Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Use correct articles and prepositions (e.g., 'in my town' or 'near my house'). Avoid repetition and incorrect words.

Exemplo: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my house. I live in a small suburban area, and most of the buildings are two- or three-storey houses rather than high-rises.

Sugestão: Give a clear yes/no answer, then add a specific reason and an example. Use correct verb forms and avoid unclear phrases (e.g., 'photos with welding' is unclear). Mention one or two places and what you photograph.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I visit nearby cities. For example, in Chandigarh I photograph the modern high-rises and striking facades because I find their design very attractive.

Sugestão: Answer with one specific building and one clear reason why you want to visit. Use linking words (because, therefore) and avoid repetition. Provide a concrete detail about facilities or features you like.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Lanta Mall in Chandigarh because it has modern architecture and many facilities, such as a large food court and cinemas. I usually go there to shop and enjoy the atmosphere.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly and give two specific reasons using linking words. Use correct nouns (building, not 'wedding') and avoid awkward phrasing. Mention practical advantages (views, facilities, convenience).

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it offers good views and modern facilities like a gym and security. Also, living in an apartment complex is convenient for socialising with friends and accessing shops nearby.

× No, they are not all building near in my house because I live in urban area so that there are no any tall building near my house.

✓ No, there are no tall buildings near my house because I live in a rural area.

Subject-verb agreement and plural/singular issues: 'they are not all building near in my house' is ungrammatical. Use 'there are no tall buildings' (correct existential 'there be' with plural noun). 'Urban area' contradicts context; likely 'rural area' was intended — if not, keep 'urban' but 'there are no tall buildings' remains. Remove 'any' after 'no'. Also fix word order: 'near my house'. Suggested improvement: Use 'There is/There are' for existence and match verb number to noun (singular/plural).

× Yes, when I go with my friend in a city like Chandigarh, Ludhiana and Bathinda and that time I take a lot of photos because in Chandigarh side there are a lot of tall buildings and very beautiful so that I like it so much.

✓ Yes, when I go to cities like Chandigarh, Ludhiana, and Bathinda with my friends, I take a lot of photos because there are many tall and very beautiful buildings in Chandigarh, so I like it very much.

Incorrect use of prepositions and word order: Use 'go to a city' not 'go with my friend in a city'. Pluralize friends if more than one or use 'my friend' and adjust verb forms. Use 'there are many' for countable plural (quantifier). Place adjectives before nouns ('tall and very beautiful buildings'). Use 'very much' rather than 'so that I like it so much'. Suggested improvement: Pay attention to prepositions 'go to', correct placement of adjectives, and use appropriate quantifiers for plural nouns.

× And that time I take photos with welding.

✓ At that time I take photos while walking.

Verb + -ing form and word choice: 'with welding' is incorrect; likely intended 'walking'. When describing simultaneous actions, use 'while' + verb-ing ('while walking'). Suggested improvement: Use 'while' plus present participle to indicate simultaneous actions (e.g., 'while walking I take photos').

× I like many buildings but sometimes when I go with my friend in Chandigarh and that time I like Lanta mall because the building is so good and there are lot of facilities valuable in this building so that I like it so much.

✓ I like many buildings, but when I go to Chandigarh with my friend, I especially like Lanta Mall because the building is very nice and it has many valuable facilities, so I like it a lot.

Present tense usage and several issues: Use 'go to Chandigarh' (preposition), maintain present simple for habitual actions ('I like'), and correct quantifier 'a lot of facilities' plus adjective order ('valuable facilities'). Replace 'so that I like it so much' with 'so I like it a lot.' Suggested improvement: Use consistent tense for habits and correct prepositions and quantifiers.

× And when I visit in this building and that time I do shopping because they are close in very good and so that very attractive so that I like it so much.

✓ When I visit this building, I do shopping because the shops are very good and attractive, so I like it a lot.

Past tense issue and sentence structure: 'visit in this building' should be 'visit this building' and habitual present 'I do shopping' is fine; avoid 'they are close in very good'. Use 'the shops are very good and attractive.' Simplify 'so that I like it so much' to 'so I like it a lot.' Suggested improvement: Remove unnecessary words, use correct nouns ('shops'), and keep consistent present tense for habitual actions.

× Yes Sir I want to live in a tall wedding because I think that when I live in tall buildings that time I get lot of facilities and like about luxury lifestyle and easily live lifestyle with friends so I think that I live in tall building.

✓ Yes, Sir. I want to live in a tall building because I think that when I live in a tall building I will get many facilities and enjoy a more comfortable, luxurious lifestyle, and it will be easy to live with friends, so I would like to live in a tall building.

Third person singular and modal/future usage: 'wedding' is wrong word — use 'building'. Tense and agreement: use 'I will get' for future results, 'many facilities' (quantifier), and consistent singular/plural ('a tall building'). Also use appropriate modals ('would like') for preference. Correct sentence structure and repetition. Suggested improvement: Use correct vocabulary ('building'), proper quantifiers, and use future/modal forms to express intention and preference.