Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent, concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, use correct singular/plural and measurements, and add one specific detail. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes. There are several tall residential buildings near my home. For example, about 1,000 meters away there is a cluster of apartment towers where many families live.

Sugestão: Express opinion clearly and use correct grammar. Avoid repetition and hesitations, explain briefly why with a specific reason, and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: No, I usually don’t take photos of buildings because I prefer to enjoy their appearance in person. For instance, when I visit a historic street I like to walk around and take in the atmosphere rather than photograph every building.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and a clear reason. Use a topic sentence (‘Yes’ or ‘No’), then one supporting detail. Avoid contradicting phrases and unfinished thoughts. Keep it to 1–2 clear sentences.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn’t want to visit the buildings near my home because they are private residences and it would be intrusive. Instead, I would like to visit a public landmark or museum in the city.

× Yes, let me think uh, my home, there are tall buildings that is people's house, person's house, umm, in addition, uh about 1000 MI meter, uh, there are there.

✓ Yes, let me think. Near my home there are tall buildings that are people’s houses. In addition, about 1000 meters away, there are more.

The original sentence contains subject-verb agreement errors and awkward noun forms. 'Buildings that is' is incorrect because the plural subject 'buildings' requires the plural verb 'are' (Grammar problem type ID 27). Also 'people's house, person's house' is inconsistent and should be the plural noun 'people’s houses' (Grammar problem type ID 1). '1000 MI meter' is unnecessary and should be '1000 meters' with a unit in plural to match the quantity (Grammar problem type ID 1). Suggestions: ensure verbs agree with plural subjects, use consistent plural nouns for multiple houses, and use correct plural measurement units. Use shorter sentences or punctuation to improve clarity.

× No, I definitely I, I don't, I hate take photos of buildings.

✓ No, I definitely don't. I hate taking photos of buildings.

The verb following 'hate' should be in the -ing form: 'hate taking' (Grammar problem type ID 10). The original also contains redundant fragmented pronouns 'I, I' and missing auxiliary contraction; remove duplication and use 'don't' for clarity. Suggestions: after verbs like 'hate', 'like', 'enjoy', use the gerund form of the following verb.

× I think it's doesn't, it doesn't make make sense.

✓ I think it doesn't make sense.

The original has an extra 'it's' and duplicated 'make' and incorrect contraction order. Use 'it doesn't' (it + does not) and a single 'make' to form the correct negative clause. This is an incorrect use/placement of pronouns and auxiliaries (Grammar problem type ID 12). Suggestion: avoid repeating pronouns and verbs; form contractions properly: 'it doesn't' = 'it does not'.

× Uh, I usually want to use my eyes to feel them if, if I take photos of, of buildings.

✓ I usually prefer to use my eyes to experience them rather than take photos of buildings.

The phrase 'want to use my eyes to feel them' is awkward; after 'prefer' or 'rather than' use the base verb or gerund consistently. Also 'if, if I take photos' is unnecessary repetition. The key grammar issue is correct use of verb forms and parallel structure (Grammar problem type ID 8). Suggestion: use 'prefer to' + base verb or 'rather than' + verb-ing for contrast and avoid repetition.

× And to be honest, I would like I wouldn't like to visit near my home's buildings because that that buildings are person's home house.

✓ To be honest, I wouldn't like to visit the buildings near my home because those buildings are people's houses.

Multiple pronoun and determiner errors: 'that that buildings' should be 'those buildings' to point to plural items (Grammar problem type ID 12). 'person's home house' is wrong — use 'people's houses' for plural ownership (Grammar problem type ID 1). Also 'I would like I wouldn't like' is contradictory and should be 'I wouldn't like'. Suggestions: choose correct demonstratives ('those' for plural), use plural possessive 'people’s', and avoid conflicting phrases.

× If you want to meet if you if you want to my.

✓ If you want to visit, you can come to my home.

The original is an incomplete and repetitive conditional clause lacking an object and proper verb structure (Grammar problem type ID 26). It repeats 'if you' and ends abruptly. Suggestion: complete the conditional with a clear result clause and avoid repetition: 'If you want to visit, you can come to my home.'