Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your favourite food, then give one or two specific supporting details (why you like it and an example). Correct grammar (e.g. ‘homemade food made by my mother’). Keep answers under five sentences and avoid listing many items without explanation.

Exemplo: My favourite food is the homemade Chinese dishes my mother cooks, especially noodles and momos. I love them because they taste fresh and remind me of my childhood, and her seasoning is unique compared with restaurant food.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence about foods you liked as a child, then explain a change or reason using linking words. Use correct verb tenses and avoid vague phrases like ‘etcetera.’ Be specific about what you ate and why you now include fruits and vegetables.

Exemplo: When I was young, I preferred fast foods such as pizza and burgers, but as I grew older I started eating more fruits and vegetables to stay healthy. For example, I now have fruit for breakfast and a salad with dinner to maintain my health.

Sugestão: Clarify the contrast between seasons and correct contradictions (you said summer twice with cold and then warm). Use linking words (for example, in summer/in winter) and give one or two specific examples of seasonal foods. Fix grammar and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes. For example, in summer I prefer cold foods like ice cream and chilled salads, while in winter I enjoy warm dishes such as soups and stews because they are comforting and help me stay warm.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and provide a brief reason. Use correct grammar (e.g. ‘has not changed’ and ‘my mother’s cooking’). Give one specific example of a dish that remains your favourite to make the response more vivid.

Exemplo: No, my favourite food has not changed since childhood because I still love my mother’s cooking. For instance, her chicken noodle soup was my favourite then and it remains my favourite now because of its flavour and the memories it brings.

× From my childhood, I like Chinese food like noodles, burger, momos and other things. But I also like homemade food from made from my mom's hand.

✓ Since my childhood, I have liked Chinese food such as noodles, burgers, momos and other dishes. I also like homemade food made by my mother.

The original uses simple present 'like' to describe a preference that started in the past and continues to the present; this requires present perfect ('have liked'). 'From my childhood' is better as 'Since my childhood'. 'Burger' should be plural when listed with other items. 'Homemade food from made from my mom's hand' is ungrammatical; use 'made by my mother'. Suggestions: use present perfect for ongoing past-to-present states, pluralize items in lists, and use natural passive/agent phrasing for 'made by'.

× As per changing my age, I like pizza, burger, sandwich etcetera and adding and added in my mail fruit and vegetable from for. For maintain my health.

✓ As I grew older, I liked pizza, burgers and sandwiches, and I also added more fruits and vegetables to my diet to maintain my health.

The sentence mixes incorrect phrases and tenses. 'As per changing my age' is incorrect; use 'As I grew older'. The shift describes past preferences, so simple past 'liked' is appropriate. 'Burger' and 'sandwich' should be plural in a list. 'Adding and added in my mail fruit and vegetable from for' is ungrammatical; correct is 'added more fruits and vegetables to my diet'. 'For maintain my health' should be 'to maintain my health' (infinitive purpose). Suggestions: use clear time expressions, match tense to the time referenced, pluralize count nouns in lists, and use infinitive for purpose.

× Yes, I like different food in the different season because in the summer I I ate cold thing like ice cream for the etcetera. In the summer I prefer soup and other and other warm thing.

✓ Yes, I like different foods in different seasons: in the summer I eat cold things like ice cream, and in the winter I prefer soup and other warm dishes.

The student mixes tenses and singular/plural. When speaking generally about seasonal preferences use simple present ('I like', 'I eat', 'I prefer'). 'Different food' should be 'different foods' or 'different food in different seasons'. 'I I ate' wrongly uses past 'ate' and duplicates 'I'; change to 'I eat'. 'Cold thing' should be 'cold things' or 'cold foods'. 'Other and other warm thing' is redundant; use 'other warm dishes'. Also clarify contrast between summer and winter. Suggestions: use simple present for habitual facts, pluralize countable nouns, avoid repetition, and use clear contrasting seasons.

× No, my favorite food from the since my childhood not be changed because in the childhood my favorite food is my mother make food and the now I am young I like also my mother who mother made food.

✓ No, my favorite food has not changed since my childhood, because when I was a child my favorite food was the food my mother made, and now that I am older I still like the food my mother makes.

The sentence has tense, auxiliary, and structure errors. To express continuity from past to present use present perfect ('has not changed') with 'since my childhood'. 'In the childhood' should be 'when I was a child' and use past tense 'was'. 'My favorite food is my mother make food' is ungrammatical; use 'the food my mother made'. For the present reference use simple present 'my mother makes' or 'I still like'. Suggestions: use present perfect for changes over time, correct subordinate clause order ('the food my mother makes/made'), and simplify sentences to avoid repetition.