Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence stating whether tall buildings are near your home, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct word choice and grammar: use 'expensive' or 'high-rise' instead of 'high pricing', and name places correctly (not 'Skype'). Use linking words (but, however) appropriately and avoid run-on fragments.

Exemplo: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home because I live in a busy commercial district. For example, there are a few high-rise office towers on Main Street, but from my window I can also see the harbour and the mountains, which balance the city view.

Sugestão: Answer directly and stay on topic: begin by saying whether you take photos of buildings, then give specific details about where and why. Use correct grammar (I want to → I wanted to or I wanted to go on vacation; 'architectures' → 'architecture'). Avoid slang like 'wanna' in formal test. Use linking words to connect ideas and finish sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings. For instance, when I visited Italy last year I took many photos of Renaissance and Baroque architecture because I was fascinated by the ornate details and grand facades.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and give specific reasons: name the building correctly (St. Peter's Basilica), avoid incorrect phrasing ('it's very excited to go'). Explain why you want to visit and what you would do there, using suitable vocabulary and correct grammar. Use linking words to add details.

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit St. Peter's Basilica in Vatican City because it has stunning Renaissance art and architecture. I especially want to photograph the classical sculptures and the dome, and I hope to study the frescoes up close.

× Yes, certainly there are high pricing building in Skype near my place because I lived in a commercial district.

✓ Yes, certainly there are high-priced buildings in Skype near my place because I live in a commercial district.

The adjective phrase 'high pricing' is incorrect; use the compound adjective 'high-priced' to describe expensive buildings. 'Building' should be plural 'buildings' to match 'there are'. 'Lived' should be present tense 'live' to match the current state described. Suggestions: use 'high-priced' for expensive, ensure noun number agrees with 'there are', and keep tense consistent for present facts.

× Yeah, However, I can see the harbour view and the Mountain View outside my window.

✓ However, I can see the harbour and the mountain outside my window.

Use 'However' at the start of the sentence with appropriate punctuation. 'Harbour view' and 'Mountain View' are awkward; simpler 'the harbour' and 'the mountain' are natural. 'Mountain View' capitalized looks like a proper name; unless it is, use lowercase 'mountain'. Suggestions: avoid redundant 'view' after 'see', and use consistent capitalization.

× Yes, certainly I wanna go to vacation like I went to Italy last year.

✓ Yes, certainly I want to go on vacation as I did when I went to Italy last year.

'wanna' is informal colloquial speech; use 'want to'. The correct preposition is 'on vacation', not 'to vacation'. Use 'as I did when I went to Italy last year' to compare past experience. Suggestions: use 'want to' in formal speech and 'on vacation' for correct preposition.

× I took many photos of architectures and because it's very special.

✓ I took many photos of architecture because it was very special.

'Architectures' is incorrect; 'architecture' is an uncountable noun. Remove the extraneous 'and' and change 'it's' to 'it was' to match the past action 'I took'. Suggestions: use 'architecture' (uncountable) and align tense (past) across the sentence.

× The style in is a Renaissance and Baroque style.

✓ The style is Renaissance and Baroque.

Remove the misplaced preposition 'in' and avoid repeating 'style' twice. Use 'Renaissance and Baroque' without the article 'a' when referring to styles collectively. Suggestions: say 'The style is Renaissance and Baroque' or 'It is in the Renaissance and Baroque style'.

× So I.

✓ So I enjoyed taking photos of those buildings.

'So I.' is a sentence fragment lacking a verb and object. Complete the thought to match context: for example, 'So I enjoyed taking photos of those buildings.' Suggestions: always include a verb and complete idea; avoid sentence fragments.

× Yes, certainly it's very excited to go Saint Peters Church in particular cities because this is my dream place.

✓ Yes, certainly I'm very excited to go to Saint Peter's Church in that city because it is my dream place.

'It's very excited' is incorrect; use 'I'm very excited' to match the person experiencing the emotion. The verb 'go' needs the preposition 'to' before a place. Use the possessive 'Saint Peter's Church'. 'Particular cities' is unclear; use 'that city' or the specific city's name. Suggestions: use correct subject for emotions, include 'to' before destinations, and use the proper possessive name.

× I want to capture the classical statues of my camera.

✓ I want to capture the classical statues with my camera.

The phrase 'of my camera' is incorrect for the intended meaning; use the preposition 'with' to indicate the instrument used. 'Classical statues' is fine. Suggestions: use 'with my camera' to indicate the tool used for photographing.