Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce grammar errors, make the response more concise and natural, and use linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct subject-verb agreement and article use (e.g., “There are no tall buildings near my home” and “I live in a provincial area”).

Exemplo: There are no tall buildings near my home because I live in a provincial area. Most houses here are single-storey, and occasionally I see buildings of two floors, but nothing high-rise.

Sugestão: Good content and natural phrasing. To improve further, add a linking phrase and one specific example of a building you photographed to make the answer more vivid. Avoid small redundancies like “so I usually” twice.

Exemplo: Yes, I often photograph buildings when I travel because I’m drawn to unusual designs and vivid colors. For example, I took many photos of Gaudí’s Casa Batlló in Barcelona and later posted them on my social media as a travel memory.

Sugestão: Clarify and tighten the answer: use a clear topic sentence, correct articles and phrasing (“one of the tallest”), and provide specific reasons. Avoid unfinished sentences and vague phrases like “and what.”

Exemplo: I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is one of the tallest buildings in the world. I want to see the panoramic view from the observation deck and study the building’s innovative design up close.

Sugestão: Make the response more formal and correct word choice (“wanna” → “want to”; “synaptic view” → “spectacular view”). Use a clear topic sentence then one or two specific supporting details, and ensure grammar consistency.

Exemplo: If I lived in the city, I would like to live in a tall building, for example a 50th-floor condo. From there I could enjoy a spectacular view of the skyline and relax on a spacious balcony.

× There is no tall buildings near our home because I live in a province area or regional area.

✓ There are no tall buildings near our home because I live in a provincial area or a regional area.

Subject-verb agreement with 'there is/there are': 'buildings' is plural, so use 'there are'. Also use correct adjective form 'provincial' and include article 'a' before 'regional area' for correctness.

× So basically the house here are just one floor or just sometimes I saw a few like 2 floors but no there's no tall buildings around the area.

✓ So basically the houses here are just one floor, although sometimes I see a few that are two floors, but there are no tall buildings in the area.

Multiple errors: 'house' should be plural 'houses' to match 'are'; tense consistency: use present simple 'see' instead of past 'saw' when speaking generally; write numbers as words in formal speech 'two'; double negation 'but no there's no' simplified to 'but there are no'; preposition 'in the area' is correct. This fixes subject-verb agreement and tense consistency.

× I'm drawn to unusual architectural designs, vivid colors, and skyscrapers, so I usually take pictures as a souvenir and post it on my social media.

✓ I'm drawn to unusual architectural designs, vivid colors, and skyscrapers, so I usually take pictures as souvenirs and post them on my social media.

Countable noun agreement and pronoun reference: 'a souvenir' is singular while 'pictures' is plural; use plural 'souvenirs'. Also include pronoun 'them' to refer back to 'pictures'.

× I think I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai as it is the one of the tallest building in the world.

✓ I think I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai as it is one of the tallest buildings in the world.

Use 'one of the' without 'the' before 'one', and 'building' should be plural 'buildings' after 'one of the' since it refers to a group. Removed extra 'the'.

× I'd like to see in my personal eyes the view up there and the actual architectural style and what.

✓ I'd like to see the view from up there with my own eyes and observe the actual architectural style.

Awkward word order and unnecessary filler 'and what'. 'In my personal eyes' is nonnative; use 'with my own eyes'. 'See the view from up there' is clearer and 'observe' fits 'architectural style'.

× If I'm in the city I would definitely wanna live in the tall building, for example a condo on a 50th floor where there's a nice synaptic view of the skyline and have a spacious balcony where I could relax.

✓ If I'm in the city I would definitely want to live in a tall building, for example a condo on the 50th floor where there's a nice panoramic view of the skyline and a spacious balcony where I could relax.

Colloquial 'wanna' should be 'want to' in formal speech. Use article 'a tall building' not 'the tall building'. Floor ordinal: 'the 50th floor'. 'Synaptic' is incorrect word choice; use 'panoramic' for wide views. Maintain parallel structure: 'there's a nice panoramic view ... and a spacious balcony'.