Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent and concise: give a clear topic sentence, one or two specific supporting details, and avoid hesitations or repetition. Use linking words for coherence (for example, 'because' and 'also'). Replace vague phrases ("we we add like") with precise language and correct grammar (e.g., 'when I add toppings such as seafood and vegetables'). Aim for 3–4 clear sentences.

Exemplo: My favourite food is fried rice because it is simple and full of flavour. I especially like it with toppings such as shrimp and mixed vegetables, which add texture and nutrients. I often eat it for a quick weeknight dinner because it is easy to prepare.

Sugestão: First, correct clarity and tense errors: start with a clear topic sentence about childhood preferences. Provide one or two specific examples of foods you ate and a brief reason, then contrast with current habits using a linking word (e.g., 'but' or 'however'). Reduce fillers and aim for coherent sentence structure.

Exemplo: When I was young, I mostly liked snacks and junk food such as chips and sweets because they tasted good and were convenient. However, now I prefer healthier options like salads and grilled fish because I care more about nutrition.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer, then specify seasonal examples with reasons. Use clear linking words ('in summer'/'in winter' or 'during warm months'/'during cold months') and avoid hesitation. Be specific about dishes and reasons (e.g., 'to cool down' or 'to feel warmed').

Exemplo: Yes. In the warm months I tend to eat lighter, cold dishes like salads and grilled fish to stay cool. In winter I prefer hot, spicy soups such as tom yum because they warm me up and are comforting.

Sugestão: Answer directly and explain how and why tastes changed. Use past tense when referring to childhood and present tense for now. Give one or two specific examples of foods and reasons for the change (health, knowledge, lifestyle). Keep sentences concise and avoid filler words.

Exemplo: Yes, my tastes have changed a lot. As a child I preferred junk food like fast food and sweets, but as I grew up I began to choose healthier options such as grilled chicken and vegetables because I became more health-conscious.

× And it's delicious when we we add like topping like, umm, seafood and vegetable.

✓ And it's delicious when we add toppings like seafood and vegetables.

The sentence has a pronoun repetition ('we we') and incorrect noun forms. 'Topping' should be plural 'toppings' because 'like seafood and vegetables' implies more than one type; 'vegetable' should be plural 'vegetables'. Remove duplicated pronoun and keep subject 'we' once. Use consistent plural nouns for countable items.

× So I think I'm passionate.

✓ So I think I'm passionate about it.

The verb 'passionate' requires the preposition 'about' to link to the object. Without 'about it' the sentence is incomplete. Add 'about it' to indicate what the speaker is passionate about.

× When I'm washing, I'm running into like umm 5 food like snack or snack but but I didn't prefer like healthy food.

✓ When I was young, I gravitated toward about five kinds of snacks and did not prefer healthy food.

The original mixes present continuous with incorrect meaning. The question asks about childhood, so past tense is required. 'When I'm washing' is incorrect; use 'When I was young'. 'I'm running into' is awkward; 'gravitate toward' or 'preferred' fits. Also correct subject-verb tense consistency and pluralization.

× So I just want to eat whatever I want that just goods for me.

✓ So I just wanted to eat whatever tasted good to me.

Pronoun and tense misuse: the narrative refers to the past, so use past tense 'wanted'. 'That just goods for me' is ungrammatical: use 'tasted good to me' to express preference. Also 'goods' is incorrect as an adjective.

× So but now I umm, prefer to eat like healthy food.

✓ But now I prefer to eat healthy food.

Remove filler words and keep simple present 'prefer' to describe current habitual preference. Also remove unnecessary 'like' before 'healthy food'.

× Yes, umm, definitely when, uh, the house is sent, I prefer to eat a meal and fried food plus and likes, but uh, in the cold season I prefer to like soup and uh, spicy soup.

✓ Yes. In the summer, I prefer meals and fried foods, but in the cold season I prefer soups, especially spicy ones.

'The house is sent' is nonsensical; likely meant 'summer'. Use season name and correct plural forms: 'fried foods', 'soups'. Remove filler words and rephrase for clarity: 'especially spicy ones' instead of repeating 'soup'.

× Yes, it quite change a lot.

✓ Yes, it has changed a lot.

'Quite change' is incorrect tense and form. Use present perfect 'has changed' to indicate a change from childhood to now. Add 'a lot' for emphasis.

× Umm, when I was young, I prefer to eat a like junk food, uh, more than a healthy food.

✓ When I was young, I preferred to eat junk food more than healthy food.

Past-time context requires past tense 'preferred' not present 'prefer'. Remove unnecessary articles: 'junk food' and 'healthy food' are uncountable here. Remove filler words.

× So when I and uh, I grow up a maybe I'm passionate because, umm, we get healthy food and.

✓ So when I grew up, I became more interested in healthy food because I had access to it.

The original sentence mixes tenses and incomplete clauses. Use past tense 'grew up' and 'became' to describe change. Clarify cause: 'because I had access to it' explains why interest increased. Remove filler words and finish the thought.