Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, fix grammar (e.g. "I'm I'm", "limited infrastructure"), and limit to a maximum of five sentences. Add one specific detail about where taller buildings can be found and use a linking phrase to show contrast.

Exemplo: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home because I live in a rural area with limited infrastructure. However, I can find taller buildings in the nearby town about 20 minutes away, where there are a few apartment blocks and a shopping mall.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer, remove fillers (umm, uh), and use precise vocabulary to explain reasons. Use one linking word to add a supporting detail and keep within five sentences.

Exemplo: Not really. I prefer photographing mountain scenery because the natural views feel more dramatic and authentic, and I enjoy capturing changing light and weather conditions when I hike.

Sugestão: Answer directly and remove hesitations. State the specific place clearly, give concise reasons with one or two supporting details (e.g. architectural style, materials, history), and use linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Actually, I would like to visit a house in my neighborhood that has unique traditional architecture. I want to see its wooden beams and carved windows up close because the craftsmanship and the cozy ambience look fascinating.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion sentence, avoid filler words and grammar errors (e.g. "That makes myself feel happy"), and provide one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Keep sentences concise and natural.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building. I prefer a house with several rooms, a garden and a terrace because I value private outdoor space and more room for family activities.

× There aren't any tall buildings nearby where I live because I'm I'm from a rural area where there are very limited infrastructure and buildings so I couldn't find any tall buildings, but there are several places where I can find such.

✓ There aren't any tall buildings near where I live because I'm from a rural area where there is very limited infrastructure and few buildings, so I can't find any tall buildings, but there are several places where I can find some.

Incorrect use of prepositions and related wording: 'nearby where I live' is awkward; use 'near where I live' or 'nearby' alone. 'Very limited infrastructure' requires singular verb 'is' because 'infrastructure' is uncountable; 'few buildings' is preferable to 'very limited buildings'. 'Couldn't' conflicts with present context, so use 'can't'. 'Such' is vague; use 'some' or repeat 'tall buildings'. Suggestions: use 'near where I live', match countability and verb number with uncountable nouns, and keep tense consistent with present situation.

× There aren't any tall buildings nearby where I live because I'm I'm from a rural area where there are very limited infrastructure and buildings so I couldn't find any tall buildings, but there are several places where I can find such.

✓ There aren't any tall buildings near where I live because I'm from a rural area where there is very limited infrastructure and few buildings, so I can't find any tall buildings, but there are several places where I can find some.

Subject-verb agreement: 'there are very limited infrastructure' is incorrect because 'infrastructure' is an uncountable noun and takes singular verb 'is'. Also 'few buildings' matches plural. Suggestion: identify noun countability and choose correct verb form.

× There aren't any tall buildings nearby where I live because I'm I'm from a rural area where there are very limited infrastructure and buildings so I couldn't find any tall buildings, but there are several places where I can find such.

✓ There aren't any tall buildings near where I live because I'm from a rural area where there is very limited infrastructure and few buildings, so I can't find any tall buildings, but there are several places where I can find some.

Tense consistency: speaker refers to a current situation, so present tense 'can't' is appropriate instead of past 'couldn't'. Suggestion: use present tense for current facts or situations.

× Rather than taking pictures of buildings, I prefer capturing mountain sceneries and all because it makes me, umm, realistic and, uh, exciting to, uh, to capture it.

✓ Rather than taking pictures of buildings, I prefer capturing mountain scenery because it makes me feel more connected to nature and excited to capture it.

Word form and idiom: 'mountain sceneries' is incorrect; 'scenery' is uncountable. 'Makes me realistic' is wrong; emotion verbs need 'feel' + adjective (e.g., 'feel excited' or 'feel more connected'). Remove filler words and repeated 'to'. Suggestion: use 'mountain scenery', use 'feel' with emotions, and simplify phrasing.

× Rather than taking pictures of buildings, I prefer capturing mountain sceneries and all because it makes me, umm, realistic and, uh, exciting to, uh, to capture it.

✓ Rather than taking pictures of buildings, I prefer capturing mountain scenery because it makes me feel more connected to nature and excited to capture it.

Incorrect adjective use: 'realistic' is an adjective meaning 'lifelike', not an emotion. The speaker likely meant an emotional reaction, so use 'feel excited' or 'feel fulfilled'. Suggestion: choose adjectives that match intended meaning and use 'feel' for emotional states.

× Uh, rather than a building, there is a near neighborhood house nearby mine. I want to visit that particular house to see how that is built in the architecture, the way it is constructed. I'm so into it because the, uh, ambience is so cool and exciting and thrilling.

✓ Rather than a building, there is a nearby house in the neighborhood near mine. I want to visit that particular house to see its architecture and how it was constructed. I'm really into it because the ambience is so cool and exciting.

Preposition and word order: 'a near neighborhood house nearby mine' is awkward and repetitive; use 'a nearby house in the neighborhood near mine' or 'a house in the neighboring area'. 'See how that is built in the architecture' is incorrect phrasing; use 'see its architecture and how it was constructed.' Also simplify redundant adjectives. Suggestion: use clearer prepositions ('nearby', 'in the neighborhood near mine') and concise phrasing.

× Uh, rather than a building, there is a near neighborhood house nearby mine. I want to visit that particular house to see how that is built in the architecture, the way it is constructed. I'm so into it because the, uh, ambience is so cool and exciting and thrilling.

✓ Rather than a building, there is a nearby house in the neighborhood near mine. I want to visit that particular house to see its architecture and how it was constructed. I'm really into it because the ambience is so cool and exciting.

Use of past participle: 'how that is built in the architecture' should use past participle or passive form 'how it was constructed' or active 'how they built it.' Suggestion: use correct passive voice with past participle for finished actions ('was constructed').

× I don't want to live in a tall building. I want my own space, A house where there are many rooms, my garden, uh, terrace. That makes myself feel happy more than living in a space where which is very limited.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building. I want my own space: a house with many rooms, a garden and a terrace. That makes me feel happier than living in a very limited space.

Tense and general expression: use present tense 'I don't want' and 'I want' (already correct). Also correct pronoun and comparative structure: 'That makes myself feel happy more' is incorrect; use 'That makes me feel happier'. Remove 'where which' redundancy. Suggestions: use 'me' instead of 'myself' for simple object, use comparative 'happier than', and arrange list with 'a house with...'.