Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答需要更自然、结构更清晰。先用一句主题句直接回答，然后用一两句具体细节支持。避免夸张或不准确的表述（例如“everybody has 32 floors”不恰当），并注意语法和单复数。可以用连接词使表达连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, most apartment blocks in my neighborhood are about 30 stories high, which sometimes blocks the sunlight in the late afternoon.

Sugestão: 回答要更简洁自然，避免重复（如“I like I like”）并给出具体原因或比较。使用连接词（because, so, instead）来组织句子，控制总句数不超过五句。

Exemplo: Not really, I seldom photograph buildings because many of them look very similar to me. Instead, I prefer taking pictures of natural scenery, such as parks and mountains, because I find them more colorful and relaxing.

Sugestão: 回答不清晰且语法混乱。应先直接回答（Yes/No），然后说明具体想去的建筑和理由，提供细节（如观景台、设计特色）。避免中断句和重复，保持连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Taipei 101 in Taiwan because it is famous for its height and unique design. I want to go to the observation deck to enjoy panoramic city views and learn about its engineering features.

Sugestão: 表达存在语法错误和重复（例如“highs”，“in high in high space”）。应先直接回答，然后给出具体原因和选择细节（如楼层、感觉）。注意时态和句子连贯性，避免冗长。

Exemplo: No, I don't want to live in a very tall building because I'm afraid of heights. Actually, I recently bought an apartment on the 13th floor, which feels comfortable to me because it is not too high and I feel safe there.

× Yes, actually in our neighborhood there are so many tall buildings, like everybody has 32 floors and it also cover the sun from my home.

✓ Yes, actually in our neighborhood there are so many tall buildings; for example, many have 32 floors and they even block the sun from my home.

错误类型：名词单复数以及代词与先行词不一致。原句中“everybody has 32 floors”用法不当，‘everybody’指人，不应与楼层数直接搭配，应改为指代建筑的复数（many 或 many buildings）。另外“it also cover”主语与动词不一致，‘it’应改为复数代词‘they’或把动词改为单数。建议用多样表达如“many have 32 floors”并保持代词与先行词数一致。

× Umm, actually I don't like taking photos of buildings because I think they look similar and they are not charming for me.

✓ Umm, actually I don't like taking photos of buildings because I think they look similar and they aren't charming to me.

错误类型：情态/固定搭配问题与介词搭配。原句“not charming for me”搭配不自然，常用表达是“charming to me”或“appealing to me”。虽然不是情态动词直接错误，但属于固定介词搭配问题（可归入情态/用法类别）。建议记住常见形容词与介词搭配，如“charming to somebody / attractive to somebody”。

× They are not attractive because I like I like taking photos of natural scenery.

✓ They are not attractive because I like taking photos of natural scenery.

错误类型：时态及重复问题。句中重复“I like”是冗余，且原句时态为一般现在时，表达习惯是单一“I like doing something”。建议注意避免重复短语，使用简单现在时表达喜好。

× For now, I don't have for some of your days want to visit, but before I would like to visit the 101 building in Taiwan because as I heard, it's a very it's a very tall building and you can.

✓ For now, I don't have any places I want to visit soon, but previously I wanted to visit Taipei 101 in Taiwan because, as I heard, it's a very tall building and you can go to the observation deck.

错误类型：句子结构混乱与时态问题。原句“for some of your days want to visit”没有语法逻辑，且“before I would like to visit”时态与语义不匹配。建议先明确时间表达（now / soon / previously），并用正确名词（Taipei 101 或 101 building）以及补全未完成句子（you can go to the observation deck）。同时保持时态一致：现在说“目前没有想去的地方”，过去/之前用过去时或完成时。

× Not at all because I'm afraid of highs so I avoid standing in high in high space and for this time I buy a new apt. I choose the on the 13th floor for myself. It's not very high if it makes me feel safe.

✓ Not at all, because I'm afraid of heights, so I avoid standing in high places. For this move I bought a new apartment; I chose the 13th floor for myself. It's not very high and it makes me feel safe.

错误类型：介词和固定搭配使用错误、名词形式错误及时态问题。应使用固定短语“afraid of heights”（而不是 afraid of highs），“high places”表示高处。动词时态应与上下文一致：买房已完成应使用过去时“bought”，选择楼层用过去时“chose”。“apt.”应写完整“apartment”。建议记住固定搭配并使用正确的过去时形式。