Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문장이 전반적으로 이해되지만 어색한 표현과 반복이 있습니다. 우선 주제 문장으로 직접 답한 뒤, Supporting detail을 연결할 때 연결어(for example, for instance, such as 등)를 자연스럽게 사용하세요. 또한 ‘highlight highlight blocks’처럼 중복된 단어를 제거하고 구체적인 단어(예: apartment blocks, skyscrapers, residential towers)를 사용하면 더 명확합니다. 문장 수는 2~3문장으로 간결하게 유지하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I live in an apartment and several tall residential towers surround my street. For example, you can easily see these apartment blocks from my living room window.

Sugestão: 의미 전달에 문제가 있고 단어 선택과 문장 구조에 오류가 있습니다. 'readings'와 'talking pictures'는 부적절한 표현입니다. 먼저 간단히 답한 뒤 이유와 빈도를 설명하세요. 연결어(especially, but)를 적절히 사용하되 문장 구조를 정확히 잡아야 합니다. 예: 'I sometimes photograph buildings, especially unique ones, but I mainly photograph people and landscapes.'처럼 표현하세요.

Exemplo: Sometimes I photograph buildings, especially when they are unique or beautiful, but I usually focus more on taking pictures of people and landscapes.

Sugestão: 답변은 명확하고 자연스럽지만 조금 더 구체적인 이유나 감정 표현을 추가하면 더 풍부해집니다. 연결어(for example, because)로 이유를 붙이고 한두 가지 구체적 기대(예: view from top, night illumination)를 덧붙이세요. 문장 길이는 2~3문장으로 유지하세요.

Exemplo: Yes. I would love to visit famous buildings abroad, such as the Eiffel Tower in Paris, because I want to enjoy the panoramic view from the top and see how it looks when it is illuminated at night.

Sugestão: 의도는 분명하지만 문법 오류와 문장 마무리가 부족합니다. 'prefer living a low rise building' 대신 'prefer living in a low-rise building'처럼 전치사와 하이픈을 정확히 쓰세요. 또한 예시 문장은 시제와 어순을 정리해 완결된 문장으로 만드세요. 예: 'For example, when I lived in a low-rise house before, I enjoyed having a small garden.'

Exemplo: No. Although I live in a high-rise apartment now, I prefer living in a low-rise building because it is usually quieter and more relaxed. For example, when I lived in a low-rise house before, I enjoyed having a small garden and more outdoor space.

× For example, several highlight highlight blocks surround my street and you can see them from my window.

✓ For example, several high-rise blocks surround my street and you can see them from my window.

The phrase 'several highlight highlight blocks' contains incorrect word choice and repetition; 'several' requires a plural noun, so 'blocks' is correct. Use 'high-rise' as a compound adjective before 'blocks'. Remove duplicated word. Suggestion: use 'several high-rise blocks' to be concise and grammatically correct.

× Yes, sometimes I take photos of readings especially I like talking pictures of unique or beautiful buildings, but I usually focus more on people on scenery.

✓ Yes, sometimes I take photos of buildings; especially, I like taking pictures of unique or beautiful buildings, but I usually focus more on people or scenery.

Errors include incorrect noun 'readings', wrong verb form 'talking pictures', and incorrect preposition 'on'. Use 'take photos of' or 'take pictures of'. 'Taking' is the correct verb+ing form after 'like'. Use 'or' to contrast 'people or scenery'. Also add punctuation to clarify clauses.

× Yes, I'd like to visit famous buildings in other countries.

✓ Yes, I'd like to visit famous buildings in other countries.

Sentence is acceptable, but consider adding 'the' before 'famous buildings' only if referring to specific famous buildings. No grammatical change needed. This is a note rather than a correction.

× No, I currently live in a high rise apartment but I prefer living a low rise building because it feels quieter and more relaxed.

✓ No, I currently live in a high-rise apartment, but I prefer living in a low-rise building because it feels quieter and more relaxed.

Missing preposition 'in' before 'a low-rise building' and use of compound adjective 'high-rise' and 'low-rise' should be hyphenated. Also add a comma before 'but'. Ensure 'living in a low-rise building' for correct noun phrase.

× For example when I live in a low rise lighthouse before I enjoy having a small garden and.

✓ For example, when I lived in a low-rise house before, I enjoyed having a small garden.

Tense is inconsistent: use past tense 'lived' and 'enjoyed' to match 'before'. 'Lighthouse' is wrong word; likely 'house'. Remove trailing 'and'. Add commas for clarity and hyphenate 'low-rise'. Use complete sentence structure.