Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar (articles, plural forms, and prepositions) and avoid repetition. Mention one clear example and state your feeling with a simple reason.

Exemplo: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, a number of modern apartment towers line the main road, and people often go there to shop or eat. Although I enjoy looking at them because they look impressive, I avoid entering very tall buildings because I feel uneasy at great heights.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use correct sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, 'because' or 'especially'). Be specific about when and why you take photos and avoid redundant phrases. Correct word choice: 'prefer to take photos of buildings' and 'at night' instead of 'at the night time.'

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially at night. I prefer photographing them after dark because the lights and reflections make the facades look very beautiful, and the contrast creates interesting photos.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence naming the building, then add one or two specific reasons why you want to visit. Use correct tense and phrases (e.g., 'recently' or 'soon' for time). Avoid fragmented sentences; combine ideas with linking words like 'because' and 'especially'.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower because it is very tall and architecturally impressive. I especially want to see it at night, when the lights are on, because it looks stunning and offers great views of the city.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly with a clear reason. Use correct grammar for negatives (e.g., 'I would not prefer' → 'I would not prefer to live') and explain your feeling with a specific example. Avoid unclear phrases and irrelevant comments.

Exemplo: No, I would not prefer to live in a tall building because I am afraid of heights. I feel more comfortable in a house at ground level, where I can easily go outside and I am less worried about elevators or high floors.

× Yes, there are the so many tall buildings near my home, so many tall building apartments are there big Eiffel Tower is in my country.

✓ Yes, there are so many tall buildings near my home; many tall apartment buildings are here, and a big Eiffel Tower replica is in my country.

The sentence uses incorrect articles and word order. 'the so many' should be 'so many' (no definite article). 'so many tall building apartments' should be 'many tall apartment buildings' (noun order and plural). 'are there big Eiffel Tower is in my country' is ungrammatical; split into clauses and add an article before 'big Eiffel Tower replica' if needed. Suggestion: remove unnecessary 'the', use correct noun order (adjective + noun), and split into clear clauses.

× I like to see the big buildings, but I will not go to the big buildings because I fear from the.

✓ I like seeing big buildings, but I will not go inside them because I am afraid of them.

Several structural problems: 'I like to see' is acceptable but 'I like seeing' is more natural; 'go to the big buildings' should be 'go inside them' for clarity; 'I fear from the' is incorrect—English uses 'be afraid of' or 'fear' without 'from' and requires an object. Suggestion: use 'afraid of' with the object; maintain parallel structure.

× Is I prefer to take the photos of the buildings.

✓ I prefer to take photos of the buildings.

'Is I' is incorrect; subject should be 'I'. Also 'the photos' and 'the buildings' can omit 'the' unless referring to specific ones. Suggestion: begin sentence with 'I' and use 'prefer' followed by the infinitive or gerund; 'I prefer to take photos' or 'I prefer taking photos.'

× The tall buildings are too shiny at the night time, too much lights are blinking in the buildings and the light at the night which see in the building it looks like too beautiful.

✓ The tall buildings are very shiny at night; many lights blink in the buildings, and the light I see at night in the building looks very beautiful.

Problems include wrong adverb placement ('at the night time' -> 'at night'), incorrect quantifier with countable noun ('too much lights' -> 'many lights'), redundant and awkward clauses ('the light at the night which see in the building it looks like too beautiful'). Suggestion: use 'at night', 'many' with countable nouns, simplify relative clauses ('the light I see at night'), and use 'very beautiful' instead of 'too beautiful' if meant positively.

× Yes, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower recent.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower soon.

'Recent' is an adjective meaning 'recent' in the past; 'soon' expresses near future desire. Use 'would like to visit ... soon.' Suggestion: use time adverbs that fit the intended meaning.

× It's too high, it's near my house, it will look like too good.

✓ It's very tall and near my house; it will look very impressive.

'Too high' can mean excessively high; 'tall' is more natural for buildings. 'Too good' is ungrammatical for appearance; use 'very impressive' or 'very good.' Also combine clauses more naturally. Suggestion: choose adjectives appropriate for buildings and avoid 'too' unless indicating excess.

× Add night time.

✓ At night, it looks beautiful.

'Add night time' is incorrect and unclear. Likely meant 'at night' or 'in the nighttime.' Suggestion: use 'At night' to introduce a comment about appearance after dark.

× Why I would not prefer to live in a tall building because I feel fear from the high buildings.

✓ I would not prefer to live in a tall building because I am afraid of tall buildings.

'Why I would not prefer' is incorrect word order for a statement; remove 'Why'. 'I feel fear from the' is ungrammatical—use 'I am afraid of' and no 'the' before plural 'tall buildings.' Suggestion: use standard statement order 'I would not prefer...' and 'afraid of' with object.

× I like to live in our house.

✓ I prefer to live in our house.

'I like to live in our house' is understandable but 'prefer' matches previous contrast. Pronoun 'our' is okay if speaking about family home. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for preference and maintain consistency.

× Long buildings have only tall in heights.

✓ Tall buildings are simply tall in height.

'Long buildings have only tall in heights' is ungrammatical; 'long' and 'tall' confusion. Buildings are described as 'tall' (height) not 'long' (length). Suggestion: use correct adjectives: 'Tall buildings are simply tall in height' or better 'Tall buildings are simply high.'

× But no pressure is coming in these dole builds.

✓ But I don't feel pressure in these buildings.

'Dole builds' is unclear—likely meant 'tall buildings' or 'old buildings.' 'No pressure is coming in' is unnatural; instead use 'I don't feel pressure' or 'they don't make me feel anxious.' Suggestion: use clear verbs like 'feel' and correct noun phrases.