Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid tense and structure errors (e.g., "what's happened" → "what is happening" or "what happens") and remove filler phrases like "somehow". Use a linking word when adding the reason (e.g., "because" or "so").

Exemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the changing scenery. For example, I like seeing local streets and parks pass by because it helps me relax and notice small details of daily life.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, and provide one concrete reason with a linking word. Remove fillers such as "uh" and use correct verb forms (e.g., "I just look around"). Add a brief example to make the answer more specific.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of scenery from a moving car because the pictures often turn out blurry. Instead, I just look around and enjoy the view; for instance, I prefer to remember a beautiful landscape rather than try to photograph it while driving.

Sugestão: Start with a concise topic sentence ("I prefer the sea") and give two specific supporting reasons using linking words ("because" / "so"). Correct grammar for verb forms ("to feel relaxed" or "to relax") and avoid repetition. Add a short example of an activity you do at the sea to make the answer vivid.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I enjoy swimming and relaxing on the beach. For example, I often spend an afternoon swimming and then relax on the sand with a cold drink, which helps me unwind completely.

× I always look out the window at the scenery when I travel by bus or car because I like to watch what's happened around and it's somehow can help me to feel a bit relaxed.

✓ I always look out the window at the scenery when I travel by bus or car because I like to watch what is happening around and it can somehow help me to feel a bit relaxed.

The phrase 'what's happened' uses past participle meaning an action completed in the past, but the speaker describes ongoing scenes during travel, so the present progressive 'what is happening' is correct (Verb + -ing form). Also 'it's somehow can help' incorrectly combines 'it' + auxiliary 'can' with 'it's'; remove 'it's' and use 'it can' for correct modal construction and word order. Suggestion: use 'what is happening' for ongoing actions and 'it can help' for correct modal verb order.

× No, I don't take any photos of the scenery outside the car window because it's not necessary for me. And uh, I just looking around and uh, it's enough to me.

✓ No, I don't take any photos of the scenery outside the car window because it's not necessary for me. And I just look around, and that's enough for me.

'I just looking around' is incorrect because after subject + auxiliary or as a main verb we need base form 'look' or present participle with auxiliary. Here simple present 'I just look around' is appropriate (Verb in the present participle form error). Also 'it's enough to me' is not natural; use 'that's enough for me.' Suggestion: use 'I just look around' and 'that's enough for me.'

× I prefer the sea instead of mountains because, uh, I like to swim and I like to spend my time lying on the beach and drinking cocktails or just lying and, uh, feel myself relaxed.

✓ I prefer the sea to the mountains because I like to swim and to spend my time lying on the beach and drinking cocktails or just lying and feeling relaxed.

Use 'prefer X to Y' not 'prefer X instead of Y' for comparing preferences (Incorrect use of prepositions). Also parallel verb forms are needed: 'I like to swim and to spend' or 'I like swimming and spending.' 'Feel myself relaxed' is unidiomatic; use 'feeling relaxed.' Suggestion: use 'prefer the sea to the mountains' and maintain parallel gerund or infinitive forms and natural phrasing like 'feeling relaxed.'