Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Start with a direct topic sentence and expand with one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Mention a reason and a brief example to make your answer more informative and natural.

Exemplo: I particularly enjoy ice cream because it comes in many flavors and is refreshing on hot days. For example, I often choose matcha or strawberry when I go out, and I like trying new artisanal flavors at local shops.

Sugestão: Respond directly and confidently with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific detail or short example. Avoid filler words and hesitations; use a linking word when giving extra information.

Exemplo: When I was young, I liked fruit, especially apples and bananas. For instance, I used to have sliced apples with peanut butter as a snack after school.

Sugestão: Give a structured answer: start with a clear statement, then describe seasonal differences with specific examples and linking words (e.g., "in spring..., in summer..."). Avoid vague or repeated words and reduce hesitations.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. In spring I enjoy light seasonal dishes like sakura-flavored sweets, while in summer I often eat cold foods such as ice cream and salads. In autumn I prefer hearty meals like pumpkin dishes.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear statement about change or no change, give a reason and a brief example. Use correct tense and avoid abrupt endings. Keep to one or two supporting sentences with linking words such as "because" or "however."

Exemplo: Yes, it has changed. As a child I liked vegetables, but now I prefer sweeter foods like ice cream because I eat out more often and developed different tastes.

× Uh, I. Like the fruits? OK, sorry.

✓ Uh, I liked fruits. Sorry.

The examiner asked about past habits when the student was young, so the past tense should be used. The original has a fragmented present tense 'I. Like' which is incorrect. Use the simple past 'I liked' to indicate preference in the past. Also remove filler punctuation and keep the sentence concise.

× Uh, and. Spring I like uh, cherry blossom and summer like uh, ice cream and all time like, uh, Japanese, uh momiji and Momiji food.

✓ In spring I like cherry blossoms; in summer I like ice cream; and all year I like Japanese momiji food.

This sentence mixes tenses and has incorrect noun forms and word order. Use present simple 'I like' for habitual preferences. Use plural 'cherry blossoms' and the phrase 'all year' instead of 'all time'. Use semicolons or separate clauses for clarity. Remove filler sounds and duplicate words.

× I have changed anything so because child is eating vegetable but now I don't like vegetable. Bye.

✓ My favourite food has changed since I was a child because when I was a child I ate vegetables but now I don't like them.

The question asks whether the favourite food changed since childhood, so use present perfect 'has changed' to describe a change from past to present. The original uses 'I have changed anything' which is ungrammatical. Use 'since I was a child' and past simple 'I ate' for past habit, and refer back with the plural pronoun 'them' for 'vegetables'. Remove 'Bye' as it is unnecessary.