Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は直接的で良いですが、言い淀みや文法の誤り、詳細不足が見られます。例えば「it was, it is really beautiful appearance because」の部分は不自然なので、現在形で簡潔に表現し、理由や具体的な特徴（色、高さ、デザイン）を一つ付け加えると良いです。また、言い淀み（umm）を減らし、文は2〜3文にまとめて自然さを出してください。

Exemplo: Yes. There is a tall apartment tower near my home. It looks very attractive because it has a glass facade and modern design, which stands out among the older buildings.

Sugestão: 主旨は伝わりますが、文法（singular/plural）や冗長な表現が目立ちます。"it's more than it, it's more than building" のような繰り返しは避け、具体的な理由や状況（例えばどの時間帯やどんな構図で撮るか）を加えると良いです。リンク語（for example, because, so）を使って論理的につなげましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially when they have interesting designs. For example, I like shooting at sunset because the light highlights details and makes the pictures more dramatic.

Sugestão: 回答が断片的で不完全です。訪れたい建物を具体的に名指し（例：Tokyo Skytree）し、なぜ行きたいのか（展望、建築、文化的理由）を一つか二つ述べてください。文法上は"I've never been there"のように前置詞の使い方を修正し、文を2〜3文に整えましょう。

Exemplo: Yes. I would like to visit Tokyo Skytree because I have never been to it. I want to see the view from the observation deck and learn more about its engineering and design.

Sugestão: 意図は分かりますが、語彙の誤り（"low floor"→"a lower floor"、"clam tea"は恐らく"earthquake"）と文法ミスが多いです。まず正しい語彙を使い（earthquake）、理由は簡潔に述べ、可能ならもう一つ利点（利便性や移動のしやすさ）を加えて2文にまとめてください。

Exemplo: Yes, I would, but I prefer living on a lower floor because it feels safer during earthquakes. Also, lower floors are more convenient for daily shopping and moving heavy items.

× Around my home there is, umm, one tall tower apartment.

✓ Around my home there is one tall tower apartment.

Remove the filler 'umm' which interrupts sentence structure; the sentence correctly uses 'there is' for a singular noun. Keep a single continuous clause for clarity.

× And it was, it is really beautiful appearance because.

✓ And it has a really beautiful appearance.

Use the verb 'has' with the noun 'appearance' rather than 'is appearance'. Remove contradictory tense mixing 'was, it is' and the dangling 'because' which lacks a clause. Use present simple for description.

× Yes I do, especially when the buildings is beautiful and it's more than it, it's more than building.

✓ Yes I do, especially when the buildings are beautiful and they are more than just buildings.

Plural noun 'buildings' requires plural verb 'are'. Replace vague 'it' with plural pronoun 'they' and use 'more than just buildings' for idiomatic expression.

× I usually take photos because that makes me feel comfortable.

✓ I usually take photos because it makes me feel comfortable.

Use the impersonal pronoun 'it' rather than 'that' for referring to the action of taking photos. Sentence structure is otherwise acceptable.

× Yes there is. I want to go to the. Really high buildings located in the Tokyo because I've never been to there and there is.

✓ Yes, there is. I want to go to the really tall buildings in Tokyo because I have never been there.

Combine fragments into a single coherent sentence. Use 'tall' rather than 'high' for buildings, omit the article before 'Tokyo', use present perfect 'have never been' and correct 'been to there' to 'been there'.

× Yes I do but I want to live in the low floor because the when the clam tea is occurred the lower floor is more safety.

✓ Yes I do, but I want to live on a low floor because when a tsunami occurs the lower floors are less safe.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'floor' and the article 'a'. Replace awkward 'the when the clam tea is occurred' with 'when a tsunami occurs'. Use plural 'floors are' and adjective 'less safe' for correct comparison and meaning.