Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: ปรับปรุงความชัดเจนและความถูกต้องของไวยากรณ์ ใช้ประโยคเริ่มต้นตรงคำถาม แล้วเสริมรายละเอียดโดยใช้คำเชื่อม เช่น 'because' หรือ 'so' ให้ถูกต้อง และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ เกร็ด: ระบุสถานที่และเหตุผลให้ชัดเจน เช่น 'small village' และ 'limited transport'.

Exemplo: No, there are no tall buildings near my home because I live in a small village with limited public transport. As a result, most buildings are low-rise and spread out rather than tall blocks.

Sugestão: ลดการพูดซ้ำและปรับคำศัพท์ให้เป็นธรรมชาติ ใช้ประโยคหัวข้อแล้วตามด้วยตัวอย่างเฉพาะและคำเชื่อม เช่น 'however' หรือ 'for example' ระบุเวลาหรือสถานที่ของเหตุการณ์เพื่อความชัดเจน.

Exemplo: I don't usually take photos of buildings; however, once I photographed a building because I loved its architectural patterns. For example, the façade had intricate geometric tiles I had never seen before, so I wanted to remember it.

Sugestão: ตอบให้แน่นและมั่นใจมากขึ้น ให้ข้อมูลเฉพาะเจาะจง ลดคำที่แสดงความไม่แน่ใจ เช่น 'I'm not pretty sure' ใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่ออธิบายรายละเอียดเพิ่มเติม เช่น 'because' หรือ 'which' และระบุชื่ออาคารหรือประสบการณ์ที่อยากทำจริงๆ.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Petronas Twin Towers in Malaysia because of the skybridge that connects the two towers. I want to walk on the bridge and enjoy the panoramic city views from that height.

Sugestão: ปรับเหตุผลให้สมเหตุสมผลและเป็นธรรมชาติ ใช้โครงสร้างประโยคชัดเจน เช่น 'I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because...' เสนอรายละเอียดเฉพาะ เช่น เรื่องลิฟต์ การเข้าถึง หรือความรู้สึกอึดอัด เพื่อให้คำตอบหนักแน่นขึ้น.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I prefer easy access to my apartment and dislike climbing many stairs. I feel more comfortable in a low-rise building where everything is closer and more convenient.

× No, no, as far as I no, there is no tall building nearby.

✓ No, no, as far as I know, there are no tall buildings nearby.

Incorrect preposition/phrase and singular/plural: 'as far as I no' should be 'as far as I know' (spelling and phrase). 'There is no tall building nearby' is grammatical but contextually plural is more natural when speaking generally; use 'there are no tall buildings nearby.' Suggestion: learn the fixed phrase 'as far as I know' and check noun number agreement with 'there is/there are.'

× And the reason for that is because it's not accessible to transportation service.

✓ And the reason for that is because it's not accessible to transportation services.

Incorrect noun number and word choice: 'transportation service' is unnatural; use plural 'transportation services' or 'public transportation.' Also tense is present; keep present. Suggestion: use 'public transportation' or plural 'transportation services.'

× It was a small village.

✓ It is a small village.

Tense error: Student uses past tense 'was' though describing a current fact. Use present simple 'is.' Suggestion: use present tense for current descriptions.

× Most most of the time I don't take pictures of any buildings, but there is one time that I take pictures of building because I like the patterns of their architectures.

✓ Most of the time I don't take pictures of buildings, but there was one time when I took pictures of a building because I liked the patterns of its architecture.

Multiple tense and article errors: 'Most most' is repetition. Use present simple 'Most of the time I don't take...' to express habit. Then 'there is one time that I take' should be past 'there was one time when I took' to recount a specific past event. 'Pictures of building' needs an article: 'a building.' 'their architectures' is incorrect: use 'its architecture' (singular possessive). Suggestion: avoid repetition, match tense for habitual vs. past events, and use correct articles and possessives.

× On top of that, I've never seen such a beautiful building like like that before.

✓ On top of that, I've never seen such a beautiful building like that before.

Redundancy and repetition: 'like like' is repeated. Sentence otherwise ok with present perfect. Suggestion: remove duplicate word and keep 'I've never seen such a beautiful building like that before.'

× That's why I want to keep the memory.

✓ That's why I want to keep the memory/memories.

Minor noun choice: 'memory' is possible but 'memories' is more natural when preserving images; ensure subject-verb is fine. Suggestion: use 'keep the memory' or preferably 'keep the memory of it' or 'keep the memories.'

× Yes, there is a building that I would like to visit.

✓ Yes, there is a building that I would like to visit.

No grammatical error: sentence is correct. Suggestion: none.

× It is located at UMM. I'm not pretty sure, maybe Malaysia.

✓ It is located at UMM. I'm not quite sure; maybe Malaysia.

Word choice and adverb error: 'pretty sure' is colloquial but 'not pretty sure' is incorrect; use 'not quite sure.' Also keep punctuation. Suggestion: use 'I'm not quite sure' for uncertainty.

× It was twin building that you could walk through the pathway and the pathway is connected to another building.

✓ It is a twin building that you can walk through via a skybridge, and the pathway is connected to another building.

Number and tense: use present 'is' to describe the building. 'It was twin building' needs article and plural form: 'a twin building' or 'twin buildings.' Also 'you could' should be 'you can' for a general description. 'Pathway' repeated; use 'via a skybridge' or 'and the pathway connects to another building.' Suggestion: use correct articles ('a'), present tense for descriptions, and clearer vocabulary like 'skybridge' or 'walkway.'

× No, if I live in a tall building, I have to walk as much as I have to.

✓ No. If I lived in a tall building, I would have to walk a lot.

Conditional and tense problem: Student mixes real/present conditional and modal phrasing. For hypothetical preference use second conditional: 'If I lived... I would...' Also 'walk as much as I have to' is awkward; use 'walk a lot.' Suggestion: use correct conditional form for unreal situations.

× I don't want to get my leg exhausted from walking.

✓ I don't want my legs to get tired from walking.

Word choice and agreement: 'get my leg exhausted' is unnatural; use 'my legs to get tired' or 'my leg to get exhausted' with correct singular/plural. Suggestion: use 'legs' plural and 'tired' rather than 'exhausted' for natural phrasing.

× Therefore I would rather stay at the UH at normal building.

✓ Therefore I would rather stay at UHM in a normal building.

Preposition and article errors: 'stay at the UH at normal building' is incorrect. Use the correct name 'UHM' if intended, 'in a normal building' or 'in a regular building.' Also choose correct preposition 'at' vs 'in.' Suggestion: use 'stay at UHM' or 'stay in a normal building.'