Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, correct grammar (it has/they have), and add a specific detail or brief reason using a linking word. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: My favourite food is biryani. I love all varieties because it is a traditional dish in my culture and has a rich, fragrant mix of spices and tender meat. For example, I especially enjoy chicken biryani with saffron-scented rice.

Sugestão: Speak more clearly and directly: give a topic sentence naming specific foods, use linking words to add detail (for example, because), avoid repetition and fillers, and correct verb tenses (I loved). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: When I was young I loved sweets, especially cake and ice cream. I ate them after school almost every day because they were treats my mother bought for me.

Sugestão: Organize your answer: start with a clear statement about seasonal or cultural food changes, use linking words (however, but, when) to contrast past and present habits, and use correct verbs and pronouns. Be specific about examples and limit to 3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes. When I lived with my family back home, we ate seasonal dishes such as special soups in winter and fresh fruits in summer. However, since moving to Canada as a student, I rarely try those traditional seasonal meals because cooking is difficult and ingredients are different here.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer then explain briefly: state clearly whether it changed, use correct grammar (hasn't changed; I still love biryani), and provide a reason or future possibility with linking words (but, however). Avoid vague words like 'petty'.

Exemplo: No, my favourite food hasn't changed — I still love biryani. However, I might try to eat it less often because it can be high in calories and I want to be healthier.

× Also it have unique taste.

✓ Also it has a unique taste.

Subject 'it' (singular) requires the third person singular form of the verb 'have', which is 'has'. Use 'a' before 'unique taste' because a singular countable noun phrase needs an article. Suggestion: learn third person singular conjugation (adds -s) and article use with singular countable nouns.

× There are plenty of uh, uh, item I love to eat, uh, when I was young, uh, but my mom told me, uh, I love to eat most, uh, uh, cake and also, uh, ice cream.

✓ There were plenty of items I loved to eat when I was young, but my favorites were cake and ice cream.

'Item' should be plural 'items' to match 'plenty of'. The main clause describes the past, so use past tense 'were' and 'loved'. 'I love to eat most' is unclear; replace with 'my favorites were' for clarity. Also use plural or specific nouns for repeated preferences. Suggestion: match plural forms with quantifiers and keep consistent past tense for past-time descriptions.

× I, you, I, I everyday, I, I care time, OK.

✓ I used to do that every day; I cared about the time.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect pronouns and tense. For habitual past actions, 'used to' or 'would' is appropriate; 'care time' is incorrect—use 'care about the time' or 'pay attention to the time'. Suggestion: form a single coherent clause, choose correct pronouns, and use suitable idiomatic expressions for 'every day'.

× Uh, yes, uh, when I used to live with my family and this time, uh, and I tried to, uh, test different food, but, uh, when I leave myself here in Canada, uh, I don't, uh, uh, try different type of food, but you go for eat for a student that time I try.

✓ Yes. When I lived with my family, I used to try different foods, but since I came to Canada, I don't try many different types of food. When I was a student, I did try more variety.

Inconsistent tense and incorrect verb forms: 'used to live' is fine for past habitual but 'and this time' is unclear. 'Tried to, test' is incorrect—use 'tried' or 'try' depending on tense. 'Leave myself here' should be 'came here' or 'left home to come here'. 'Different type' should be plural 'different types' or 'different kinds'. Maintain consistent tense and correct collocations: 'come to Canada', 'try different foods'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, keep past for past events and present for current situations, and use plural forms for 'types/kinds'.

× To be honest, my favorite food is or not chanced yet because from my side to now I love it.

✓ To be honest, my favorite food has not changed yet because I still love it.

'Is or not chanced yet' is ungrammatical; the correct passive/perfect form is 'has not changed yet'. 'From my side to now' is awkward; use 'I still love it' or 'from then until now I still love it'. Suggestion: use present perfect 'has not changed' for changes up to the present and clear time expressions like 'still'.

× I'm biryani and so there is nothing changed but I'll try to change it because it is very uh petty and also too much calorie.

✓ I like biryani, and nothing has changed, but I might try something else because it is quite fatty and also very high in calories.

'I'm biryani' incorrectly uses the pronoun verb; say 'I like biryani' or 'My favorite food is biryani'. 'There is nothing changed' should be 'nothing has changed' (present perfect). 'I'll try to change it' is acceptable but 'I might try something else' is more natural. 'Petty' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'greasy' or 'fatty'. Use 'high in calories' rather than 'too much calorie'. Suggestion: use correct verb phrases for preferences, present perfect for unchanged states, and accurate adjectives for food descriptions plus correct noun phrases for calories.