Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and grammatical, give a direct topic sentence then a concise supporting detail. Fix grammar (e.g., "apartment") and use correct comparisons. Keep it to 1–2 sentences and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home; my apartment is much lower than most of them, so I can often see their rooftops from the street.

Sugestão: Use clearer vocabulary and give a specific reason or example. Remove fillers (uh) and correct unclear words ("severe"). State why buildings are interesting and describe one feature precisely.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I often photograph buildings because I find their façades and architectural details interesting; for example, a nearby office tower has an unusual glass atrium in the center that looks dramatic in photos.

Sugestão: Answer directly naming the building or type, then give a specific reason. Avoid repetition and improve verb choice ("impression to eat" → "urge to eat" or "tempted to try").

Exemplo: Yes. There is a mixed-use building nearby that houses a highly rated restaurant on the top floor, and every time I walk past I am tempted to try their food because the terrace has a great view.

Sugestão: State your opinion clearly, give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar, and use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Avoid hesitations and repeated words.

Exemplo: No, I don't. I prefer low-rise homes because of safety concerns; for example, I worry about emergency evacuation and unfamiliar neighbors in very tall buildings.

× My apartment is quite lower than other building.

✓ My apartment is quite low compared to other buildings.

'Lower' is a comparative adjective that requires a reference (e.g., 'than other buildings') and 'quite low' is the correct adjective form to describe the apartment's height; also use plural 'buildings' when speaking generally. Use 'compared to' or 'than' with a proper plural noun for clarity.

× There are uh, there are some buildings looking very interesting.

✓ There are some buildings that look very interesting.

Reduce repetition and use the relative clause 'that look' instead of the participle phrase 'looking' for a clearer, more natural sentence. Also remove filler 'uh' for written correction.

× For example, some buildings have uh, severe in the center of the building.

✓ For example, some buildings have a tower in the center of the building.

The word 'severe' is incorrect in this context; likely the speaker meant a physical feature such as 'a tower' or 'a courtyard'. Choose an appropriate noun. Also remove filler 'uh' and avoid repeating 'building' unnecessarily.

× Yes there is, some buildings have a great restaurant and every time I pass pass through the building I have a huge impression to eat in.

✓ Yes, there are some buildings with great restaurants, and every time I pass through them I feel a strong urge to eat there.

Start with 'Yes, there are' to agree with plural 'buildings'. Use plural 'restaurants' or 'a great restaurant' consistently. 'Pass pass' is a repetition error; use 'pass through'. 'Have a huge impression to eat in' is ungrammatical—use 'feel a strong urge to eat there' to express desire.

× No I don't. There are there is a lot of reasons but I if I need to choose one, the biggest reason why I do not like to live in tall building is that security matter.

✓ No, I don't. There are a lot of reasons, but if I had to choose one, the biggest reason I would not like to live in a tall building is security concerns.

Combine and correct 'There are there is' to 'There are'. Use conditional 'if I had to choose' (polite hypothetical) and 'would not like' for consistency. Use 'a tall building' with the article and pluralize or use 'a' appropriately. 'Security matter' should be 'security concerns' for natural phrasing.