Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason with a brief example. Avoid redundancy (e.g., “each and every food” and “so yeah”).

Exemplo: My favourite food is pizza. I love dishes with cheese because they taste rich and comforting; for example, I often order a margherita or a quattro formaggi when I eat out.

Sugestão: Use a clear past-tense statement and avoid unnatural phrases like “go to feed food.” Give one specific detail to support your statement and use linking words for clarity.

Exemplo: When I was young, I loved Mexican food. I ate it almost every day, especially tacos and burritos, because the spices and flavours were exciting to me.

Sugestão: Make the reply more natural and specific: use plural/singular correctly and give a brief reason why you change foods with seasons. Use a linking word to connect the seasons and reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in winter I prefer hearty leafy greens and root vegetables for warmth and nutrition, while in summer I eat more pulses and salads because they are light and refreshing.

Sugestão: Use simple past and present perfect correctly and avoid repeated phrases like “it is been changed.” State the change clearly and give a short reason for the shift.

Exemplo: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood. I used to prefer Mexican cuisine when I was younger, but now I prefer Italian food because I enjoy the variety of pasta and cheese dishes.

× Yes, my favorite food has been changed since I was a child.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed since I was a child.

'Has been changed' uses passive past participle incorrectly here; the intended meaning is that the subject itself changed over time, so the present perfect active 'has changed' is correct. Use active voice with present perfect to indicate a change that started in the past and continues to the present. Suggestion: Use 'has changed' rather than 'has been changed' when describing a personal change that occurred over time.

× The kind of food which I like the most when I was young was Mexican food.

✓ The kind of food that I liked the most when I was young was Mexican food.

The sentence mixes present 'like' with past time marker 'when I was young.' Use past tense 'liked' to match the time reference. Also, use 'that' instead of 'which' for restrictive clauses in spoken English. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs for actions or states that occurred in the past (liked).

× It was my go to feed food means I used to eat in my every meal, whether it be lunch or dinner.

✓ It was my go-to food, which I used to eat at every meal, whether lunch or dinner.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and wordy: 'go to feed food' is incorrect; 'used to eat in my every meal' has wrong preposition and word order. Correct phrase is 'go-to food.' Use 'which I used to eat at every meal' with preposition 'at' and remove unnecessary words. Suggestion: Use concise phrases and correct prepositions ('go-to food', 'at every meal').

× Yes, I eat different food at a different time of the year and basically in winter I like to eat green vegetables most and during summer I like to eat pulses most.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year: in winter I like to eat green vegetables most, and in summer I prefer pulses.

Use plural 'foods' when referring to different kinds of food. 'A different time of the year' should be 'different times of the year.' Split into clearer clauses and use 'prefer' for variety. Also change 'during summer' to 'in summer' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: Use plurals for countable items ('foods'), correct time expressions ('in summer', 'in winter'), and simpler sentence structure.

× Before I used to like Mexican cuisine, but now I used to like Italian food more, so it is been changed.

✓ Before I used to like Mexican cuisine, but now I prefer Italian food more, so it has changed.

'Now I used to like' is incorrect because 'used to' describes past habitual actions; replace with present verb 'prefer' to express current preference. 'It is been changed' is ungrammatical; use present perfect active 'has changed.' Suggestion: Use 'used to' only for past habits, use simple present for current states, and 'has changed' to describe change that has occurred.

× I like each and every food which includes cheese in it.

✓ I like every food that includes cheese.

'Each and every' is redundant; 'food' in this sense is better as uncountable or treat as 'every food' with 'that includes cheese.' Also remove 'in it' which is unnecessary. Use 'that' for restrictive clause. Suggestion: Simplify to 'every food that includes cheese' or 'any food with cheese'.