Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms, avoid repetition, and give one specific reason. Use a linking word to connect idea and keep answers to at most five sentences.

Exemplo: I don't often look out the window when I travel by bus or car. Because I usually get headaches if I focus on moving scenery, I prefer to close my eyes or sleep. For example, on long journeys I bring a neck pillow and try to rest to avoid feeling sick.

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and avoid vague words like "smoothly." Add one or two specific examples and a linking word to explain when or why you take photos.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car window. For example, I like photographing sunrises and sunsets because the light looks stunning over rice fields and beaches. Also, when I travel abroad I try to capture unique landscapes to remember each place.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use correct grammar and vocabulary. State your preference clearly, give two specific reasons using linking words, correct verb forms and avoid hesitations. Explain what "paint on water" means or use another phrase if you mean painting seascapes or swimming.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea to the mountains. Firstly, I love watching sunsets over the water because the colours reflecting on the sea are beautiful. Secondly, I enjoy painting seascapes, so the sea inspires my artwork and creativity.

× I would say sometime because I'm kinda I'm kinda gotta headaches because when I looking at something else outside the car so I try to sleep instead.

✓ I would say sometimes because I sometimes get headaches when I look at things outside the car, so I try to sleep instead.

Errors: incorrect use of '-ing' after when ('when I looking') should be simple present 'when I look' for habitual actions (Grammar problem type 8). Also 'sometime' used incorrectly; 'sometimes' is the correct adverb for frequency. 'I'm kinda I'm kinda gotta headaches' is informal and ungrammatical: 'get headaches' is correct verb phrase. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and correct adverb 'sometimes'; use 'get headaches' for experiencing pain and avoid repetition and informal fillers.

× Yeah, smoothly. I took a picture of sunrise and sunset because it's really beautiful in many different places in my country and outside of my country.

✓ Yes, I often take pictures of sunrises and sunsets because they are really beautiful in many different places in my country and abroad.

Errors: 'I took a picture' is past tense; the question asks about a habitual action so use present simple 'I take' or 'I often take' (Grammar problem type 5). 'sunrise and sunset' should be pluralized when speaking generally ('sunrises and sunsets') (Grammar problem type 1). 'it's' referring to plural should be 'they are'. 'outside of my country' is better as 'abroad' or 'outside my country' (preposition choice). Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions, pluralize general nouns, and match subject-verb agreement.

× I would say I learned staying at sea more than mountains because I think I love, uh, I love when the sun sunsets is uh, reflect on the sea and it's really beautiful.

✓ I would say I prefer staying by the sea to the mountains because I love it when the sun sets and reflects on the sea; it's really beautiful.

Errors: 'I learned staying' mixes past tense 'learned' with an activity; intended meaning is preference so use 'I prefer' (Grammar problem type 6). 'more than mountains' should be 'to the mountains' (incorrect conjunction/preposition but primary issue is tense and structure). 'when the sun sunsets is reflect' has multiple problems: 'sunsets' as a verb should be 'sets', and 'is reflect' is incorrect form — use simple present 'reflects' or restructure 'when the sun sets and reflects' (Grammar problem type 6 and 8/9). Suggestion: use 'prefer' for preferences, correct verb forms ('sets', 'reflects'), and use 'prefer A to B' structure.

× And also I love to paint on water.

✓ I also love to paint on water.

Sentence is close to correct but includes redundant 'And'. Primary issue: preposition 'on' is acceptable if meaning painting on water surface (e.g., marbling) but more common expression is 'paint on water' or 'paint water scenes' depending on meaning (Grammar problem type 11). Suggestion: remove leading 'And' for formality and ensure intended meaning is clear; if meaning painting scenes of the sea, say 'paint seascapes' or 'paint scenes of the sea'.