Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + summary), avoid hesitation and redundant phrases, and add one specific detail or comparison. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes. There are a few recently built apartment blocks near my home, but they are not very tall compared with city skyscrapers. Because my area is mostly detached houses, these new buildings stand out as the highest structures around.

Sugestão: Be more natural and precise. Use a topic sentence, then give specific examples and reasons. Replace awkward phrasing ("they have", "they are like") with concise vocabulary and linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes photograph buildings, especially those with striking architecture. For example, I often take pictures of historic and modern landmarks in central London because their facades and shapes are visually impressive.

Sugestão: Clarify which building you mean and give a complete, coherent reason. Avoid filler words and finish your thoughts. Use linking words to explain why you want to visit and what you expect to experience.

Exemplo: Yes. I would like to visit the Sky Garden in London because I haven't been there yet and I want to enjoy the rooftop views over the city. People often say the panorama is fantastic, so I hope to see landmarks like the Thames and St Paul’s Cathedral from above.

Sugestão: Provide a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons. Avoid fragmented sentences and vague phrases. Use linking words to contrast temporary versus long-term preferences.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't like to live permanently in a tall building because I prefer the privacy and space of a house. However, staying temporarily in a high-rise overlooking the city could be nice for the views, since you can wake up and see the skyline and major landmarks.

× Near my house there are some buildings that they have umm built recently and they are not super high, but considering that this is like more a neighborhood that it has houses right in that building.

✓ Near my house there are some buildings that have been built recently, and they are not very tall, because this is more of a neighborhood with houses rather than tall buildings.

The sentence uses redundant pronoun 'they' after 'buildings that' which is incorrect; relative clauses should not repeat the subject with a pronoun. Also awkward phrasing 'that it has houses right in that building' is unclear. Use the passive 'have been built' for recent completed actions and restructure for clarity. Suggested improvement: remove redundant pronouns after relative pronouns, use appropriate passive or active verb forms ('have been built'), and simplify the clause order for clarity.

× Those are the tallest tallest one in the area.

✓ Those are the tallest ones in the area.

The subject 'Those' is plural, so the noun phrase should be plural ('ones'), not singular 'one'. Also duplicate 'tallest' is a repetition. Use 'tallest ones' to match plural subject and comparative structure. Suggested improvement: ensure plural demonstratives match plural nouns and avoid repetition.

× I just take photos of buildings that they have an impressive structure or they are pretty.

✓ I just take photos of buildings that have an impressive structure or are pretty.

Again, the relative clause 'that have' should not include an extra subject pronoun 'they'. Remove 'they' to form correct relative clauses. Also use parallel structure: 'have an impressive structure or are pretty.' Suggested improvement: omit unnecessary pronouns in relative clauses and keep parallel verb forms.

× For example, the ones in central London which they are like a remarkable buildings.

✓ For example, the ones in central London are remarkable buildings.

The phrase includes unnecessary fillers ('which they are like') and incorrect article use ('a remarkable buildings' mixes singular article with plural noun). Remove fillers and match article to noun number: here 'buildings' is plural, so no 'a'. Suggested improvement: eliminate filler phrases, use correct article-noun agreement, and keep clauses concise.

× Yes, I would like to visit this umm 22 garden one or the chair which is in London.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the Sky Garden on the 22nd floor, or the Shard in London.

The original sentence is unclear and mixes references ('22 garden one or the chair'). It seems to attempt to name attractions but uses incorrect words. Clarify proper nouns and structure: 'Sky Garden' and 'the Shard' are common London locations; '22nd floor' specifies level. Use definite articles with named buildings as appropriate. Suggested improvement: use correct names for landmarks and clear noun phrases; avoid fillers like 'umm' in formal responses.

× I haven't visited and I would like to have the experience of a rooftop view and being in sky garden and I like the view but everyone says that they.

✓ I haven't visited it, and I would like to experience a rooftop view at the Sky Garden. I like the view, and everyone says it is beautiful.

Missing object after 'haven't visited' (add 'it') and awkward gerund phrase 'have the experience of a rooftop view and being in sky garden'. Use 'experience a rooftop view at the Sky Garden' for clarity. The sentence ends incomplete ('everyone says that they'); complete the clause with a clear subject and complement ('everyone says it is beautiful'). Suggested improvement: include necessary objects, avoid redundant gerunds, and finish thoughts with complete clauses.

× No, I will not like to live in a tall building.

✓ No, I would not like to live in a tall building.

Use 'would' to express preference or hypothetical desire; 'will not like' implies future inability rather than preference. 'Would not like' is the correct modal for stating dislike or preference. Suggested improvement: use 'would' for preferences and hypothetical statements.

× I would say that for a short period it will be nice to live in a building in front of a city.

✓ I would say that for a short period it would be nice to live in a building overlooking the city.

Mixing 'would' and 'will' creates tense inconsistency; use 'would' to maintain hypothetical tone. 'In front of a city' is awkward; 'overlooking the city' or 'facing the city' is more natural. Suggested improvement: keep modal consistency and use natural prepositional phrases for location.

× That will be nice because you will wake up and see.

✓ That would be nice because you would wake up and see the view.

The sentence is fragmentary and lacks an object after 'see'. Also maintain modal consistency with 'would' for hypothetical preference. Add 'the view' to complete the thought. Suggested improvement: complete sentences with required objects and keep modal tense consistent.