Travelling— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms (e.g. "enjoyful" → "enjoyable"; "enjoyed" → "enjoy"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas and keep the answer under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel because I enjoy seeing new landscapes. For example, when I go to the mountains I always choose a window seat to admire the valleys and forests. This helps me relax and remember the trip.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and specific detail. Use correct noun forms and articles ("take photographs", "one of my hobbies", "Montreal" without "the"). Mention briefly when and why you take photos and provide one concrete example with a time phrase to be more precise.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photographs of scenery when I see something beautiful because I like to preserve memories. For instance, last summer I drove up a mountain near Montreal and took several pictures of the valley and sunrise to remember the view.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct preference sentence and support it with specific, coherent reasons. Avoid unclear phrases ("watcher person", "lucrative", "as it welcome more than"). Use simple vocabulary correctly ("I prefer the sea because I enjoy...", "the beaches in Goa are beautiful and relaxing"). Keep it concise and provide one concrete example with a short explanation of why you prefer it.

Exemplo: I prefer the sea because I find beaches more relaxing and I enjoy swimming and watching the waves. For example, when I visited Goa in India, I spent most days on the beach because the scenery and the calm atmosphere helped me unwind.

× Well, I enjoyed traveling a lot and I always want to explore the different parts of the world and it would be a great and enjoyful moments for me when I look out of the window and see the mesmerizing view with my open eyes.

✓ Well, I enjoy traveling a lot and I always want to explore different parts of the world, and it is a great and enjoyable moment for me when I look out of the window and see the mesmerizing view.

The original mixes past tense 'enjoyed' with present 'always want', causing a tense inconsistency. Use present tense 'enjoy' to match 'always want'. 'Enjoyful' is not a correct adjective; use 'enjoyable'. 'Moments' should be singular 'moment' to match 'it is a' construction. Remove unnecessary phrase 'with my open eyes' as it is redundant. Suggestions: keep tense consistent, use correct adjective forms, and match singular/plural with verbs and determiners.

× For instance, whenever I go to the mountains, I always choose the window seat of car or bus.

✓ For instance, whenever I go to the mountains, I always choose the window seat of the car or bus.

The noun phrases 'car' and 'bus' need the definite article 'the' in this context because you refer to a specific vehicle you are taking. Alternatively, you could say 'a car or a bus' if referring to any car or bus. Suggestion: use 'the car or bus' when talking about the vehicle you are on, or 'a car or a bus' for a generic reference.

× I'm quite fond of taking photograph whenever I feel that it is a alluring view of nature.

✓ I'm quite fond of taking photographs whenever I think it is an alluring view of nature.

'Photograph' should be plural 'photographs' when speaking generally, and 'feel that it is' is wordy; 'think it is' is more natural. The issue concerns noun form and slight tense/word-choice usage. Suggestion: use plural for general activities and prefer concise verbs like 'think'.

× It's one of my hobby to capture the memories for lifetime.

✓ It's one of my hobbies to capture memories for a lifetime.

'One of my hobby' is incorrect: use plural 'hobbies' after 'one of'. 'The memories' is unnecessary; 'capture memories' is natural. Add 'for a lifetime' to express lasting memories. Suggestion: ensure correct noun number after 'one of' and simplify noun phrases.

× For instance, last time I went to the Montreal and I was at the top of the mountain where I reached by car and I captured various photos.

✓ For instance, last time I went to Montreal I was at the top of a mountain that I reached by car, and I took various photos.

'The Montreal' incorrectly uses the definite article; city names typically omit 'the'. 'The top of the mountain where I reached by car' is awkward; use 'the top of a mountain that I reached by car'. 'Captured various photos' is unnatural; use 'took various photos'. Suggestions: omit 'the' before city names, use natural relative clauses, and prefer verbs commonly used with photos ('take').

× I'm more of a watcher person, I love going to the coastal areas.

✓ I'm more of an observant person; I love going to coastal areas.

'Watcher person' is not natural English; use 'an observant person' or 'more of a watcher' colloquially. Also replace the comma with a semicolon or period to join independent clauses correctly. 'The coastal areas' can be plural without 'the' unless referring to specific coasts. Suggestion: choose natural adjective forms and correct punctuation between clauses.

× For instance, last time when I went to India, I preferred to spend some of my days in Goa as the views of the seashores are lucrative as it welcome more than.

✓ For instance, the last time I went to India, I chose to spend some days in Goa because the views of the seashore are beautiful and welcoming.

Multiple issues: 'preferred to spend some of my days' is wordy—use 'chose to spend some days'. 'Seashores are lucrative' uses wrong adjective; 'beautiful' or 'scenic' is appropriate. 'As it welcome more than' is ungrammatical and unclear—replace with 'welcoming'. Also match plural/singular agreement: 'seashore' or 'seashores' with corresponding verbs. Suggestion: use clear adjectives for scenery, correct verb forms ('chose'), and ensure subject-verb agreement and clarity.