Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, use precise adjectives, and avoid redundancy. Keep answer within 3–4 concise sentences and use linking words. For example, say why you like it (taste, aroma), mention typical accompaniments, and finish with a brief personal comment or reason.

Exemplo: My favourite food is nasi lemak because of its fragrant coconut rice and spicy sambal. It usually comes with accompaniments like fried chicken, cucumber, and anchovies, which add different textures. I enjoy it for breakfast or any time because the flavours are rich and satisfying.

Sugestão: Start with a correct past-tense topic sentence, avoid repetition, and supply specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct grammar (liked, was easy, did not). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: When I was young, I liked fried rice because it was easy to make and did not require special ingredients. For example, my family would add leftover vegetables and egg to create a quick, tasty meal.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct grammar, and give a specific example of seasonal changes. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and avoid vague phrasing. Limit to 2–3 clear sentences describing when and what changes.

Exemplo: Yes, I do because I get bored eating the same dishes all year. For example, in summer I prefer light salads and cold noodles, while in winter I choose soups and stews to feel warmer.

Sugestão: Use past and present tenses correctly, give a clear comparison and a reason for the change, and correct vocabulary. Use linking words (when, but, because) and be specific about when you changed your preference. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, it has. When I was a child I preferred fried rice because I could not handle the spiciness of nasi lemak, but as I grew older I developed a taste for spicier foods and now enjoy nasi lemak regularly.

× This is because it has spicy teeth and aromatic smell from coconut milk.

✓ This is because it has a spicy taste and an aromatic smell from coconut milk.

'spicy teeth' is incorrect collocation; the correct noun is 'taste'. Also 'aromatic smell' needs articles: 'a spicy taste' and 'an aromatic smell'. Use correct collocations and articles to describe sensory qualities.

× Other than that, it also come with side dishes such as cucumbers and fried chicken.

✓ Other than that, it also comes with side dishes such as cucumber and fried chicken.

The verb must agree with the singular subject 'it' so use 'comes'. Also 'cucumbers' can be 'cucumber' to match typical listing of side items or remain plural—choose singular noun 'cucumber' for general reference.

× We make it more interesting.

✓ We make it more interesting by adding different side dishes.

Original sentence is short and vague. Adding a phrase clarifies how it is made more interesting. Improve sentence structure by specifying the action.

× When I was young, I like to eat fried rice.

✓ When I was young, I liked to eat fried rice.

The time expression 'When I was young' refers to the past, so the verb should be in the past tense 'liked'.

× This is because fried rice has.

✓ This is because fried rice is convenient.

Original sentence is incomplete and missing the idea. Provide a complete predicate; here 'is convenient' gives a reason that fits the context.

× This is because fried rice easy to make and it do not require any specific ingredients.

✓ This is because fried rice is easy to make and it does not require any specific ingredients.

Missing verb 'is' after 'fried rice' and incorrect auxiliary 'do' with singular 'it'. Use 'is easy' and 'does not require' to form correct clauses.

× In addition, it is my favorite.

✓ In addition, it was my favorite.

Context indicates past preference 'when I was young', so tense should be past 'was'. If keeping present, ensure context matches; here past is appropriate.

× Yes I do, this is because when I it seem that our food every year it make me feel bored easily.

✓ Yes I do. This is because it seems that our food each year makes me feel bored easily.

Original has extra/misplaced words and incorrect verb forms. Fix word order and verb agreement: 'it seems' and 'makes me feel'. Use 'each year' for clarity.

× So rather than just eat the same types of food I like to vet variety of it.

✓ So rather than just eating the same types of food, I like to try a variety of them.

After 'rather than' use the -ing form 'eating'. 'vet' is wrong word; use 'try'. Also use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'types of food'.

× Yes it has.

✓ Yes, it has.

Add comma after 'Yes' for punctuation. The sentence is otherwise correct as a short response to 'Has your favourite food changed...'.

× When I was child I tend to eat fried rice more rather than nasi lemak because nasi lemak has spicy taste that I cannot control it.

✓ When I was a child I tended to eat fried rice more than nasi lemak because nasi lemak had a spicy taste that I could not tolerate.

Need article 'a child'. Tense should be past: 'tended'. Use 'more than' for comparisons. 'Has spicy taste' should be past 'had a spicy taste'. 'Cannot control it' is awkward; use 'could not tolerate' or 'could not handle the spiciness'. Remove redundant pronoun 'it'.

× But when I'm getting older I like to eat nasas.

✓ But as I got older, I began to like nasi lemak.

Shift to past narrative: 'as I got older' and 'began to like' match the past context. 'I'm getting older' is present progressive and inconsistent. 'nasas' is misspelling; correct to 'nasi lemak'.