Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 内容不清晰且偏离问题。要直接回答“有/没有”，并给出简要理由和具体细节。注意句子结构和代词使用，避免无关信息，控制在最长5句话内。可练习简单句与连接词的使用，如 because, so, however。

Exemplo: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because I live in a small village far from the city center. The area mostly has low houses and lots of open fields, so the skyline is very clear. Because there are few shops and little development here, you can see the blue sky easily.

Sugestão: 回答含混且语法错误较多。应先直接回答喜欢或不喜欢（topic sentence），然后给出具体例子或经历支持观点，使用连接词如 however, but, for example。保持句子简短且连贯。

Exemplo: I don’t usually take photos of buildings because I prefer nature photography. However, last summer I visited Kuala Lumpur and I took pictures of the Petronas Twin Towers because they were impressive and very photogenic.

Sugestão: 回答不连贯，信息模糊。应清楚说明想去的建筑并给出具体原因（历史、设计、名气等）。使用because, for example, and also 等连接词，使内容具体且相关。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Louvre Museum in Paris because of its famous art collections and historic architecture. For example, I want to see the glass pyramid and the paintings like the Mona Lisa in person, which would be an amazing experience.

Sugestão: 表达较为混乱，应先直接回答（yes/no），然后说明原因并给出具体细节如环境、设施或生活方式。注意代词和名词搭配，避免冗长或重复。可用 because, so, for instance 来组织句子。

Exemplo: No, I wouldn’t like to live in a tall building because I prefer a quieter place with more green space. For instance, I’d rather live in a house near a park where there is a garden and less traffic, which feels more peaceful to me.

× And actually there is no television in my village because my fault is your far away from the city center and and there are capital and and the blue sky, you know, and beside that it's very.

✓ Actually, there is no television in my village because my house is far away from the city center. The village is in the countryside with clear blue skies, and besides that it's very peaceful.

句子原本结构混乱，包含多处不相关或错误的短语（如“my fault is your”、“there are capital”），导致意思不明。应拆分为数个完整句子，按逻辑先说明没有电视的原因（房子远离市中心），再描述村庄环境。建议：写句子时先确定主语和谓语，避免无关插入，并将信息分成短句表达。

× To be honest, I dislike taking photos and different buildings, but last summer I discovered the capital of Malaysia and they visited the, you know, second tallest building in the world.

✓ To be honest, I dislike taking photos of different buildings, but last summer I visited the capital of Malaysia and saw the second tallest building in the world.

原句中动词短语和代词使用错误。“taking photos and different buildings”应为“taking photos of different buildings”（介词of引出宾语）。另外“I discovered the capital”用法不自然，且主语与后半句不一致（they visited）。应使用过去时的单数第一人称“I visited”并用“saw”描述看到某建筑。建议：注意固定搭配（photos of），主语一致并正确使用动词时态。

× It's I have your channels and but enough graduates. I would like to visit the new powers store in Paris and which is very famous all around the world.

✓ I have never been there, but I would like to visit the new department store in Paris, which is very famous all around the world.

原句语序和词汇错误（“It's I have your channels and but enough graduates”、“new powers store”）导致无法理解。根据语境，表达想去巴黎参观著名商店，应使用“have never been there”或“haven't been”以及“department store”。从句“which is very famous”需放在主句后修饰名词。建议：用清晰的主句+定语从句结构，选用正确词汇。

× And I also thought from my friend, it's very amazing for tourists to visit so.

✓ My friend also told me that it's very amazing for tourists to visit it.

原句中“thought from my friend”和句尾的“so”用法不当。应使用“told me”来表达“我朋友告诉我”，并用“visit it”或直接用“visit”加宾语。建议：区分think/think of与tell/told用法，注意动词搭配和句尾不必要词语的删除。

× I need to be honest, I don't fancy living in that while being I preferred to live in the Park Place and far away from the city center and there is a store has a garden. It should be more perfect for me, yeah.

✓ To be honest, I don't fancy living in a tall building. I would prefer to live in a place like Park Place, far away from the city center, and where the building has a garden. That would be more ideal for me.

原句混用了时态和结构（“I need to be honest”可改为“To be honest”，但后文“while being I preferred”不合语法），并且“there is a store has a garden”结构错误。应分别表达不喜欢住高楼、偏好住在远离市区且有花园的地方，并使用条件或情态表达期望（would be more ideal）。建议：避免在一句里堆砌多个想法，使用并列句或从句，并保持时态一致。