Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise, correct grammar, avoid repetition and unclear phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Fix pronunciation/grammar like "tall tall" → "very tall", "In there is a small houses in big trees" → "There are small houses among large trees."

Exemplo: No, there are no very tall buildings near my home because I live in a quiet suburb. For example, most houses are low and surrounded by large trees, which makes the area peaceful and green.

Sugestão: Give a direct yes/no and then provide one clear reason with correct grammar and linking words. Remove hedging and fix errors like "a specific types" → "a specific type" and "for to show" → "to show".

Exemplo: Not usually, because I don't often take photos, but I sometimes photograph interesting architecture to show my family and friends. For instance, I took photos of a historic church last year because of its ornate façade.

Sugestão: Answer directly and avoid filler words. Use past/present consistently and give one specific reason and a brief detail. Correct phrases like "no any specific" → "no specific building", "Pisa building" → "the Leaning Tower of Pisa", and singular/plural agreement.

Exemplo: I don't have a single dream building to visit, but when I was in Italy I really wanted to see the Leaning Tower of Pisa because it is famous worldwide and has an interesting history dating back centuries.

Sugestão: Good clear topic sentence — reduce repetition and tighten language. Use one linking phrase to add a specific supporting reason. Fix repetition like "urban urban" → "urban" and consider adding a concrete example of the view or facilities.

Exemplo: Yes, I would. I prefer living in a tall building in a big city because it offers great views and easy access to shops and restaurants. For example, a high-floor apartment would give me a panoramic view of the skyline and nearby parks.

× There aren't any tall tall buildings near my home because I live in a suburban village.

✓ There aren't any tall buildings near my home because I live in a suburban village.

Duplicate word 'tall' is a repetition error and not an article issue; however the sentence uses 'a suburban village' which is okay. Remove the duplicated adjective to make the sentence natural. Suggestion: read aloud to catch accidental repetitions.

× In there is a small houses in big trees which makes our tiny area very relaxing and peaceful.

✓ There are small houses among big trees, which makes our tiny area very relaxing and peaceful.

Subject and verb agreement and number: 'a small houses' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'houses'. 'In there is' is incorrect word order. Use 'There are' for plural and 'among' or 'in' with 'trees'. Also add a comma before the relative clause. Suggestion: identify subject number and choose correct 'a/an' or plural form.

× I'm not a big fan of taking photos of anything so I guess I don't take photos of buildings, but sometimes there is a specific types of architecture that I want to capture for to show my family, to show my friends, so sometimes I do.

✓ I'm not a big fan of taking photos of anything, so I guess I don't take photos of buildings, but sometimes there are specific types of architecture that I want to capture to show my family and friends, so sometimes I do.

Number agreement and verb form errors: 'there is a specific types' mixes singular 'is a' with plural 'types'—use 'there are specific types'. Remove extra 'for' in 'for to show'. Use parallel structure 'family and friends'. Also add comma after introductory clause. Suggestion: match 'there is/are' to the noun number and avoid redundant prepositions.

× Uh, actually there is no any specific building that I'd like to visit, but when I have been in Italy, I really wanted to visit Pisa building.

✓ Uh, actually there isn't any specific building that I'd like to visit, but when I was in Italy, I really wanted to visit the Leaning Tower of Pisa.

'there is no any' is incorrect; use 'there isn't any' or 'there is no'. Tense and phrasing: 'when I have been in Italy' should be past simple 'when I was in Italy' for a past experience at a specific time. 'Pisa building' is not the correct name; use 'the Leaning Tower of Pisa' and include the definite article 'the'. Suggestion: use simple past for finished past events and learn proper names of landmarks.

× It's a very popular destination for any tourists and very historical buildings, so I'd like to visit it.

✓ It's a very popular destination for tourists and a very historical building, so I'd like to visit it.

Number and article errors: 'any tourists' is unnatural here; use 'tourists'. 'Very historical buildings' conflicts with singular 'it' referring to one building—use singular 'a very historical building' to match 'it'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns refer to singular/plural nouns and choose definite/indefinite articles accordingly.

× Yes, absolutely. I would like to live in a tall building but in a big city because it would offer a beautiful view from the windows and I'd like to enjoy being close to urban urban atmosphere.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I would like to live in a tall building in a big city because it would offer a beautiful view from the windows and I'd like to enjoy being close to the urban atmosphere.

Repetition 'urban urban' is an accidental duplication. Also include the definite article 'the' before 'urban atmosphere' to make the noun phrase natural. Suggestion: remove duplicate words and use articles with abstract nouns like 'atmosphere'.