Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer, grammatically correct and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct plural/singular errors and use precise vocabulary (e.g., “condominiums,” “construction”).

Exemplo: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home. For example, a new condominium complex has been built next to the recently opened train station, so the area has seen a lot of construction lately.

Sugestão: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect reasons and give a specific example of when or why you take photos. Improve grammar (e.g., "when I travel abroad" instead of "visit abroad") and correct noun forms.

Exemplo: Yes, I often photograph buildings when I travel abroad because I like capturing the character of different cities. For instance, last year I took many photos of historic facades and modern skyscrapers in Barcelona.

Sugestão: Clarify the building you mean and correct word choice ("visit" not "resist"). Give a clear reason and one specific detail about why it interests you. Use correct nouns and avoid filler words like "umm."

Exemplo: Yes. I would like to visit the Forbidden City in China because I am fascinated by its historic architecture and cultural significance. If I have the opportunity, I would spend a day exploring the palaces and learning about the Ming and Qing dynasties.

× Yes, there are a lot of building, like a tall building near my house, especially a condominium because around here they just set up the train station.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of buildings, like tall buildings near my house, especially condominiums because they recently set up a train station around here.

The noun 'building' should be plural after 'a lot of' (rule: 'a lot of' + plural count noun). Also 'a tall building' does not match 'a lot of' which implies multiple; make noun and determiners consistent. Use plural 'condominiums' when speaking generally. 'They recently set up' clarifies time and subject. Suggestion: match plural markers when indicating many items and keep determiners consistent.

× So that's have a lot of building right now.

✓ So there are a lot of buildings right now.

Original uses incorrect structure 'that's have' and singular 'building.' Use 'there are' for existence of plural nouns (There be issue and sentence structure). Also pluralize 'building.' Suggestion: use 'There is' for singular and 'There are' for plural and ensure verb agrees with noun number.

× Yes, I often do it when I visit abroad.

✓ Yes, I often do it when I travel abroad.

'Visit abroad' is nonstandard phrasing; collocation is 'travel abroad.' The verb 'visit' usually takes a specific place or person as object. Suggestion: use common collocations: 'travel abroad' for going to other countries.

× I'd love to capture the landscape of the town so and I love to travel in a city, so I capture a lot of a building.

✓ I'd love to capture the landscape of the town, and I love to travel in cities, so I take pictures of many buildings.

The original has redundant and misplaced conjunctions ('so and'), incorrect noun phrase 'a lot of a building' and awkward verb 'capture' for photos. Use 'and' to join two related ideas, pluralize 'cities' for general habit, and use 'take pictures of many buildings' or 'photograph many buildings.' Suggestion: avoid redundant conjunctions and use appropriate verbs and plural nouns for general statements.

× Is there a building that you would like to visit?

✓ Is there a building you would like to visit?

This sentence is acceptable, but removing 'that' makes it more natural. No major grammatical error; keep as is. Suggestion: optional omission of relative pronoun in informal speech.

× Yes, I would like to resist a iPhone and the Great War of China's.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the Forbidden City and the Great Wall of China.

'Resist' is incorrect word choice; 'visit' is intended. 'iPhone' is unrelated and likely a misheard word. The famous landmark is 'Great Wall of China' and the palace is 'Forbidden City.' Use correct proper nouns and verb 'visit.' Suggestion: check intended nouns and choose appropriate verbs for visiting places.

× I think is umm amazing to build this thing, so if I have an opportunity I will resist there.

✓ I think it is amazing that they built this, so if I have the opportunity I will visit it.

Missing subject 'it' after 'think' causes sentence fragment. 'To build this thing' is awkward; use 'that they built this' or 'that it was built.' 'Resist there' is wrong verb; use 'visit.' Also 'the opportunity' is the correct article. Suggestion: include required subjects, choose correct articles, and use appropriate verbs for intended meaning.