Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevap daha doğrudan ve düzenli olmalı. Konu cümlesiyle doğrudan yanıt verin, ardından kısa bir bağlaç ile detay verin. Örneğin konum ve mesafe hakkında net ifadeler kullanın, gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

Exemplo: Not really. I live in a residential area of Istanbul, so the tall buildings are mostly concentrated in the city centre, which is quite far from my home.

Sugestão: Cümleleri daha kısa ve akıcı kurun, dolgu kelimelerini (uh, um) azaltın ve neden fotoğraf çektiğinizi açıkça belirtin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak sebep-sonuç ilişkisi verin ve somut örnek ekleyin.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings, especially when I travel abroad, because architectural details remind me of the place. For example, when I visited a historic district I photographed the facades to remember the atmosphere.

Sugestão: Cevap net ve mantıklı ancak tekrarlar ve dolgu sesleri azaltılmalı. Neden gitmek istediğinizi daha spesifik nedenlerle destekleyin (mimari özellik, gözlem güvertesi deneyimi vb.) ve kısa bir bağlama yer verin.

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa. I have never been to Dubai, and I want to see its observation deck because the views and the building's modern architecture are impressive; I would also take photos from the top.

Sugestão: Daha doğal ve doğru dil kullanımı gerekli. Konu cümlesiyle doğrudan cevap verin, ardından iki kısa destekleyici cümleyle nedenlerinizi açıklayın. Dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (e.g. "at the top", "I can always").

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I enjoy panoramic views. Living near the top would let me look over the city every morning and take photos of the skyline.

× No, there are a few tall buildings far away from my home in Istanbul where I live and have a lot of tall buildings in the center.

✓ No, there are only a few tall buildings near my home; most tall buildings are far from where I live in Istanbul, and there are many tall buildings in the city center.

The original sentence mixes locations and plurality confusingly. Use 'a few' or 'only a few' to indicate small number and keep plural 'buildings'. Clarify clauses with punctuation and conjunctions to show contrast: 'near my home' versus 'in the city center'. Use 'many' for large numbers in the center. Suggestions: split into two clauses and use commas or a semicolon to separate ideas.

× Yes, I am very interested in capturing of the view uh, especially if I have overseas, I would like to take a photo of uh, the buildings or the towers.

✓ Yes, I am very interested in capturing views; when I travel overseas, I like to take photos of buildings and towers.

Remove the incorrect preposition 'of' after 'capturing' and use plural 'views' or 'the view' correctly. 'If I have overseas' is ungrammatical; use 'when I travel overseas'. Use 'take photos' (plural) for general habit. Suggestions: use 'capturing views' or 'capturing the view' and 'when I travel overseas' for clarity.

× It helps me uh, feel more individuals than I have been on my daily life because uh, when I look at the towers or and I.

✓ It helps me feel more like an individual than I do in my daily life because when I look at towers I feel different and inspired.

Original is fragmented and unclear: 'feel more individuals' is incorrect; use 'feel more like an individual'. 'Than I have been on my daily life' is incorrect tense and preposition; use 'than I do in my daily life'. The clause 'when I look at the towers or and I' is incomplete. Suggestions: complete the thought, use proper comparatives and a clear concluding clause.

× Yes, I would like to visit Burj Khalifa. I have never been to Dubai before but I have heard many good uh, views, uh, about the city and the Burj Khalifa because it is the tallest buildings in the world.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa. I have never been to Dubai, but I have heard many good things about the city and the Burj Khalifa because it is the tallest building in the world.

Use the article 'the' with specific buildings: 'the Burj Khalifa'. 'Heard many good views' is incorrect; use 'heard many good things' or 'heard many positive reviews'. 'It is the tallest buildings' is wrong number agreement; use singular 'building'. Suggestions: use correct articles and ensure singular/plural agreement with 'tallest building'.

× So I would like to see the view from the top and take some photos.

✓ So I would like to see the view from the top and take some photos.

Sentence is correct; no preposition error. Keep as is. Explanation: 'from the top' is correct prepositional phrase, and 'take some photos' is appropriate. No change needed.

× Yes, I would like to live in a tall building. It's my dream because I think that if I live at top of the buildings, I always can watch the landscape and the capture of the view.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building. It's my dream because I think that if I live at the top of a building, I could always watch the landscape and enjoy the view.

Use article 'the top' with 'at the top' and singular 'a building' for a general statement. 'I always can' has unusual word order; use 'I could always' or 'I would always be able to'. 'The capture of the view' is awkward; use 'enjoy the view' or 'capture the view with photos'. Suggestions: correct article use, modal placement, and choose natural verbs like 'enjoy' or 'take photos'.

× That's why I always move to tall buildings in east.

✓ That's why I would always move to tall buildings in the east.

Use 'would' or 'want to' for hypothetical/future preference: 'I would always move' or 'I always want to move'. 'In east' is missing the article 'the' and needs 'the east' or a direction like 'the eastern part of the city'. Suggestions: add 'the' and use correct modal or verb form for preference.