Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, umm), and give one or two specific details. Use linking words for coherence (for example, 'because' or 'so'). Also correct small grammar errors (drop extra articles and say 'in Canada', 'at night').

Exemplo: Yes. I live in Canada and there are several tall buildings near my home. I prefer living close to them because I enjoy the night view, especially the city lights from my window.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a clear reason and example. Avoid repetitions and hesitations. Use a simple linking word to connect reason and example (e.g., 'because' and 'for example'). Also correct grammar: 'capture pictures' → 'take pictures', 'at night'.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of tall buildings. I prefer to photograph them at night because the lights make the architecture look dramatic; for example, I like taking pictures of nearby apartment towers illuminated after sunset.

Sugestão: Be confident and precise. Start with a clear statement and give specific information: the building name, why you want to visit it, and one detail about it. Avoid uncertain language like 'maybe' unless necessary. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'which'.

Exemplo: Yes. I would like to visit a distinctive building in downtown Mississauga called the Zigzag Building. I want to see its unique façade up close because it has an unusual design and is one of the tallest buildings in the area.

Sugestão: Give a concise direct answer and include one or two specific reasons with linking words. Remove hesitations and redundant phrases. Correct grammar (e.g., 'see how houses, shops and restaurants look from above').

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I enjoy the panoramic views from above. For example, from a high floor I could see how houses, shops and restaurants look like tiny models, which I find fascinating.

× apparently I'm living in a Canada and you know, there are many tall and highest buildings in Canada.

✓ apparently I'm living in Canada and there are many tall buildings there.

Use of the definite article 'a' before country names is incorrect; most country names do not take an article. 'the highest' is superlative and redundant with 'many tall'; use 'tall' or 'tallest' correctly. Also avoid repeating 'in Canada'. Suggestion: remove the article before 'Canada', keep 'tall buildings', and avoid repeating location. (Grammar problem type ID:22)

× I like, prefer to live nearby, uh, tall buildings because I love to uh, to see the view at the night.

✓ I prefer to live near tall buildings because I love to see the view at night.

'Prefer' already expresses preference so 'like, prefer' is redundant. Use 'near' rather than 'nearby' before a noun phrase. Article 'the' before 'night' is unnecessary when speaking about nights in general. Suggestion: use 'prefer to live near tall buildings' and 'at night' or 'at night' without 'the'. (Grammar problem type ID:14)

× So nearby my home, there is a small Town Center.

✓ So near my home, there is a small town center.

Word order 'nearby my home' is natural but 'near my home' is clearer. 'Town Center' should not be capitalized unless it's a proper name. 'There is' is acceptable here but capitalization and word choice corrected. (Grammar problem type ID:3)

× So I usually prefer to capture a pictures in the night because the, uh, because in the, in the some like, umm, I'm talking about the, uh, the apartments, apartments building.

✓ So I usually prefer to take pictures at night because in some apartment buildings the lights are beautiful.

'Capture a pictures' mixes singular and plural; use 'take pictures' or 'capture a picture'. 'In the night' should be 'at night'. 'Some' should come before the noun without 'the'. 'Apartments building' is incorrect; use 'apartment buildings' or 'apartment building'. Suggestion: 'take pictures at night in some apartment buildings'. (Grammar problem type ID:1)

× So at this in some apartments, there's.

✓ So in some of these apartments, there are nice views.

The original is an incomplete sentence ending with 'there's.' It lacks a subject complement. Use a complete clause: 'there are nice views' or 'there's interesting lighting'. Ensure subject-verb agreement with plural 'apartments'. (Grammar problem type ID:26)

× I'm living near, umm, Mississauga downtown that is Tier 1.

✓ I live near Mississauga downtown, which is a Tier 1 area.

Use present simple 'I live' for permanent location rather than 'I'm living'. 'Mississauga downtown' doesn't need a comma before it; add 'which is a Tier 1 area' to explain. Include the article 'a' before 'Tier 1 area'. (Grammar problem type ID:22)

× So there is a, some, uh, there is A1 building. Uh, it's, it's named as zigzag building.

✓ There is an A1 building. It's called the Zigzag Building.

Remove filler words. Use the article 'an' before 'A1' because it begins with a vowel sound. Use 'called' rather than 'named as'. Capitalize proper name 'Zigzag Building' and include the definite article if it's a known building. Suggestion: 'It's called the Zigzag Building.' (Grammar problem type ID:13)

× Maybe, I'm not sure about this, but it may be called zigzag.

✓ Maybe—I'm not sure—but it may be called the Zigzag Building.

Add 'the' when referring to a specific building name and capitalize the proper noun. The original lacks the article and consistent naming. Use clearer punctuation and phrasing. (Grammar problem type ID:12)

× So, uh, that, that, that, uh, that building is the highest building, uh.

✓ That building is the tallest.

Redundant phrasing removed. Use 'tallest' rather than 'the highest building' for conciseness. 'Highest' and 'tallest' are close; 'tallest' is more natural for buildings. Avoid filler words. (Grammar problem type ID:25)

× Uh yes I love to live in a tall building because I want to see the view from the top of the building like how the uh, how the small house is, houses, small shops, store, restaurant look like umm.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I want to see the view from the top and see how small houses, shops, and restaurants look.

Use 'would like' or 'want' consistently for preference; original mixes tenses and has redundant 'how the uh, how the'. Use plural nouns consistently and parallel structure: 'houses, shops, and restaurants'. Remove filler words. Also use 'see how' once rather than repeating. Ensure clarity and fluent word order. (Grammar problem type ID:6)

× So I would like to live in the tallest building in my future umm actually.

✓ I would like to live in the tallest building in the future.

'In my future' is incorrect; use 'in the future'. 'Would like' expresses future desire, so keep that. Remove 'actually' and filler words. The superlative 'the tallest building' is fine if intended. (Grammar problem type ID:7)