Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um), correct grammar (e.g., 'in an area' and 'there are buildings'), and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. I live in an area of Brampton that is quite far from the commercial centre, so most buildings are low-rise. As a result, the neighbourhood feels quieter and more residential.

Sugestão: Answer directly first, avoid hesitation and irrelevant details. Use one or two specific reasons with linking words (e.g., 'because' or 'so') and correct collocations ('listen to music', 'scroll reels'). Keep sentences concise.

Exemplo: Not really. I rarely take photos of buildings because I mainly use my phone to listen to music and for work-related tasks, so I don't carry a camera mindset when I walk around.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, reduce fillers, and be specific about what attracts you. Use linking words like 'however' or 'because' and correct phrasing ('historic buildings', 'I've heard from friends'). Limit to two or three concise sentences.

Exemplo: I don't have a specific building in mind, but I would like to visit Montreal. I've heard from friends that the city has many beautiful historic buildings, especially in Old Montreal, and I'd like to see their architecture and cobblestone streets.

Sugestão: Respond directly, avoid hesitation and grammatical errors. Use a clear structure: topic sentence, one specific reason with a linking word (e.g., 'because'), and a brief contrast if relevant. Use correct nouns ('a house', 'an apartment') and avoid vague phrases.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I have always lived in houses in India and Canada and I prefer the privacy and outdoor space they offer. However, I might consider an apartment in a tall building if it had good amenities and a convenient location.

× it is quite hard to say building nearby my home

✓ it is quite hard to say there are buildings near my home

Missing plural and 'there are' structure. Use plural 'buildings' for general nearby structures and include the existential 'there are' to form a correct sentence. Suggestion: use 'there is/there are' + plural noun when stating existence of multiple items.

× I live in uh, area in Brampton that is quite far from the, the commercial area

✓ I live in an area in Brampton that is quite far from the commercial area

Missing article 'an' before 'area' and extra comma/article repetition. Use the indefinite article 'an' before a singular countable noun starting with a vowel sound. Remove the repeated 'the'.

× I use my phone only to listen music sometimes and to scroll reels or to do uh, work related stuff

✓ I use my phone only to listen to music sometimes and to scroll reels or to do work-related stuff

Missing preposition 'to' after 'listen' and hyphenation for compound adjective 'work-related'. Also maintain simple present; add 'to' for correct verb+infinitive structure and hyphen for clarity.

× Otherwise I don't use my phone to take photos and everything

✓ Otherwise I don't use my phone to take photos or anything else

Awkward use of 'and everything'. Use 'or anything else' for natural spoken English and parallel structure. 'Everything' here is vague; 'anything else' fits negative contexts.

× There's no building that is specifically in my mind right now to visit personal

✓ There's no building that is specifically on my mind right now to visit personally

Wrong preposition 'in my mind' -> 'on my mind' and wrong form 'personal' -> adverb 'personally'. Also 'building' could be fine singular if speaking of a single one; sentence improved by these corrections.

× I do want to visit, uh, Montreal because I have heard from like some of my friends that they are more like, you know, uh, very beautiful buildings in Montreal that are, you know, in ancient maybe

✓ I do want to visit Montreal because I have heard from some of my friends that there are many very beautiful, historic buildings in Montreal

Awkward pronoun/reference and filler words removed. 'They are' incorrectly refers to friends; use 'there are' to state existence of buildings. Replace 'in ancient maybe' with 'historic' and reorder adjectives 'many very beautiful, historic buildings'.

× as I have never experienced to, uh, to live in such building

✓ as I have never had the experience of living in such a building

Incorrect use of 'experienced to live'. Use present perfect 'have never had the experience of' + gerund 'living' or 'have never lived in such a building'. Also include article 'a' before 'building'.

× I have always been living in house while I was in India or Canada

✓ I have always lived in a house while I was in India and in Canada

Use 'lived' or present perfect 'have always lived' for habitual past extending to present; include article 'a' before 'house'. Use 'and in Canada' instead of 'or Canada' if meaning both places. Also 'have always been living' is less natural than 'have always lived'.

× So, uh, I don't really find it very like, you know, overwhelming to live there

✓ So, I don't really find the idea of living there overwhelming

Awkward filler words and structure. Rephrase to 'find the idea of living there overwhelming' for clarity and conciseness; remove extra fillers 'like, you know'.