Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler sounds, use correct plural/singular forms and add one specific detail using a linking word. For example, replace "I'm living in a city" with "I live in a city" and change "some flat apartments" to "apartment blocks."

Exemplo: Yes — there are many tall buildings near my home because I live in the city. For instance, there are office towers and apartment blocks, and as a result the area can be quite noisy at night.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence, correct collocations and grammar, and use linking words. Avoid awkward phrasing like "building photo fan" and "search about the building." Be specific about what kinds of buildings interest you and why.

Exemplo: Not usually — I prefer taking landscape photos. However, if I see an unusual or historic building I will photograph it because I enjoy researching its design and purpose afterwards.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer, correct tense and word order, and add two specific reasons linked coherently. Avoid repetition and fragmented phrases. Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

Exemplo: Yes — I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa because it is an iconic skyscraper. For example, I want to see the city lights from the observation deck at night and try the restaurants there.

Sugestão: Answer directly and finish your thought; avoid hesitation and unclear phrasing. Use correct noun forms and link reasons with "because" or "so." Provide one or two specific reasons for your preference.

Exemplo: No — I would prefer to live in a house in the countryside because it feels safer and more peaceful. For example, I like having a garden and quieter surroundings, and I also worry about structural risks in very tall buildings.

× Of course, there are a lot of tall buildings nearby my home because I'm living in a city.

✓ Of course, there are a lot of tall buildings near my home because I live in a city.

Use 'near' rather than 'nearby' before a noun phrase: 'nearby' is usually an adverb or adjective directly modifying a noun, but 'near my home' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also change 'I'm living' to simple present 'I live' because this is a general, habitual fact. This fits the present tense context.

× There are different types of tall building, uh like office, some flat apartments and sometimes the buildings are very noisy.

✓ There are different types of tall buildings, like office buildings and apartment blocks, and sometimes the buildings are very noisy.

Use plural 'buildings' to match 'different types of'; 'office' should be 'office buildings' and 'flat apartments' is redundant — use 'apartments' or 'apartment blocks.' Also remove filler 'uh like' and keep parallel structure. This fixes noun/adjective usage and plural agreement.

× Actually I'm not a building photo fan, I just take beautiful sceneries landscape.

✓ Actually I'm not a fan of photographing buildings; I just take pictures of beautiful landscapes.

'a building photo fan' is unnatural; use 'a fan of photographing buildings.' 'Sceneries landscape' is incorrect: 'scenery' is uncountable and 'landscape' or 'landscapes' is correct. Use 'take pictures of' for clarity. Present tense is maintained.

× If I notice a different type of building, I'm willing to take a photo because I want to search about the building.

✓ If I notice a different type of building, I'm willing to take a photo because I want to learn about the building.

Use 'learn about' rather than 'search about.' 'Search' requires 'search for' when looking for something; here 'learn about' conveys intent to find information. Article use is OK but verb choice was incorrect.

× Why did they make for what? What the purpose?

✓ Why did they make it? What was the purpose?

Original sentences are ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'Why did they make it?' and 'What was the purpose?' to form proper question structure in past tense, matching the speaker's intent to inquire about reasons for construction.

× Of course, I like to visit Burj Khalifa, it's a skyscraper, so I want to stay at one night, get the experience at about night, light, Night City, how should the building at night, food, everything I want to experience, so I hope to visit.

✓ Of course, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa; it's a skyscraper, so I want to stay there for one night and experience it at night: the lights, the night view of the city, the food — everything. I hope to visit.

Use 'would like' for polite desire; include the article 'the' before a specific landmark. 'Stay at one night' -> 'stay there for one night.' Use 'experience it at night' and 'the lights'/'night view of the city' for clarity. Reorganize sentence to correct tense and improve coherence.

× Not at all. I would prefer to live in a house in a countryside because it feels safer and, uh, more peaceful.

✓ Not at all. I would prefer to live in a house in the countryside because it feels safer and more peaceful.

Use 'the countryside' (no article 'a') when referring to rural areas generally. Remove filler 'uh' and extra comma. Pronoun/article use corrected.

× I worry about structure and safety risk in the tall buildings and I don't know which type of material they use to make that building, so I.

✓ I worry about structural and safety risks in tall buildings, and I don't know what materials they use to build them, so I would not feel comfortable living there.

'Structure and safety risk' is awkward; use 'structural and safety risks.' 'Which type of material they use' should be 'what materials they use.' Change 'that building' to plural 'them' to refer to tall buildings. Finish the sentence to express the speaker's idea. This fixes sentence structure and agreement.