Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct, use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Start with a topic sentence naming your favourite food category, then give 1–2 specific reasons and an example. Avoid fillers and repetition; use linking words like because and so. Correct tense and article usage (e.g., “I'm into the gym” → “I go to the gym”).

Exemplo: My favourite foods are healthy, high-protein meals, especially grilled chicken and lean beef. I prefer these because I go to the gym regularly and need protein to build muscle, so I avoid fast food and sugary sauces.

Sugestão: Answer clearly in past tense and state the specific food you liked as a child. Use linking words (for example, still, however) to compare past and present. Avoid unclear phrases and fillers. Give one short detail about when or why you ate it and whether you still do.

Exemplo: When I was a child I loved eating oats for breakfast because it was quick and filling before school. I still eat oatmeal occasionally, perhaps once or twice a week, especially at the weekend.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and then expand with a brief reason. If you do change foods seasonally, give one example; if not, explain why and mention any small seasonal variations. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: No, I don't change my diet much throughout the year because I don't follow any religious food practices. However, I do eat more soups and stews in winter and lighter salads in summer for comfort and temperature reasons.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use past and present contrast with linking words (e.g., However, now). Give specific examples of what changed and why, with clear grammar and fewer fillers. Mention results or feelings concisely.

Exemplo: Yes, my tastes have changed. As a child I loved sugary snacks like candy and lollipops, but now I avoid them because they make me feel unhealthy and gain weight, so I prefer protein-rich meals instead.

× Well, it definitely not, you know, it definitely not a a fast food 'cause I'm like a gym or I'm really addicted in gym.

✓ Well, it's definitely not fast food because I go to the gym and I'm really into the gym.

The student omitted the auxiliary verb for contraction 'it's' (it is) causing a third person singular issue; also used incorrect preposition 'in gym' and awkward phrase 'addicted in gym'. Use 'it's' for 'it is', use 'go to the gym' or 'I'm really into the gym'. Keep verbs consistent and avoid repeating words. Suggested improvement: practice contractions with 'it is' -> 'it's' and common collocations: 'go to the gym', 'be into the gym'.

× So I'm just only eat a healthy food like chicken and beef only with no sugar in my meals.

✓ So I only eat healthy food like chicken and beef, with no sugar in my meals.

Incorrect use of article 'a' before uncountable noun 'healthy food' and word order issues. 'A healthy food' is wrong; use 'healthy food' (uncountable). 'I'm just only eat' mixes 'I'm' with base verb; use simple present 'I only eat' for habitual actions. Suggested improvement: use simple present for routines: 'I only eat...'; do not use 'a' with uncountable nouns.

× Well, as a child, I'm pretty liked to, you know, assure 'cause like a famous breakfast and I eat getting ready to school and actually, actually right now I'm I'm still at 0 chest, you know, a little bit of a weekend, maybe like one or twice a week.

✓ Well, as a child I pretty much liked to eat it because it was a famous breakfast, and I ate it while getting ready for school. Actually, right now I still have it at breakfast a little on the weekend, maybe once or twice a week.

Multiple tense and verb form errors: 'I'm pretty liked to' mixes present 'I'm' with past 'liked' and wrong verb 'assure'. Use past simple 'liked' to refer to childhood. 'I eat getting ready to school' should be 'I ate it while getting ready for school' and 'have it at breakfast' fits current habit. 'one or twice' should be 'once or twice'. Suggested improvement: match tense to time reference (past for childhood), use correct verb forms and idiomatic expressions like 'while getting ready for school' and 'once or twice a week'.

× Well, I'm not really in this type 'cause I'm not in any religion.

✓ Well, I'm not really that type because I'm not of any religion.

Incorrect preposition/pronoun phrase 'in this type' and 'not in any religion' is non-idiomatic. Use 'that type' for referring to a kind of person and 'not of any religion' or 'not religious'. Suggested improvement: learn common phrases: 'not that type', 'not of any religion', or 'I'm not religious'.

× So I'm, I'm don't have to, you know, divide my meals, my, my food to other other seasons to eat.

✓ So I don't have to divide my meals by season.

Unnecessary repetition, wrong auxiliary placement 'I'm, I'm don't have to' and incorrect preposition 'to other seasons'. The correct structure is 'I don't have to' and use 'by season' to express dividing by seasonal periods. Suggested improvement: avoid repeating words and use correct negative auxiliary order: 'I don't have to'.

× I'm just eating like my favorite food in my meals.

✓ I just eat my favorite foods in my meals.

Progressive 'I'm just eating' is awkward for habitual action; use simple present 'I just eat'. Also 'food' should be plural 'foods' or 'my favorite food' singular; 'my favorite foods' fits listing. Suggested improvement: use simple present for routines: 'I just eat my favorite foods'.

× Well definitely yes 'cause as a child I'm pretty enjoy to eating lots sugar things like candy, lollipops, a lot UPS, but right now I'm pretty not enjoy this.

✓ Well, definitely yes, because as a child I really enjoyed eating a lot of sugary things like candy and lollipops, but right now I don't enjoy them.

Mixed tenses and incorrect verb forms: 'I'm pretty enjoy to eating' is wrong—use past simple 'I really enjoyed' for past habit, and 'eating a lot of sugary things' uses adjective 'sugary' not 'sugar'. 'I'm pretty not enjoy this' should be 'I don't enjoy them' in present simple. Also 'a lot UPS' is meaningless and removed. Suggested improvement: use past simple for past habits and present simple for current states; use correct adjective forms like 'sugary' and correct object pronoun 'them'.

× It's make me, you know, feel unhealthy and getting fat and I really don't like it.

✓ They made me feel unhealthy and gain weight, and I really don't like them.

Pronoun and tense issues: 'It's make me' mixes singular 'it' with plural idea and wrong tense. For past cause, use 'They made me feel unhealthy and gain weight' if referring to candies; or 'It makes me feel unhealthy and gain weight' for general truth. Also use 'gain weight' instead of 'getting fat' and match pronouns 'them' for plural items. Suggested improvement: decide tense (past/present) and match subject number and pronoun accordingly; prefer neutral phrasing 'gain weight'.

× It's me.

✓ That is me.

Short phrase 'It's me' here is unclear and may be unnecessary. If the student intended to emphasize identification, 'That is me' or omit entirely. 'It's me' is conversational but in this context unclear. Suggested improvement: remove unclear fragments or replace with clear statements like 'That's how I feel'.