Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details (e.g., what makes it special, ingredients or a memory). Avoid repetition and fix tense/word order errors.

Exemplo: I love biryani; it’s my favourite because it’s a traditional dish in my family. For example, my grandmother used to make chicken biryani on special occasions, and I enjoy its rich spices and tender meat.

Sugestão: Use past tense consistently and organize the answer: give a clear topic sentence in past tense, then one specific reason or example. Avoid vague phrases and correct word choice (e.g., “I thought vegetables were not tasty”).

Exemplo: When I was young, I loved eating ice cream and meat, especially chicken. I thought vegetables were not tasty back then, so I preferred treats like ice cream after school.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence, then add one clear reason and an example. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and reduce redundancy. Mention specific seasons or occasions if relevant.

Exemplo: Yes, I often change what I eat depending on the season and my mood. For example, in winter I prefer heavy, spicy dishes, while in summer I choose lighter meals like salads or cold noodles.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly: say whether it changed, then explain with one or two specific reasons. Fix grammar and clarify the allergy point (does it limit or force choices?). Avoid confusing chronology and repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, my favourite has changed. As a child I often chose meat when I was upset, but now I prefer chicken biryani. However, I avoid some meats because I have a mild allergy, so I usually choose chicken instead.

× My favorite food is biryani because it is one of my our traditional food.

✓ My favorite food is biryani because it is one of our traditional foods.

The original sentence misuses articles and has a redundant possessive 'my our'. Use 'our' alone and pluralize 'food' to 'foods' after 'one of' because 'one of' requires a plural noun. Also remove the extra article 'my'. Suggestion: say 'one of our traditional foods'.

× I love to eat it because from my childhood I I used to eat it and it is really delicious.

✓ I have loved eating it since my childhood; I used to eat it then and it is really delicious.

Mixes present simple and 'used to' awkwardly and repeats 'I'. Use present perfect 'have loved' with 'since my childhood' to show a continuous preference from past to present. Keep 'used to' for habitual past actions. Remove duplicate 'I'. Suggestion: 'I have loved eating it since my childhood; I used to eat it and it is really delicious.'.

× When I was young I love to eat ice cream a lot and also I like to eat meat and also chicken because vegetable was not tasty on my thought.

✓ When I was young I loved to eat ice cream a lot, and I also liked to eat meat and chicken because vegetables did not taste good to me.

The time phrase 'When I was young' requires past tense verbs ('loved', 'liked'). 'Vegetable was not tasty on my thought' is incorrect: use plural 'vegetables' and past tense 'did not taste' and the expression 'to me' instead of 'on my thought'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense and natural phrasing.

× Yes, I am a selective eater so I cannot eat regularly same food, so I usually try to different food.

✓ Yes, I am a selective eater so I cannot eat the same food regularly; I usually try different foods.

Word order and article use are incorrect. 'Eat regularly same food' should be 'eat the same food regularly'. 'Try to different food' is wrong: say 'try different foods' (no 'to' and plural after 'different'). Suggestion: 'I cannot eat the same food regularly; I usually try different foods.'.

× Sometimes I like Chinese food, sometimes I love Italian food.

✓ Sometimes I like Chinese food, and sometimes I love Italian food.

This sentence is mostly correct but needs a conjunction 'and' for smoother flow. Tenses are consistent (present simple) to describe habitual preferences. Suggestion: add 'and' between clauses.

× It's depend on my mood and also my day.

✓ It depends on my mood and also on my day.

Missing third-person singular 'depends' (subject-verb agreement) and missing preposition 'on' before 'my day'. Use 'depends' for 'it'. Suggestion: 'It depends on my mood and on my day.'.

× Yes, I when I was sad, this time I love to eat meat, but currently I love to eat biryani, especially chicken biryani and because I have some allergy that's why I had chance to eat meat.

✓ When I was sad, I used to like eating meat, but now I prefer biryani, especially chicken biryani. I have some allergies, so I sometimes could not eat certain meats.

The original has mixed tenses, redundant phrases ('this time'), and unclear cause-effect. Use past habit 'used to' for 'when I was sad'. Use 'now' or 'currently' for present preference. 'Because I have some allergy that's why I had chance to eat meat' is unclear—if allergies prevent eating meat, say so; if they allowed eating meat, clarify. I rephrased to a plausible, grammatical meaning: 'I have some allergies, so I sometimes could not eat certain meats.' Suggestion: separate ideas into clear sentences, keep tenses consistent, and state cause-effect simply.