Part 1
Examinador
What is your favourite food?
Candidato
So for my favorite food is pizza because I think I like some Italian cores and I do like it when it's was put some extra topping like seaweed or maybe extra cheese because I think the taste is will be more flavoury.
Examinador
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Candidato
When I was young I do like French fries because they have a taste like some crispy and savory taste and I like it when it was added some extra topping like maybe seaweed or some melted cheese.
Examinador
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Candidato
Yes, I do because I do like to traveling to the another country. For example, like when I going to Japan, I do like to eat some salmon and some sushi. There was very fresh taste for me. And when I was going to the Korea, I do like to eat there, uh, pork because Korea have, uh, some BBQ.
Examinador
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Candidato
I don't think there have a much change because since I was a child, I do likes to eat some French fries and until now I also love it and my parents also like to uh, cook some French fries for me because French fries is was one of our favorite food in family.
What is your favourite food?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: Make the response grammatically correct, concise, and more natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words and incorrect forms (e.g., 'is was', 'cores').
Exemplo: My favourite food is pizza. I especially enjoy Italian-style pizza with extra cheese or unusual toppings like seaweed because they add a richer, more complex flavour. For instance, extra cheese makes the crust creamier, while seaweed gives a pleasant umami taste.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. Provide a clear topic sentence and one specific reason or example. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'for example' to connect ideas.
Exemplo: When I was young, I liked French fries because they were crispy and savoury. For example, I loved fries topped with melted cheese or seaweed because the toppings made them more interesting and flavourful.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: Answer the seasonal question directly and avoid confusing travel with seasonal changes. If you mean you eat different foods when you travel, state that clearly. Use correct tense and smoother linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'also'). Reduce hesitations and unnecessary repetition.
Exemplo: I sometimes eat different foods at different times, especially when I travel. For example, when I went to Japan I enjoyed fresh salmon and sushi, and when I visited Korea I ate grilled pork at barbecue restaurants. These trips introduced me to seasonal and regional dishes.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: Give a clear, direct answer and support it with a brief reason and one specific example. Correct grammar (use present perfect or simple present) and remove fillers. Keep to two or three sentences.
Exemplo: My favourite food hasn't changed much since childhood. I still love French fries because my family often cooks them, so they remain a familiar and comforting dish for me.
× So for my favorite food is pizza because I think I like some Italian cores and I do like it when it's was put some extra topping like seaweed or maybe extra cheese because I think the taste is will be more flavoury.
✓ My favorite food is pizza because I like Italian flavors, and I like it when extra toppings are added, such as seaweed or extra cheese, because I think the taste becomes more flavorful.
Errors involve present tense and auxiliary misuse. 'So for my favorite food is' is redundant; use 'My favorite food is'. 'I think I like' is awkward—use simple present 'I like' for general preferences. 'Italian cores' is incorrect vocabulary; 'Italian flavors' fits. 'I do like it when it's was put some extra topping' mixes present and past and uses passive incorrectly; correct to 'I like it when extra toppings are added' (present simple passive). 'the taste is will be' mixes 'is' and 'will be'; use present simple 'becomes' for general truth. Suggestion: use simple present for habits/preferences, avoid redundant auxiliaries, and use correct passive or active structure for 'toppings are added'.
× When I was young I do like French fries because they have a taste like some crispy and savory taste and I like it when it was added some extra topping like maybe seaweed or some melted cheese.
✓ When I was young I liked French fries because they had a crispy, savory taste, and I liked it when extra toppings such as seaweed or melted cheese were added.
The sentence mixes past and present ('When I was young I do like'); use past simple 'liked' to match 'was young'. 'They have a taste like some crispy and savory taste' is repetitive and tense mismatch; use past 'had' and concise description 'a crispy, savory taste'. 'I like it when it was added some extra topping' mixes tenses and wrong word order; correct to passive past 'were added'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently for childhood habits and use correct passive word order: 'toppings were added'.
× Yes, I do because I do like to traveling to the another country.
✓ Yes, I do because I like traveling to other countries.
Errors: unnecessary auxiliary 'do' with stative verb 'like' in simple present; 'do like' is possible for emphasis but here unnecessary. 'to traveling' mixes infinitive and gerund; use gerund 'traveling' after 'like'. 'the another country' is incorrect article use and singular; use 'other countries' for general statement. Suggestion: use simple present 'I like', use gerund after 'like', and use 'other countries' for plural generalization.
× For example, like when I going to Japan, I do like to eat some salmon and some sushi.
✓ For example, when I go to Japan, I like to eat salmon and sushi.
Errors: 'when I going' missing auxiliary or wrong form; use simple present 'when I go' for habitual actions. Again 'I do like' unnecessary; use 'I like'. 'some salmon and some sushi' is acceptable but 'salmon and sushi' is more natural. Suggestion: use correct verb form for time clauses ('when I go') and simple present for habits.
× There was very fresh taste for me.
✓ They tasted very fresh to me.
Errors: 'There was very fresh taste for me' uses existential 'there' and singular 'was' incorrectly. Use 'They tasted very fresh to me' — 'they' refers to sushi/salmon, 'tasted' is past if referring to a past trip or present simple 'taste' for general opinion. Suggestion: match subject and verb and use 'taste' with 'to me' for opinions: 'They tasted/ taste very fresh to me'.
× And when I was going to the Korea, I do like to eat there, uh, pork because Korea have, uh, some BBQ.
✓ And when I went to Korea, I liked to eat pork there because Korea has barbecue.
Errors: 'when I was going to the Korea' incorrectly uses progressive; use simple past 'went' for completed trips. 'the Korea' wrong article; country names usually without 'the'. 'I do like' should be past 'liked' to match 'went'. 'Korea have' is subject-verb disagreement and tense; correct to 'Korea has'. Suggestion: use simple past for specific past visits, omit 'the' with country names, and ensure subject-verb agreement ('Korea has').
× I don't think there have a much change because since I was a child, I do likes to eat some French fries and until now I also love it and my parents also like to uh, cook some French fries for me because French fries is was one of our favorite food in family.
✓ I don't think there has been much change because since I was a child I have liked French fries, and even now I still love them. My parents also sometimes cook French fries for me because French fries have been one of our family's favorite foods.
Multiple tense and agreement errors. 'I don't think there have a much change' should be 'there has been much change' — present perfect with singular 'change' requires 'has been'. 'since I was a child, I do likes' mixes tenses and has incorrect verb form; use present perfect 'I have liked' to show continuity. 'until now I also love it' better 'even now I still love them' (plural pronoun for fries). 'my parents also like to cook some French fries for me because French fries is was one of our favorite food in family' contains wrong auxiliaries and tenses: 'is was' invalid, 'French fries' plural so 'have been', and 'favorite food in family' should be 'one of our family's favorite foods'. Suggestion: use present perfect for actions continuing from past to present, ensure subject-verb agreement, use plural pronouns for countable plurals, and correct possessive form 'our family's'.