Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatical, concise and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct articles and numbers, and avoid filler words. Use one or two supporting details and linking words to make it coherent.

Exemplo: Yes. I live in the suburbs, and there are many tall buildings nearby. For example, several apartment blocks have around 9 to 15 floors, which makes the skyline quite dense.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and smoother phrasing. Give a clear direct answer first, then a brief reason or condition using linking words (for example, "but" or "if"). Avoid hesitation words like "uh".

Exemplo: Not usually, but I would take photos if I saw an interesting building. For instance, if a façade has unusual decorations or bright colors, I would photograph it to remember the design.

Sugestão: Make the answer grammatically correct and concise. Use a clear present/past reference, a linking word to add detail, and specific descriptions of what attracts you (materials, style, history).

Exemplo: Yes, the National Opera House. Every time I visit, I like to take photos because it has colorful stained-glass windows and intricate architectural details. In particular, the ornate façades and the historic interior decorations catch my attention.

× I yes, I live in the suburb and there are lot of buildings that are typical for that city.

✓ Yes, I live in the suburbs and there are a lot of buildings that are typical for that city.

Error: singular/plural and missing article. 'suburb' should be plural 'suburbs' (common collocation: live in the suburbs) and 'there are lot of buildings' needs the quantifier phrase 'a lot of' before a plural noun. Suggestion: use common collocations and include 'a' with 'lot of'. ID:1

× There are a lot of block of flats with maybe a 910 or 15 floors.

✓ There are a lot of blocks of flats with maybe 9, 10 or 15 floors.

Error: plural forms and number formatting. 'block' must be plural 'blocks' to match 'a lot of', and 'a 910 or 15 floors' is incorrect — numbers should be separated and consistent: '9, 10 or 15 floors'. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns and write numbers clearly. ID:1

× I know I never done that, but I would like, uh, if I will see some fascinating buildings, I would like to memorize them and take pictures.

✓ No, I have never done that, but I would like to. If I see some fascinating buildings, I would like to remember them and take pictures.

Errors: incorrect tense forms and conditional use. 'I never done that' lacks auxiliary — correct present perfect is 'I have never done that'. 'If I will see' is incorrect in a real conditional; use present 'If I see'. 'Memorize' is awkward for keeping an image — 'remember' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'have + past participle' for experience, and use present tense in the if-clause of a first conditional. ID:5

× I like the National Opera House and every time when I visited I want to take pictures because there are a lot of colorful windows and some architectural designs that are really fascinating.

✓ I like the National Opera House, and every time I visit I want to take pictures because there are a lot of colorful windows and some architectural designs that are really fascinating.

Errors: tense inconsistency. 'Every time when I visited' mixes past with habitual present. For habitual actions use present simple: 'every time I visit'. Keep 'I want' to express the repeated desire. Suggestion: use consistent present tense for habitual actions. ID:6

× I yes, I live in the suburb and there are lot of buildings that are typical for that city.

✓ Yes, I live in the suburbs and there are a lot of buildings that are typical for that city.

Error: extraneous filler and awkward word order at sentence start. 'I yes,' is ungrammatical; start with 'Yes,' for a clear answer. Suggestion: remove the extra 'I' and begin with the short affirmative 'Yes,'. ID:26