Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence and then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition (e.g., "small town" and "provincial town") and try to use a linking word to connect ideas. Also vary vocabulary slightly to show range.

Exemplo: No, there are no tall buildings near my home. I live in a small provincial town dominated by low-rise residential houses, so I usually only see skyscrapers when I travel to the nearby city.

Sugestão: Start with a concise topic sentence, then give a specific reason and one concrete example. Watch tense consistency (use present/present perfect) and avoid wordy phrases like "really something I love to watch." Use a linking word such as "because" or "so" clearly to connect reason and result.

Exemplo: Yes, I often photograph tall buildings because I find skyscrapers fascinating. For example, whenever I visit a city, I spend time taking pictures of the skyline and architectural details to remember the trip.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer naming the building, then add specific reasons and a short example or detail. Correct the name (Seoul) and avoid vague phrasing like "those"—refer to the building or place. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit a famous building in Seoul, South Korea — for instance, Lotte World Tower. I have only seen it in documentaries and K-dramas, so I would love to see its observation deck and city views in person.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly with one strong reason and a brief supporting detail. Avoid filler words like "like" and awkward phrasing. Use a linking word (e.g., "because" or "although") and keep to two or three sentences maximum.

Exemplo: I wouldn't like to live in a tall building long-term because I prefer more space and a quieter environment. Although I did live in a high-rise once, I found it less comfortable than a house with a garden, so I probably wouldn't choose it for the future.

× Yes, I do take photos of tall buildings because seeing skyscrapers is really something I love to watch, especially that I lived in a small town my whole life, so when I go to another city, I took as many pictures as I can.

✓ Yes, I do take photos of tall buildings because seeing skyscrapers is something I really love, especially since I have lived in a small town my whole life, so when I go to another city, I take as many pictures as I can.

Multiple tense and phrasing errors: 'something I love to watch' is awkward for photos — 'something I really love' is clearer. 'Especially that I lived' incorrectly uses past simple; use present perfect 'I have lived' to indicate life experience continuing to present. 'When I go... I took' mixes present and past; change 'took' to present 'take' to match the habitual action. Also reorder words for natural English.'},{