Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Correct basic idea but language has grammar and word choice errors and some redundancy. Keep answer concise (1–3 sentences), start with a clear topic sentence, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Fix articles and countable noun forms (e.g., “a number of” or “many” instead of “amount of”), and say “a great view” not “have great view”.

Exemplo: Yes. I live in a big city, so there are many tall buildings nearby. For example, my apartment overlooks a cluster of skyscrapers, and I often enjoy the evening lights from my window.

Sugestão: Answer is unclear and contains grammar mistakes and filler words. Give a direct topic sentence (Yes/No), then explain one clear reason using a linking word. Avoid fillers like “uh” and incorrect structures such as “make me can't”.

Exemplo: Not often. I rarely photograph buildings because very tall ones block the wider scene, so I prefer taking pictures of small historic houses that show more detail.

Sugestão: Good idea but needs grammatical correction and more specificity. Start with a direct response, then name a type or a specific building and give a concrete reason, using linking words such as “because” or “for example.” Change “contain” to “contains” and “make me feel interesting” to “interest me” or “fascinate me.”

Exemplo: Yes. I would like to visit an old historic museum because it contains many stories about the city’s past, and for example I’m curious to see original artifacts and exhibits.

Sugestão: Clear response but some awkward phrasing and minor grammar issues. Keep to 1–3 sentences: give a topic sentence, then one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Use natural expressions like “I can see the river at sunset” and correct verb forms (e.g., “which makes me feel comfortable”).

Exemplo: Yes. I would like to live in a tall building because I can enjoy views of the river at sunset, which makes me feel relaxed after a long day.

× I live in a big city so there are amount of tall buildings.

✓ I live in a big city, so there are a number of tall buildings.

The phrase 'amount of' is used with uncountable nouns; 'a number of' or 'many' should be used with countable nouns like 'buildings'. Also added a comma for clarity.

× I like to have great view from the window of top buildings which always make me relax.

✓ I like to have a great view from the windows of tall buildings, which always helps me relax.

Missing article 'a' before 'great view' (article error) and 'window' should be plural or specified; 'top buildings' is better as 'tall buildings'. 'Make me relax' is incorrect collocation: use 'helps me relax'. Also added commas for clause separation.

× I seldom take photos of buildings I'd like to.

✓ I seldom take photos of buildings, although I would like to.

Sentence structure is awkward and missing conjunction; 'I'd like to' needs an explicit contrastive conjunction 'although' to match meaning. Also added a comma.

× Ignore the high buildings because they, uh, they make me can't see far away.

✓ I ignore the high buildings because they make it hard for me to see far away.

Pronoun and verb construction errors: 'they make me can't see' is ungrammatical. Use 'make it hard for me to' + base verb. Removed repetition 'they, uh, they'.

× I like to visit the building which has a long history and contain a lot of stories which make me feel interesting.

✓ I like to visit buildings that have a long history and contain many stories that I find interesting.

Subject-verb agreement and relative clause issues: 'building which has' is fine but 'contain' should be 'contains' if singular; better to pluralize to 'buildings that have' and use 'contain many stories'. 'Which make me feel interesting' is incorrect: you 'find something interesting'. Revised to natural phrasing.

× Yes, I like to live in a tall building because I enjoy the view from the window.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I enjoy the view from the window.

Context of desire uses conditional/modal 'would like' rather than simple present 'like'. 'I like to live' can sound like a habitual action; 'would like to live' matches the question about preference.

× Imagine that you have a great view of sunshine of the river every evening, which make me comfortable.

✓ Imagine that you have a great view of the river and the sunset every evening, which makes me feel comfortable.

Phrase 'view of sunshine of the river' is unnatural; 'view of the river and the sunset' is clearer. 'Which make me comfortable' has subject-verb agreement error; 'which makes me feel comfortable' is correct. Added 'feel' for natural collocation.