Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete endings. Focus on natural phrasing (e.g., "I do" rather than "I do definitely") and correct word order ("where the scenery is" → better: "the scenery").

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I often look out of the window because the passing scenery helps me relax. For example, seeing trees and open fields calms me after a busy day, and I sometimes use the time to think quietly.

Sugestão: Improve clarity and coherence. Give a clear topic sentence then one or two specific reasons with linking words. Fix grammar ("sceneries" → "scenery" or "scenic views"), avoid fillers ("you know"), and remove repetitions. If mentioning benefits, be specific (personal memories, improving photography skills).

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I often photograph the scenery because it helps me preserve memories of a trip and lets me review the views later. Also, taking pictures from moving vehicles has helped me practice framing and timing, which improves my photography skills.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use precise vocabulary. Start with a clear statement of preference, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid fillers (uh, you know) and small pronunciation/word-choice issues ("greeneries" → "greenery"; "rather than see" → "rather than the sea").

Exemplo: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the greenery and varied landscapes, which help me relax. In addition, hiking in the mountains feels stimulating and gives me a sense of achievement compared with relaxing by the sea.

× Yes, I do definitely because when you look out the window and see where is sceneries, it helps you feel relaxed and you can even enjoy the serene environment and for the moment you can even unwind from the daily stress that's going on in your head. That's why I really.

✓ Yes, I definitely do, because when you look out of the window and see the scenery, it helps you feel relaxed, and you can enjoy the serene environment; for the moment you can even unwind from the daily stress in your head. That's why I really do.

The sentence misuses plural 'sceneries' and has incorrect word order ('see where is sceneries') which reflects pronoun/reference and noun issues. Use the uncountable noun 'scenery' to refer to the view in general. Also correct pronoun/reference and add missing verb 'do' at the end to complete the thought. Suggestion: replace 'sceneries' with 'the scenery', use 'look out of the window', and include 'do' to finish the clause.

× Yes, I do as taking photos of the sceneries remote you know helps you restore the store, the memories and when you and it also helps you enjoy the moment and professionally it helps it it will improve your photographic.

✓ Yes, I do, because taking photos of the scenery helps you preserve memories and enjoy the moment; professionally, it can also improve your photography skills.

Multiple issues: 'sceneries' is incorrect — use uncountable 'scenery' (quantifier/number issue). Phrases like 'restore the store, the memories' are incorrect collocations; 'preserve memories' is correct. Redundant and repeated words removed and sentence restructured for clarity. Suggestion: use 'taking photos of the scenery' and 'preserve memories' and 'improve your photography skills'.

× I prefer mountains, uh, because, you know, I love the greeneries, the landscapes, uh, which helps me feel relaxed and still it can be stimulating for me. So, uh, rather than see, I would prefer mountains.

✓ I prefer the mountains because I love greenery and landscapes, which help me feel relaxed, and they can still be stimulating for me. So rather than the sea, I would prefer the mountains.

'Greeneries' is not standard; use uncountable 'greenery'. Agreement: 'which helps' should be 'which help' because 'greenery and landscapes' is plural. 'See' is a misspelling of 'sea' and lacks the definite article; use 'the sea' and 'the mountains' for specific comparison. Suggestion: use correct nouns ('greenery'), ensure subject-verb agreement ('help'), and use correct comparison object ('the sea').