Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Focus on clarity, grammar, and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence naming one favourite food, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Use correct verb forms and singular/plural agreement, avoid filler words (uh) and redundant phrases. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: My favourite food is chocolate. I especially enjoy dark chocolate because it tastes rich and satisfies my sweet tooth. For example, I often eat a small piece of fancy chocolate after a flight because it makes me feel happy and relaxed.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence about childhood preferences, then add a specific reason and one example. Correct tense use ('liked'), simplify wording, and avoid repetition. Use linking phrases like 'because' or 'for example' to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: When I was young, I liked sweet foods such as candy and cake. I liked them because they gave me quick energy and tasted delicious. For example, I often ate candy after playing outside to feel energized.

Sugestão: Answer directly (Yes/No) and then explain briefly with one or two specific details. Use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary: 'I don't usually change my diet by season' or 'I eat different foods in summer'. Avoid unrelated country names unless relevant. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually eat different foods at different times of the year because I am busy with school. I usually eat simple meals at home or on my way to school, so I don't have time to try seasonal dishes.

Sugestão: Provide a clear answer (Yes/No) and explain how and why it changed with specific reasons. Use past and present tenses correctly and keep to two or three sentences. Include linking words like 'but' or 'so' to show contrast.

Exemplo: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. I used to love candy, but my mother limited how much I could eat, so now I prefer healthier snacks like fruit or dark chocolate.

× My favorite foods is wheat foods is in many dishes for me and it's like green, uh, cake or chocolate.

✓ My favorite food is wheat. It is in many dishes for me, and I also like green cake or chocolate.

The speaker uses plural 'foods' with singular verb 'is' causing number mismatch and confusing noun phrases. 'Favorite food' (singular) agrees with 'is'. 'Wheat foods' is unclear; likely 'wheat' as a food (uncountable) or 'wheat dishes'. Break into two sentences for clarity and correct subject-verb agreement. Use parallel structure ('I also like...'). Suggestion: Decide singular or plural noun and ensure verb agrees (e.g., 'My favorite foods are...' or 'My favorite food is...'). Use clear nouns like 'wheat' or 'wheat dishes'.

× In my flight when I start I eat chocolate, I feel happy.

✓ On flights, when the flight starts I eat chocolate and I feel happy.

Preposition and tense phrasing are incorrect: use 'on flights' and 'when the flight starts' for habitual present actions. Combine clauses with 'and' to show simultaneous actions. Ensure present simple is used for repeated/habitual behaviour. Suggestion: Use 'on flights' for events occurring during flights and present simple for habits.

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? -> When I was young, the sky foods I lie in sweet food is in many candy make me feel happy when we when I need to energy I eat candy, I eat cake it's very sweet and.

✓ When I was young, I liked sweet foods. Many candies made me feel happy. When I needed energy, I ate candy or cake; they were very sweet.

Mixed tenses and incorrect verb forms: for past time reference use past simple ('liked', 'made', 'needed', 'ate'). 'Lie' is incorrect; likely meant 'like' but in past. 'Sky foods' is unclear and removed. Sentence fragments combined into coherent past-tense sentences. Suggestion: Use past simple consistently when referring to childhood habits and replace unclear phrases with specific words like 'sweet foods'.

× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year? -> I know I don't I really to change Thai food India because I don't have many time to try too many food.

✓ I know I don't really change what I eat for Thai or Indian food because I don't have much time to try many foods.

Problems with prepositions and article/quantifier use: 'to change Thai food India' is ungrammatical; use 'change what I eat for Thai or Indian food'. Use 'much time' (uncountable) not 'many time'. Use plural 'foods' when referring to types. Remove unnecessary 'to'. Suggestion: Use 'change what I eat' and correct 'much/many' based on countability.

× I just going to school and go home just ride with any food.

✓ I just go to school and then go home; I usually bring simple food.

Non-finite verb 'going' should be 'go' for present simple habitual action. 'Just ride with any food' is unclear; rephrase to convey intended meaning (e.g., 'bring simple food' or 'eat whatever is available'). Ensure clear subject-verb structure. Suggestion: Use present simple for routines and choose clear verbs to express transportation or carrying food.

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? -> Yes, when I was tired. I very like candy and I want to change my favorite foods because my mom, my mom don't allow me to.

✓ Yes. When I was young I liked candy very much, and I wanted to change my favorite foods because my mom did not allow me to eat candy all day.

Tense inconsistency: refering to past habits use past simple ('liked', 'wanted', 'did not allow'). 'My mom don't allow me' is wrong person/tense; use 'did not allow me' for past. 'When I was tired' likely intended 'when I was young' or omitted; adjusted to 'young' to match question. Suggestion: Keep past tense consistently when discussing childhood and use correct auxiliary 'did' for negatives in past.

× It's very candy in the day all week maybe, and I change this.

✓ I ate a lot of candy every day for maybe a week, and then I changed that habit.

'Very candy' is ungrammatical; use 'a lot of candy' or 'too much candy'. 'In the day all week' should be 'every day for a week' or 'all week'. Clarify 'I change this' as 'I changed that habit' in past. Suggestion: Use appropriate quantifiers ('a lot of', 'too much') and time expressions ('every day', 'for a week'), and match tense for completed actions.