Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 発音と文法の誤りを直し、より自然で簡潔な表現を使いましょう。具体的には、冠詞の使い方（a/an/the）と主語と動詞の一致（there is → there are）、関係代名詞や分詞構文で文を短く整理する練習をしてください。また、余計な語（ummなど）を減らして、1〜2文で答えることを心掛けてください。例："There aren't any tall buildings near my home. However, if I go to the station a bit farther away, there are many tall buildings connected to it." のように言えるとよいです。

Exemplo: There aren't any tall buildings near my home. However, if I go to the station a bit farther away, there are many tall buildings connected to it.

Sugestão: 良い構成ですが、時制と前置詞の使い方を改善しましょう（went into Thailand → went to Thailand、I take → I took）。また、文をより流暢にするために接続語を使い、冗長な語を減らしてください。写真を撮る頻度や理由をもう一つ具体的に加えるとより説得力が増します。

Exemplo: I don't usually take photos of buildings, but I do photograph special or culturally significant ones. For example, last November I went to Thailand and took several pictures of traditional temples to capture their unique architecture and intricate details.

Sugestão: 建物名や設計者のスペル・固有名詞の誤りに注意してください（Sagrada Familia、Gaudí）。また、話し始めに短い主題文を置き、その後で理由を2つほど具体的に述べると自然です。接続詞（because、especiallyなど）を使って論理的に繋げましょう。

Exemplo: I'd love to visit the Sagrada Familia in Spain. It's the famous church designed by Antoni Gaudí, and I'm especially interested in seeing the interior, with its colourful stained glass and unusual columns.

Sugestão: 文法と時制、語順を直し、より簡潔に答えを述べましょう（I will already living → I'm already living / I already live）。また、理由は1〜2文で明確に述べ、'because'などの接続詞でつなぐと良いです。'umm'などのフィラーは避けてください。

Exemplo: No, I probably wouldn't. I already live on the 11th floor of an apartment building, and during earthquakes the whole building shakes, which makes me feel unsafe.

× Umm, there is no tall buildings near my home, but if I go to the station that is a little bit far from my house, there are so many tall buildings that is connected to the station.

✓ Umm, there are no tall buildings near my home, but if I go to the station, which is a little bit far from my house, there are many tall buildings that are connected to the station.

The original sentence has multiple issues: subject-verb agreement with 'there is no tall buildings' (plural noun requires 'there are') and 'that is connected' should agree with plural 'buildings' (use 'are connected'). Also the clause referring to the station should be a relative clause 'which is' rather than 'that is' after a comma to add nondefining information. Suggestion: match plural nouns with plural verbs, ensure relative pronoun and verb agree in number, and use commas for nonessential clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× I don't usually take photos of buildings, but when it comes to special or culturally significant buildings, I do. For example, last November I went into Thailand and in Thailand I take several photos of traditional temples to remember their unique architecture and cultural details.

✓ I don't usually take photos of buildings, but when it comes to special or culturally significant buildings, I do. For example, last November I went to Thailand and while I was there I took several photos of traditional temples to remember their unique architecture and cultural details.

Tense inconsistency: the speaker correctly uses past tense 'last November I went', but then incorrectly uses present tense 'I take' to describe past actions. Also 'went into Thailand' is unnatural; use 'went to Thailand'. Suggestion: keep past events in past tense ('took') and use 'went to' for countries; use 'while I was there' to connect actions. Grammar problem type ID: 6 (Present tense issue).

× I would like to visit the Sagrada Palmeria in Spain. It is a church designed by Godie with a very intricate design and I'm curious to see the interior, especially the stained glass windows and unusual columns.

✓ I would like to visit the Sagrada Familia in Spain. It is a church designed by Gaudí with a very intricate design and I'm curious to see the interior, especially the stained glass windows and unusual columns.

The proper name was misspelled: 'Sagrada Familia' is correct; the architect's name is 'Gaudí'. These are not grammar errors per se but are important for accuracy. Suggestion: check proper nouns and spelling for place names and people's names; use accents if possible ('Gaudí'). Grammar problem type ID: 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× It is a church designed by Godie with a very intricate design and I'm curious to see the interior, especially the stained glass windows and unusual columns.

✓ It is a church designed by Gaudí that has a very intricate design, and I'm curious to see the interior, especially the stained glass windows and unusual columns.

The original sentence used a coordination that slightly muddles the structure; adding 'that has' clarifies that the church possesses the intricate design. This fixes clarity and ensures correct clause connection. Suggestion: use appropriate relative clauses ('that has') to describe characteristics of singular nouns. Grammar problem type ID: 2 (Third person singular issue).

× Umm no I probably wouldn't. I will already living on the 11th floor right now of an apartment building and during earthquakes the whole building shakes which makes me feel unsafe.

✓ Umm no, I probably wouldn't. I'm already living on the 11th floor right now in an apartment building, and during earthquakes the whole building shakes, which makes me feel unsafe.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'I will already living' is ungrammatical. Use present continuous 'I'm already living' or simple present 'I already live'. Also use preposition 'in' for apartments ('in an apartment building'). Add commas to separate clauses and improve readability. Suggestion: use correct auxiliary verbs with -ing forms ('I am living') and correct prepositions ('in'). Grammar problem type ID: 8 (Verb + -ing form).

× For example, last November I went into Thailand and in Thailand I take several photos of traditional temples to remember their unique architecture and cultural details.

✓ For example, last November I went to Thailand and while I was there I took several photos of traditional temples to remember their unique architecture and cultural details.

The preposition 'into' is incorrect for visiting a country; use 'to'. Repeating 'in Thailand' is redundant; 'while I was there' is smoother. Also tense should be past ('took'). Suggestion: use 'went to' for countries, avoid unnecessary repetition, and keep past tense consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions).