Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (plural/singular, verb agreement), and limit to under five sentences. Add a specific example or location to enrich the answer and use a linking phrase.

Exemplo: Yes. I live in Istanbul, and there are many skyscrapers in the business districts. For example, the Levent and Maslak areas have numerous high-rises, which have multiplied as the city has expanded in recent years.

Sugestão: Keep the answer natural and slightly more specific. Use a clear topic sentence, avoid redundant words (some, places), and add a reason or detail with a linking word (because/when).

Exemplo: Sometimes I do. I usually photograph historic buildings because I like their architectural details, so when I visit old neighbourhoods I often take pictures with my camera.

Sugestão: Correct the name and grammar, be concise, and use linking words. Give one or two specific reasons why you want to visit (architecture, architect, features). Avoid vague phrases and keep within five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes. I would love to visit the Sagrada Família in Barcelona because its unique Gothic and modernist architecture is stunning. I want to see Gaudí's intricate facades and colourful interiors in person because they are unlike any other church I've seen.

Sugestão: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a direct statement, give a clear reason using a linking word (because), and offer a brief alternative. Avoid repetition and informal phrases like 'gonna'.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't. I have a fear of heights, so living in a high-rise would make me uncomfortable; I prefer a low-rise apartment or a villa where I feel safer.

× Yes there are. I live in Istanbul and there are skyscrapers all over the city and as the city grows the building is increased day by day.

✓ Yes, there are. I live in Istanbul and there are skyscrapers all over the city, and as the city grows the number of buildings increases day by day.

Original errors: 'the building is increased' is incorrect because 'building' is singular and passive phrasing is unnatural; you need a plural concept 'number of buildings' and the active present tense 'increases'. Also added commas and 'the number of' to indicate plural growth clearly. Suggestion: use 'the number of buildings increases' or 'buildings are increasing' for natural expression.

× Sometimes I take photos of some buildings, especially if there are historic or old places I can take a picture with my camera.

✓ Sometimes I take photos of buildings, especially if there are historic or old places, I take a picture with my camera.

Original error: unnecessary use of 'some' and awkward clause connection. The gerund form is not required here; instead use a clear main verb 'I take'. Also add a comma to separate clauses. Suggestion: keep verbs in simple present for habitual actions: 'I take photos' and 'I take a picture'. Alternatively: '...I like to take pictures with my camera.'

× I really want to visit to Sagar the Familiar in Barcelona because I think it's stunning place, is historic, old and it's represent the Spanish style.

✓ I really want to visit Sagrada Familia in Barcelona because I think it's a stunning place; it is historic and represents the Spanish style.

Original errors: 'visit to' is incorrect — use 'visit' without 'to'. The landmark name was miswritten; correct name is 'Sagrada Familia'. Missing article 'a' before 'stunning place'. 'is historic, old' needs subject 'it' and parallel structure; 'it's represent' is wrong verb form — needs 'represents' for third person singular. Suggestion: Use 'visit' + object, include articles, and ensure correct subject-verb agreement: 'it is' and 'represents'.

× I really want to visit to Sagar the Familiar in Barcelona because I think it's stunning place, is historic, old and it's represent the Spanish style.

✓ I really want to visit Sagrada Familia in Barcelona because I think it's a stunning place; it is historic and represents the Spanish style.

Original error: 'it's represent' uses base verb after 'it is' contraction incorrectly; the correct form is 'represents' (third person singular). Suggestion: use 'represents' when the subject is 'it' and the verb is in simple present to describe a characteristic.

× I really want to visit to Sagar the Familiar in Barcelona because I think it's stunning place, is historic, old and it's represent the Spanish style.

✓ I really want to visit Sagrada Familia in Barcelona because I think it's a stunning place; it is historic and represents the Spanish style.

Original error: missing indefinite article 'a' before 'stunning place'. Use 'a' to indicate one singular countable noun. Suggestion: include articles where required: 'a stunning place'.

× No, I don't want to live in tall building because I have a fear of height and if I'm gonna live in tall building it was scary for me and I prefer living in this small building apartment or apartments or like villa.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I have a fear of heights, and if I were to live in a tall building it would be scary for me; I prefer living in a small apartment or a villa.

Multiple article errors: 'in tall building' needs 'a tall building' (singular countable). 'a fear of height' should be 'a fear of heights' (fixed phrase). 'if I'm gonna live' is informal and uses wrong tense; use conditional 'if I were to live' or 'if I lived'. 'it was scary' should be 'it would be scary' to match conditional. 'this small building apartment or apartments or like villa' is ungrammatical; use 'a small apartment or a villa'. Suggestions: use correct articles 'a', use 'fear of heights', and form conditional with 'would' or subjunctive 'were'.

× No, I don't want to live in tall building because I have a fear of height and if I'm gonna live in tall building it was scary for me and I prefer living in this small building apartment or apartments or like villa.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I have a fear of heights, and if I were to live in a tall building it would be scary for me; I prefer living in a small apartment or a villa.

Original errors: 'I'm gonna' is informal and ungrammatical in this context; use 'if I were to' or 'if I were' for hypothetical situations. 'it was scary' should be 'it would be scary' using modal 'would' to indicate hypothetical result. Suggestion: use 'would' or conditional constructions for hypothetical outcomes.

× Sometimes I take photos of some buildings, especially if there are historic or old places I can take a picture with my camera.

✓ Sometimes I take photos of buildings, especially if there are historic or old places; I take pictures with my camera.

Original error: 'some buildings' is acceptable but redundant with 'photos of some buildings'; better to use plural 'photos' and 'buildings' consistently. Also 'a picture' vs 'pictures' — use plural 'pictures' to match habitual action. Suggestion: keep nouns plural for habitual activities: 'I take photos of buildings' and 'I take pictures'.