Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 表达不够自然且有语法错误，信息也不够具体。建议先用一句主题句直接回答（有/没有/有几座），然后用1–2个简短句子补充具体细节（例如建筑的用途、高度或为何是地标）。注意主谓一致和时态，避免多余词组。

Exemplo: Yes, there is a very tall skyscraper near my home. It houses the CIBC Bank and stands out on the skyline, so many local people use it as a landmark when giving directions.

Sugestão: 句子重复，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议先直接回答（是/否），然后用一两句说明原因或感受，使用恰当的词汇并避免重复。可以用连词连接原因使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because it helps me relax and clears my mind. Also, I enjoy capturing interesting architectural details that give me a sense of satisfaction.

Sugestão: 回答组织混乱，时态错误和重复多。建议先用一句话明确想去的建筑名称，然后说明原因和预期（例如文化、历史或个人感受），保持时态一致并去掉重复。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Big Ben in London. Ever since I was a child I have dreamed of seeing its famous clock tower and learning more about British history and culture.

Sugestão: 表达不流畅且有语法、词汇错误（例如重复的“and”和不准确的短语）。建议先直接回答（想/不想），然后给出具体理由（如安静、景观、通风），并用连接词使句子连贯。避免无意义的词汇。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it can be quieter and offer better views. Living higher up also usually means cleaner air and less street noise.

× If my memories of me right there is a skyscraper near my house built for CIBC Bank and it is literally a landmark for our citizens.

✓ If my memory is correct, there is a skyscraper near my house built for CIBC Bank, and it is literally a landmark for our city.

问题类型：There be（存在句）和代词/短语使用不当。原句中“If my memories of me right”结构不正确，应该用固定表达“If my memory is correct”。另外原句缺少逗号和连词连接两个并列分句，应使用“and”。将“our citizens”改为“our city（our city 或 our town）”更自然，表示城市的地标。建议记住常用表达“If my memory is correct/If I remember correctly”以及存在句“There is/There are”的正确用法。

× Of course photographing building makes me feel, makes me feel relaxed and relieve my brain and get a sense of gratification.

✓ Of course, photographing buildings makes me feel relaxed, relieves my mind, and gives me a sense of gratification.

问题类型：动名词及动词形式和主谓一致。首先“photographing building”中“building”需用复数或加冠词，改为“photographing buildings”。主语“photographing buildings”是单数行为，谓语应用单数形式“makes”。并列谓语需用并列结构一致：relieve（动词原形）要改为第三人称单数“relieves”，并且“get”应改为“gives me”更自然。建议巩固动名词作主语时的主谓一致和并列谓语的一致形式。

× I reconnect the building is Big Ben. I want to visit it when I was a little child and I really looking forward to visit it and get and learn more unique culture in England.

✓ I remember the building is Big Ben. I wanted to visit it when I was a little child, and I have really been looking forward to visiting it and learning more about the unique culture in England.

问题类型：现在时/过去时混用与动词形式错误。原句“I reconnect”应为“I remember”。第二句中既用了“I want to visit it when I was a little child”，时态不一致：应把想法放在过去用过去时“wanted”。随后“I really looking forward to visit it”结构错误，“looking forward to”后应接动名词“visiting”，并且前面需有助动词“have been”或“am”根据语境，改为现在完成进行时更符合“一直期待”的意思。同时“get and learn more unique culture”中“get and learn”重复且“culture”前需“about the unique culture”。建议注意时态协调和固定搭配“look forward to + -ing”。

× And for me it is a unique feature in my in my, in my heart.

✓ For me, it is a unique feature in my heart.

问题类型：重复和短语使用不当。原句重复“in my, in my, in my”属表达错误，应删去重复。表达“在我心中”常用短语“in my heart”。建议说话时注意不要重复词语，保持句子简洁。

× From my perspective, I think I will live in tall building because it can get away from the noisy in the city and the and and get more fresh air, and I think it is a topping is most suitable for me.

✓ From my perspective, I think I would like to live in a tall building because it helps me get away from the noise in the city and get fresher air, and I think it is the most suitable option for me.

问题类型：将来时/情态和冠词、名词复数及词序错误。原句“I think I will live in tall building”缺冠词且“live in a tall building”更自然；但表达愿望用“would like to”或“want to”更恰当。“the noisy”应为“the noise”，并删除重复“and the and and”。“get more fresh air”改为“get fresher air”更自然。最后“it is a topping is most suitable for me”无意义且语序混乱，改为“it is the most suitable option for me”。建议注意冠词使用、名词不可数形式（noise）、避免词语重复，以及用更自然的情态表达意愿。