever I put my key, so I'm trying to be more aware of where I leave it.

'Be conscious whenever I put my key' is awkward; 'be careful' or 'be aware' is correct. 'Key position' is unnatural; use 'where I leave it'. Adjusted prepositions and phrasing for natural English.'

× Gratefully, no, my keys is always in a pocket in my bag so whenever I'm reaching out to the park I know my key is always there so I never have trouble locking me out outside of the house.

✓ Fortunately, no. My keys are always in a pocket in my bag, so whenever I go out to the park I know my keys are there and I never have trouble locking myself out of the house.

Multiple errors: 'keys is' should be 'keys are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Gratefully' is misused; 'Fortunately' is correct. 'Reaching out to the park' is wrong; use 'go out to the park.' 'Locking me out' should be 'locking myself out.' Prepositions corrected to 'out of the house.' Also made sentence structure clearer.'

× Depends how much you can trust your neighbor that's come first.

✓ It depends on how much you can trust the neighbor who comes first.

Sentence lacks subject 'It' and uses incorrect relative clause 'that's come first'; use 'who comes first' for people and present simple to indicate order. Also add preposition 'on' after 'depends.' 'Neighbor' articles adjusted.'

× But for some emergency situations, for instance, you only have one key left and you know there are other people are coming back to house, I think it's a wise position to put your key on the neighbors.

✓ But in some emergency situations, for instance, if you only have one key left and you know other people are coming back to the house, I think it's wise to leave your key with a neighbor.

Several preposition and phrasing errors: use 'in some emergency situations' and conditional 'if'. Remove redundant 'are' in 'other people are coming.' Use 'to the house' and natural phrasing 'leave your key with a neighbor' instead of 'put your key on the neighbors.' 'Neighbors' should be singular 'a neighbor' or plural 'neighbors' depending on context; here 'a neighbor' fits.'