Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence answering the question, correct grammar, and add one brief specific reason or example. Avoid redundancy and long clauses. Use linking words if you add details.

Exemplo: I don’t have a single favourite food now. Since I grew up travelling, I enjoy trying local dishes from different countries, so my preferences change depending on where I am.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and smoother phrasing, keep it concise, and add one specific detail or memory to make it vivid. Use a linking word if you add a reason or example.

Exemplo: When I was younger, I loved vegetables. My mum used to make fresh salads with cucumber, tomatoes and a little olive oil, which made me enjoy healthy food from an early age.

Sugestão: Answer directly about seasonal eating rather than repeating travel background. If seasonal changes affect your food, give a clear example and use correct tense and linking words.

Exemplo: Sometimes I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in winter I prefer soups and stews, while in summer I eat more salads and fresh fruit.

Sugestão: Provide a concise, grammatically correct answer and one or two specific examples of how your tastes changed. Avoid repetition and long, unclear phrases; use linking words to show cause and effect.

Exemplo: Yes, my tastes have changed. After travelling to many countries, I now appreciate spicy and fermented foods I rarely ate as a child, such as Korean kimchi and Mexican salsas.

× No longer have favorite food because I traveled since I was a child.

✓ I no longer have a favorite food because I have been traveling since I was a child.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has incorrect tense. Add the subject I and use present perfect continuous (have been traveling) to show an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Also include the article a before favorite food: 'a favorite food'. Suggestion: Start with the subject, use 'I no longer have', and use 'have been traveling' for ongoing past-to-present actions.

× I've been trying all the local dishes in a different country.

✓ I've been trying local dishes in different countries.

The phrase 'in a different country' is awkward with 'I've been trying' which implies multiple places; use plural countries and drop all/the. 'All the local dishes' is exaggerated; 'local dishes' is more natural. Also maintain present perfect continuous to express repeated experiences up to now. Suggestion: Use 'I've been trying local dishes in different countries.'

× When I was younger, I really love vegetable.

✓ When I was younger, I really loved vegetables.

The time marker 'When I was younger' requires past tense: change love to loved. Also use the plural 'vegetables' or 'vegetable dishes' and include appropriate article/number. Suggestion: Use past tense and plural: 'really loved vegetables.'

× My mom always makes me fresh salads mixed with cucumber, tomatoes, and umm, olive oil.

✓ My mom always made me fresh salads mixed with cucumber, tomatoes, and olive oil.

Because the sentence starts with a past time frame in the previous sentence ('When I was younger'), the verb should be past (made). Also no need for 'umm'. 'Cucumber' can stay singular as a general ingredient but 'cucumbers' is also acceptable; keep parallel plural 'tomatoes' and 'olives' or 'olive oil' is fine. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent: 'My mom always made me fresh salads mixed with cucumber, tomatoes, and olive oil.'

× I do because I travel since I was a child.

✓ I do because I have been traveling since I was a child.

Use present perfect continuous 'have been traveling' to indicate an action that began in the past and continues to now. Simple present 'I travel' conflicts with the time marker 'since I was a child.' Suggestion: Use 'I have been traveling since I was a child.'

× Like I'm trying a variety of all the food across the world.

✓ For example, I try a variety of foods from around the world.

Beginning with 'Like' is informal and awkward; use 'For example' or 'I try'. 'A variety of all the food' is ungrammatical; use 'a variety of foods' or 'various foods'. Use 'from around the world' rather than 'across the world' for natural phrasing. Adjust tense to simple present to match habitual action. Suggestion: 'For example, I try a variety of foods from around the world.'

× Yes, it has changed over time because I have travelled since I was a child and I've been to so many country and I've been trying every single dishes in wherever I go, like wherever the country I visit.

✓ Yes, it has changed over time because I have been traveling since I was a child. I've been to so many countries, and I try different dishes wherever I go in each country I visit.

Multiple issues: use present perfect continuous 'have been traveling' for ongoing travel; 'country' must be plural 'countries'; 'every single dishes' mixes singular/plural—use 'different dishes' or 'many dishes'; 'in wherever I go' is ungrammatical—use 'wherever I go' or 'in each country I visit'. Split into two sentences for clarity and correct verb tenses: present perfect for ongoing travel and simple present for habitual action when visiting places. Suggestion: 'Yes, it has changed over time because I have been traveling since I was a child. I've been to so many countries, and I try different dishes wherever I go in each country I visit.'