Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds (uh) and repeat words. Correct grammar (e.g., “I usually eat kimchi with almost every meal” and “it helps me relax”) and explain why you like it, perhaps mentioning taste, texture, or cultural reasons.

Exemplo: I usually eat kimchi with almost every meal because I love its spicy and tangy flavor. In addition, kimchi is a traditional Korean side dish that reminds me of home, and its crunchy texture makes meals more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence about your childhood preference, then add specific and coherent supporting details. Use linking words like “for example” or “because” and avoid repeating phrases like “I heard”. Clarify what you mean by “easy” (easy to eat, digest, or cook).

Exemplo: When I was young, I liked eating tofu. For example, my parents told me I often chose tofu in kindergarten because its soft texture was easy to chew and it had a mild, comforting flavor.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give specific seasonal examples with correct vocabulary and grammar. Replace vague phrases like “I think I differently depends” with clear structures such as “Yes, my diet changes with the seasons.” Define the dish accurately (e.g., naengmyeon for cold noodles) and explain why you prefer it in summer (cooling, refreshing).

Exemplo: Yes, my diet changes with the seasons because Korea has four distinct seasons. For example, in summer I enjoy naengmyeon, a traditional cold noodle dish, because it is refreshing and helps me cool down on hot days.

Sugestão: Provide a clearer contrast and give reasons for the change. Use past tense for childhood and present tense for now, and include linking words like “but” or “however.” Expand slightly with a specific reason (exposure, trying new dishes, or developing taste).

Exemplo: Definitely. When I was a child I didn’t like spicy food, but over time I learned to enjoy it because I tried many different dishes and my taste buds changed. Now I often choose spicy meals like kimchi and gochujang-based dishes.

× My favorite food is kimchi. Uh, usually it kimchi in my every meals uh, because it makes me feel happy and helps it relax.

✓ My favorite food is kimchi. Uh, usually I eat kimchi with every meal because it makes me feel happy and helps me relax.

Errors: missing verb 'eat' (sentence lacked necessary verb -> Sentence structure/verb). Incorrect use of 'in my every meals' (article and word order) and unnecessary 'it' before 'relax'. Use 'with every meal' or 'in every meal' and 'helps me relax' without 'it'. Suggestion: include the verb 'eat', use 'every meal' (singular noun with determiner) and use correct object pronoun 'me' for 'helps me relax'.

× It is kindly feel it's awkward because it's spicy. However, this spice.

✓ It kind of feels awkward because it's spicy. However, I like this spiciness.

Errors: 'kindly feel' is incorrect collocation; 'kind of' or 'kind of feels' expresses slight degree (adverb/adjective usage). 'This spice' is incomplete; use 'this spiciness' or 'this spice level' to name the noun. Suggestion: use 'kind of feels' and a proper noun form 'spiciness' or a clause to complete the thought.

× I don't exactly remember what I like when I was young.

✓ I don't exactly remember what I liked when I was young.

Error: tense mismatch. The clause 'when I was young' refers to the past, so the verb in the subordinate clause should be past tense 'liked', not present 'like'. Suggestion: match the tense in time clauses to past when referring to past periods.

× However, I heard that I love tofu when I was in kindergarten.

✓ However, I was told that I loved tofu when I was in kindergarten.

Errors: 'I heard that I love' mixes reporting verb and present tense. Use passive reporting 'I was told' or 'my parents said' and past 'loved' to match time. Also 'heard' is less appropriate than 'was told' for parental reports. Suggestion: use 'was told' and past tense 'loved'.

× I heard that from my parents.

✓ I heard that from my parents.

Although grammatical, this sentence is acceptable. No change needed. Explanation: 'I heard that from my parents' correctly reports source; keep as is.

× I think the flavor of it is very soft and it is very easy.

✓ I think its texture is very soft and it is very mild in flavor.

Errors: 'flavor... is very soft' mixes sensory descriptors (texture vs flavor). 'Very easy' is incomplete for describing food; perhaps 'easy to eat'. Suggestion: use 'texture is soft' and 'mild in flavor' or 'easy to eat' depending on intended meaning.

× Yes, I think I differently depends on the season because Korea has Four Seasons.

✓ Yes, I think I depend differently on the season because Korea has four seasons.

Errors: word order and verb form. Subject 'I' needs verb 'depend' (not 'depends') and adverb placement 'differently' should come after the verb or before 'depend' ('differently depend on'). Also 'Four Seasons' should be lowercase 'four seasons' unless referring to the hotel. Suggestion: use 'I depend differently on the season' or better 'My food choices depend on the season'.

× Especially when I in summer I really like to eat banyan, which is cold noodle and very traditional noodle.

✓ Especially in summer I really like to eat naengmyeon, which is a cold and very traditional noodle dish.

Errors: missing verb 'am' in 'when I in summer'; better phrasing is 'in summer'. 'Banyan' is likely incorrect name; use 'naengmyeon' or 'cold noodles'. Also article usage: 'a cold and very traditional noodle dish'. Suggestion: use 'in summer' without 'when I', or 'when it's summer' and use correct food name and articles.

× Definitely yes. I heard that when I was young I don't like spicy food but now I I am eating spicy food.

✓ Definitely yes. I remember that when I was young I didn't like spicy food, but now I eat spicy food.

Errors: tense inconsistency: 'when I was young' requires past 'didn't like' not present 'don't like'. 'I heard that' is awkward; use 'I remember that'. 'I am eating spicy food' is odd for habitual action; use simple present 'I eat spicy food' or 'I now like spicy food'. Suggestion: use past simple for past dislike and present simple for current habitual preference.