Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, correct article and adjective use, and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting details with linking words. Pay attention to verb agreement and pronunciation of plural/possessive forms.

Exemplo: Yes. There is a very tall landmark near my home called Landmark 81. It is the tallest building in Ho Chi Minh City and one of the tallest in Asia, and its glass exterior looks very modern. Because of its striking design, I often want to take photos of it.

Sugestão: Organize into a clear topic sentence and supporting reason, correct vocabulary and grammar, and use linking words (e.g., because, so). Fix collocations and verb agreement (architecture photography, golden hour, creates). Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes. I am a freelance photographer, so I usually carry my camera and often photograph buildings. I especially enjoy shooting at the golden hour because the low light creates dramatic shadows and highlights on the facades, which makes my pictures look more cinematic.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details and correct word choices (e.g., "I saw photos of its beautiful old structures," not 'infrastructures' or 'architecture's clothes'). Use linking words like 'because' to explain why you want to visit. Keep sentences grammatical and concise.

Exemplo: Yes. I would love to visit a building called Niagara in Dalac (Đà Lạt) province. I have seen photos of its beautiful, historic architecture, and I want to go there to photograph the old structures because their details and atmosphere would be inspiring.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer (Yes/No or I would prefer...), then provide one or two clear reasons using linking words (because, so, therefore). Correct nouns and possessives (nature, not 'nature's'), and fix verb forms (immerse myself). Avoid repetition and long, unclear clauses.

Exemplo: No, I would prefer to live in a bungalow in the countryside with a spacious garden. I love being close to nature because it helps me relax and escape the hustle and bustle of the city, so living outside would be better for my mental wellbeing.

× Yes, it is the landmark 81.

✓ Yes, it is Landmark 81.

The building name is a proper noun (Landmark 81) and should not be preceded by 'the' when used as a name in this context. Use of 'it is the landmark 81' treats it like a common noun; correcting to 'it is Landmark 81' is more natural. Suggestion: Use proper noun capitalization and omit the definite article when naming a specific landmark as its title.

× You know, it's a a highest building in Ho Chi Minh City and in Asians.

✓ You know, it's the highest building in Ho Chi Minh City and in Asia.

When using a superlative adjective (highest), use the definite article 'the'. 'A highest' is incorrect. 'Asians' is plural referring to people; the correct geographic noun is 'Asia'. Suggestion: Use 'the highest' for superlatives and 'Asia' when referring to the continent.

× It have a glass in his in this exterior and it is a aesthetic building and I always want to take a photo.

✓ It has a glass exterior, and it is an aesthetic building, and I always want to take a photo.

Subject-verb agreement: 'It' requires 'has' (not 'have'). 'His' is an incorrect possessive pronoun for a building; omit it. Use 'aesthetic' requires the article 'an' before a vowel sound, but 'an aesthetic building' would be correct; however, to keep flow, rephrase as 'it is an aesthetic building.' Also combine phrases and correct word order: 'a glass exterior' is a natural collocation. Suggestion: Use 'it has' for singular subject, remove incorrect pronouns, and use 'an' before words starting with vowel sounds.

× Well, I'm a freelance photographer, you know, so I always carry my camera and often take photos of buildings because I especially enjoy architectures photography at the around that hour when the sun forms in the building facades.

✓ Well, I'm a freelance photographer, so I always carry my camera and often take photos of buildings because I especially enjoy architectural photography around that hour when the sun falls on the building facades.

'Architectures photography' is incorrect: use the adjective 'architectural' with 'photography'. Remove extra article 'the' before 'around that hour'. 'Forms in the building facades' is unclear; 'falls on the building facades' or 'lights the building facades' is correct. Suggestion: Use adjective form 'architectural', avoid redundant articles, and choose a clear verb like 'falls on' or 'lights' for sunlight.

× It make my pictures more cinematic.

✓ It makes my pictures more cinematic.

Subject-verb agreement: with subject 'it' in present tense, add 's' to the verb: 'makes'. Suggestion: Remember third-person singular takes -s in present simple.

× Yes, there is a building called Niagara in Dalek province that I would love to visit.

✓ Yes, there is a building called Niagara in Dalat province that I would love to visit.

The place name appears to be 'Dalat' (a city/province). Use the correct proper noun spelling. The sentence structure 'there is a building called X' is correct. Suggestion: Check proper nouns for correct spelling.

× I saw photos of us beautiful old infrastructures and I wanted to go there to take my own pictures and admire the architecture's clothes.

✓ I saw photos of its beautiful old structures, and I wanted to go there to take my own pictures and admire the building's architecture.

'Us' is incorrect pronoun; use 'its' to refer to the place or 'the' for general. 'Infrastructures' is not commonly used for individual buildings; 'structures' or 'buildings' is better. 'Architecture's clothes' is not idiomatic; use 'building's architecture' or 'architectural style.' Suggestion: Use correct possessive pronouns and prefer 'structures' or 'buildings'; say 'admire the building's architecture' or 'admire its architectural style'.

× I would prefer to live in the bungalow in the countryside with a spacious garden.

✓ I would prefer to live in a bungalow in the countryside with a spacious garden.

Use the indefinite article 'a bungalow' because you are speaking about any bungalow in general, not a specific known bungalow ('the bungalow' implies a particular one already mentioned). Suggestion: Use 'a' for non-specific singular nouns.

× I love being close to nature's and emerge myself in the natures and living outside the city would help me escape from the hustle and bustle of cities which can reflect my mind.

✓ I love being close to nature and immersing myself in it; living outside the city would help me escape the hustle and bustle of urban life, which can affect my mind.

'nature's' is incorrect possessive; use 'nature' as an uncountable noun. 'Emerge myself in the natures' is incorrect; use 'immerse myself in it' meaning fully experience nature. 'Escape from' can be shortened to 'escape'. 'Hustle and bustle of cities' is wordy; 'urban life' is clearer. 'Reflect my mind' is incorrect verb choice; 'affect my mind' or 'clear my mind' works depending on intended meaning. Suggestion: Use 'nature' without apostrophe, use 'immerse myself in nature', and choose appropriate verbs like 'affect' or 'clear' for mental state.